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« on: May 12, 2008, 10:49:23 PM »
now presenting a shero shyari game...
I will write first line end with "dil" pls. complete next line in same manner.
eg. first line...
kyon tujhe dekh ke be-tarah dhadakta hai ye dil..
second should be end with dil..
na samajh dushman kom bhi apana samjhata hai ye dil..

o.k. lets start

first line is...
kabhi ruthata hai, kabhi manata hai ye dil...




                 
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« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2008, 01:28:02 AM »
kabhi bewakt hi machal jaata hai dil
kabhi pyaar ka ijhaar jo ye na kar paya dil
aaj usi baat ka malal karta hai dil
hain jo nigaahon se dur unhe k paas hai mera dil
bekhabar hain wo mere jazbaat se par unka khyal rakhta hai mera dil
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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.
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« Reply #2 on: May 13, 2008, 07:52:59 AM »
Nice reply..
kabhi bewakt hi machal jaata hai dil
kabhi pyaar ka ijhaar jo ye na kar paya dil
aaj usi baat ka malal karta hai dil
hain jo nigaahon se dur unhe k paas hai mera dil
bekhabar hain wo mere jazbaat se par unka khyal rakhta hai mera
dil


diljale ab bhi sambhal le apana dil,
kisi hasina pe yun na loota apana dil,

 
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« Reply #3 on: May 13, 2008, 02:56:04 PM »
Wow......fab job!!! tongue3

    Bewafayon Kai Kisse Sun Kai Bhi Kayun Lagh Gaiya Yeh Dil,

         Wafaya Kar Ke Bhi Kayun Bewafao Ki Dhoonya Mein Toot Gaiya Yeh Dil....
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« Reply #4 on: May 14, 2008, 03:58:12 AM »
jab kabhi tute tumhara dil,
yad rakhana hai ek aisa bhi dil,
jo ban sakta hai tumhara rahate-dil,
apane dil ko kaho dund le ayega wo dil
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« Reply #5 on: May 14, 2008, 04:08:14 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on May 14, 2008, 03:58:12 AM
jab kabhi tute tumhara dil,
yad rakhana hai ek aisa bhi dil,
jo ban sakta hai tumhara rahate-dil,
apane dil ko kaho dund le ayega wo dil

Bekarar ji bohat hi acha likha hai aapne ..Usual Smile

Dil Joh Toot Gaye Woh Judh Nahi Paye
Yaad Aaye Woh Phir Mil Nahi paye
Khamoshi Se Na Kahe Paye
Dil Hi Dil Se Chupate Chale Gaye
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jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they
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« Reply #6 on: May 14, 2008, 08:58:57 PM »
Awesome Bekarar Ji..nd Gulab Di... tongue3

    Uska Ban Kai Or Kissi Ka Na Baan Payega Yeh Dil,
     Toot Kai Pir Kabhi Jhoor Nahin Payega Yeh Dil,
      Pir Se Mohabbat Karne Ki Nadaani Na Karega Yeh Dil...
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« Reply #7 on: May 15, 2008, 10:53:49 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on May 14, 2008, 04:08:14 AM
Bekarar ji bohat hi acha likha hai aapne ..Usual Smile

Dil Joh Toot Gaye Woh Judh Nahi Paye
Yaad Aaye Woh Phir Mil Nahi paye
Khamoshi Se Na Kahe Paye
Dil Hi Dil Se Chupate Chale Gaye

nice reply honey ji. bu it's a game and the rule is you have to finish each line with "dil"
anyway welcome to this thread
 
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« Reply #8 on: May 15, 2008, 11:35:48 AM »
Quote from: palkhi on May 14, 2008, 08:58:57 PM
Awesome Bekarar Ji..nd Gulab Di... tongue3

    Uska Ban Kai Or Kissi Ka Na Baan Payega Yeh Dil,
     Toot Kai Pir Kabhi Jhoor Nahin Payega Yeh Dil,
      Pir Se Mohabbat Karne Ki Nadaani Na Karega Yeh Dil...

mind blowing.......
zara gour farmaiye.

waqt ke marham se jood jate hain ye dil,
patjhad me bhi yahan, khil jate hain ye dil
toote hue, bikhare hue, aate hain yahan dil,
"BEKARAR" ki duniya me jode jaate hain ye dil
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« Reply #9 on: May 16, 2008, 10:20:13 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on May 15, 2008, 11:35:48 AM
mind blowing.......
zara gour farmaiye.

waqt ke marham se jood jate hain ye dil,
patjhad me bhi yahan, khil jate hain ye dil
toote hue, bikhare hue, aate hain yahan dil,
"BEKARAR" ki duniya me jode jaate hain ye dil




    Wow...........fabulousssssss

          Chaah Kar Bhi Kabhi Nahin Jood Payega Yeh Dil,
            Haar Rooz Ussi Ki Chaahath Mein Jhood Kai Pir Toot Jatha Hai Yeh Dil,
       Yeh Shareer Tho Ban CHuka Hai Kissi Or Ki Imanaath...Magar Ban Na Payega Kabhi Kissi Or Ka Yeh Dil....
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« Reply #10 on: May 22, 2008, 03:03:12 AM »
Quote from: palkhi on May 16, 2008, 10:20:13 AM
    Wow...........fabulousssssss

          Chaah Kar Bhi Kabhi Nahin Jood Payega Yeh Dil,
            Haar Rooz Ussi Ki Chaahath Mein Jhood Kai Pir Toot Jatha Hai Yeh Dil,
       Yeh Shareer Tho Ban CHuka Hai Kissi Or Ki Imanaath...Magar Ban Na Payega Kabhi Kissi Or Ka Yeh Dil....


jab se dhadkna sikha hai dil,
machalna, sisakna sikha hai dil,
tutna bhi sikha, sambhlana bhi sikha hai dil
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« Reply #11 on: May 23, 2008, 05:55:36 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on May 22, 2008, 03:03:12 AM

jab se dhadkna sikha hai dil,
machalna, sisakna sikha hai dil,
tutna bhi sikha, sambhlana bhi sikha hai dil

    Toot Kai Kithni Bhaar Sambhal Chuka hai yeh Dil,
      Kithni Bhar Merai Appno Nai Hi Thora Hai Yeh Dil,
        Kithni Bhar Parayon Nai Sumbhala Hai Yeh Dil,
          Or Kithni Bhar Tootai Ga Yeh Dil........Huh?
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« Reply #12 on: May 24, 2008, 09:38:54 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on May 15, 2008, 10:53:49 AM
nice reply honey ji. bu it's a game and the rule is you have to finish each line with "dil"
anyway welcome to this thread
 

Oh yes sorry i will look into it next time bekarar ji..Usual Smile
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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they
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« Reply #13 on: May 26, 2008, 01:03:12 PM »
Quote from: palkhi on May 23, 2008, 05:55:36 PM
    Toot Kai Kithni Bhaar Sambhal Chuka hai yeh Dil,
      Kithni Bhar Merai Appno Nai Hi Thora Hai Yeh Dil,
        Kithni Bhar Parayon Nai Sumbhala Hai Yeh Dil,
          Or Kithni Bhar Tootai Ga Yeh Dil........Huh?

Tootne ke darr se pyar karna nahi chahta hai dil
Chaha toh bahut hai, magar izhar karne se darta hai dil
Apno se jo nahi gul mila yeh dil
Gairon se kya umeed karega yeh dil..
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Har Dil Main Arman Hotey to hain
Bus koi Samjhe Zara...
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« Reply #14 on: May 27, 2008, 01:55:50 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on May 26, 2008, 01:03:12 PM
Tootne ke darr se pyar karna nahi chahta hai dil
Chaha toh bahut hai, magar izhar karne se darta hai dil
Apno se jo nahi gul mila yeh dil
Gairon se kya umeed karega yeh dil..

welcome sonia ji bahoot khoob likha hai aapne..

Palkhi ji ne to is thread me jaan dali hui hai...

pariyon ko dekh ke bahkta hai ye dil
bachchon ki tarah chahakta hai ye dil,
toota hai tootega tootata raha hai ye dil,
jante hue bhi tujhe kyun chahta hai ye dil..
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