मैं तो झोंका हूँ हवा का उड़ा ले जाऊँगा / कुमार विश्वास

by vimmi singh on October 21, 2012, 04:51:30 PM
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मैं तो झोंका हूँ हवा का उड़ा ले जाऊँगा
जागती रहना तुझे तुझसे चुरा ले जाऊँगा

हो के कदमों पे निछावर फूल ने बुत से कहा
ख़ाक में मिल के भी मैं खुश्बू बचा ले जाऊँगा

कौन सी शै मुझको पहुँचाएगी तेरे शहर तक
ये पता तो तब चलेगा जब पता ले जाऊँगा

कोशिशें मुझको मिटाने की भले हों कामयाब
मिटते-मिटते भी मैं मिटने का मजा ले जाऊँगा

शोहरतें जिनकी वजह से दोस्त दुश्मन हो गये
सब यह रह जायेंगी मैं साथ क्या ले जाऊँगा
......... by Kumar vishwas
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2012, 04:54:17 PM »
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 wah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
vimmi ji bahut khoob likha hai.......Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2012, 05:01:14 PM »
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मैं तो झोंका हूँ हवा का उड़ा ले जाऊँगा
जागती रहना तुझे तुझसे चुरा ले जाऊँगा

हो के कदमों पे निछावर फूल ने बुत से कहा
ख़ाक में मिल के भी मैं खुश्बू बचा ले जाऊँगा

कौन सी शै मुझको पहुँचाएगी तेरे शहर तक
ये पता तो तब चलेगा जब पता ले जाऊँगा

कोशिशें मुझको मिटाने की भले हों कामयाब
मिटते-मिटते भी मैं मिटने का मजा ले जाऊँगा

शोहरतें जिनकी वजह से दोस्त दुश्मन हो गये
सब यह रह जायेंगी मैं साथ क्या ले जाऊँगा


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah vimmi ji bahut achi sharing ki hai janab kumar vishwas ki
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2012, 05:05:27 PM »
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wah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
vimmi ji bahut khoob likha hai.......Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya Suresh ji........
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2012, 05:28:39 PM »
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nice, n thanx for sharing
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2012, 05:46:19 PM »
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Very very nice sharing.
thanks vimmi jee
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2012, 06:34:04 PM »
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shukriya aadil ji.........
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2012, 06:36:37 PM »
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bahut achhe, nice sharing vimmi ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 12:33:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 02:59:35 AM »
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मैं तो झोंका हूँ हवा का उड़ा ले जाऊँगा
जागती रहना तुझे तुझसे चुरा ले जाऊँगा

हो के कदमों पे निछावर फूल ने बुत से कहा
ख़ाक में मिल के भी मैं खुश्बू बचा ले जाऊँगा

कौन सी शै मुझको पहुँचाएगी तेरे शहर तक
ये पता तो तब चलेगा जब पता ले जाऊँगा

कोशिशें मुझको मिटाने की भले हों कामयाब
मिटते-मिटते भी मैं मिटने का मजा ले जाऊँगा

शोहरतें जिनकी वजह से दोस्त दुश्मन हो गये
सब यह रह जायेंगी मैं साथ क्या ले जाऊँगा
......... by Kumar vishwas
very nice sharing
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2012, 03:22:36 AM »
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very very nice sharing vimmiji
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Wah Wah Bhau Khub Likha Hain Vishwas Ji ... Thnx Vimi Ji Aapne Itni Pyar Poem Share Ki... Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2012, 05:33:23 AM »
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Nice...sharing.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2012, 09:55:42 AM »
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bahut shukriya nandbahu ji.........
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dhanywaad mkv ji..........
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