shayri-e-vatan ya shayri-e-corruption !!!

by sarfira on February 02, 2012, 06:50:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 17, 2012, 12:38:15 AM »
ok ok..mere accdg..ye saare threads..shayari,techno..games.. ko mila k shayere vatan hai..cz it includes evythg..yoindia b to india k logon ki creation hai..to ek alag thread khol skte hain..bt name change nai..
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«Reply #16 on: February 17, 2012, 12:59:47 AM »
na ji na--mai nhi manta ki ye sb shayeri e vatan h--yha jadatar posr khumar,dard,judai aur zindgi pr hote hain--sahyeri e vatan ke naam par sab apni khundas nikalte hain bas(in my point of view only)

wese Yoindia Shayariadab wali bat pr agree hun Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: February 17, 2012, 01:14:57 AM »
shayre vatan sirf loyality ni hai ya..haan thread alag hai so v consider it as only loyality..isme sab topics hain..cz all feelings are of indians only..chahe dard ho ya bhadaas..pyar ho ya gussa..isnt it?shikwaa b to apnose hi hota hai..
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«Reply #18 on: February 17, 2012, 07:52:05 AM »
dear---aapki baaten aur soch jaraa alg hai--
par mera sawaal ye nhi tha--
aapka kehna sahi hai ki sab ek hi hai--

lekin mai sirf yahi poochna chahta hoon ki shayri e vatan ka matlab kya hai bas-??
kya iska mtlb sirf vatan ki burai aur galtiyan dikhana hi hai??

haan ya naa ye bata sakti hain to btaie!!!
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«Reply #19 on: February 18, 2012, 01:34:28 AM »
haan na nahi...xxplain karugi:)..nahi aisa to bilkul ni hai..vatan ki burai to ni honi chahiye sirf...aap to ache shayar lgte hain..aap keejiye taareefe vatan..taki thread ko iska meaning mil paaye...name ni chnge krna vrna vatan to bhul hi jaenge log..hum sacrifices hi to bhulte jaa rae hain ...
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«Reply #20 on: February 18, 2012, 01:43:44 AM »
aapne sahi bat kahi--
agree wit u dear.
wese hum koi shayr nhi hain--
par iss pr likhne ki ek kosis krunga--

wese bht samay se kuch sanzeeda likha bhi nhi humne--
ab ek kosis krenge jrur
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«Reply #21 on: February 18, 2012, 01:44:05 AM »
aapne sahi bat kahi--
agree wit u dear.
wese hum koi shayr nhi hain--
par iss pr likhne ki ek kosis krunga--

wese bht samay se kuch sanzeeda likha bhi nhi humne--
ab ek kosis krenge jrur
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«Reply #22 on: February 18, 2012, 10:24:58 PM »
Usual SmileUsual Smile...hmein yakeen hai ji aap acha likhenge...dt shud b spirit ....hamare deshh ko baut zrurat hai...Usual Smile

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«Reply #23 on: February 18, 2012, 10:48:24 PM »
shayre vatan sirf loyality ni hai ya..haan thread alag hai so v consider it as only loyality..isme sab topics hain..cz all feelings are of indians only..chahe dard ho ya bhadaas..pyar ho ya gussa..isnt it?shikwaa b to apnose hi hota hai..

bahut pyari baat kahi aapne Applause
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«Reply #24 on: February 18, 2012, 10:52:33 PM »
mujh jese desbhakton ki desh ko bht jada jrurt nhi h
mai chahe kuch bhi kahun par-desh ki burai sun nhi skta--
jo hai wo sb jante hain ki q hai--
ye bat bhi ajeeb h ki hum hi bura kaam karen aur fir khud hi burai bhi karen!!!!
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«Reply #25 on: February 18, 2012, 11:38:34 PM »
hmm...bura kaam hm isliye kr rahein hai kyuki hamaare mein patience ni rh gai hai...less ho gai hai...aur greediness b bad gai hai...bt as citizen hmein try krna chiye ki hum kam se kam bura kaam karein...desh ki burai bilkul ni sunni chiye jb tk aap sahi hain..koi ap par point out ni kr skta..haan santushti aur patience two keys hain...

Apne level pe try krna hi duty hai...

Humdum ji thnx bt achi baatein zada repeat honi chahiye...ye b sach hai...
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«Reply #26 on: February 19, 2012, 12:16:40 AM »
mera thread fir mudde se bhatakk gya !!!
mere sawaal ka sahi jawaab shayd kisi ke paas nhi

by d way than u very much aal--ki aap sbne kuch socha aur apna point of biew rakha yahan
thnx again--

mujhe lgta hai ki vatan wale topic par mera kuch sawaal karna hi meri sarfiriyat ko darshata hai--
sabke alg alg points hai

pr mera srf ek chota sa sawaal tha ki
kya shayri e vatan section me sirf corroption wale kalaam hi likhne chahie??

bas isme sab ulajh gaye Usual Smile
mai kisi kalaam ko glat nhi kah rha--sab sahi hai
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«Reply #27 on: February 19, 2012, 12:32:51 AM »
ab corruption ko challenge to country ki achi baatonse hi krni hogi..mudda yai hai...again m repeating if u wnt to hav gud feeling for thread..to apko hi pehla kadam uthana hoga...
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«Reply #28 on: February 19, 2012, 12:33:51 AM »
ab corruption ko challenge to country ki achi baatonse hi krni hogi..mudda yai hai...again m repeating if u wnt to hav gud feeling for thread..to apko hi pehla kadam uthana hoga...
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