Dushyant kumar ki kriti- जाने किस—किसका ख़्याल आया है

by vimmi singh on October 13, 2012, 05:32:44 PM
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जाने किस—किसका ख़्याल आया है


जाने किस—किसका ख़्याल आया है

इस समंदर में उबाल आया है

एक बच्चा था हवा का झोंका

साफ़ पानी को खंगाल आया है

कल तो निकला था बहुत सज—धज के

आज लौटा तो निढाल आया है

हमने सोचा था जवाब आएगा

एक बेहूदा सवाल आया है
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2012, 06:44:19 PM »
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good sharing
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2012, 07:11:50 PM »
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Vimmy jee Aadaab!


bahut achchi sharing hai jee.. Thanks for
share it.. Usual Smile

keep writting ... keep posting..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2012, 07:13:44 PM »
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thank you mkv ji........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2012, 07:14:24 PM »
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shukriya parwaaz ji......... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2012, 01:01:52 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2012, 05:21:08 AM »
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जाने किस—किसका ख़्याल आया है


जाने किस—किसका ख़्याल आया है

इस समंदर में उबाल आया है

एक बच्चा था हवा का झोंका

साफ़ पानी को खंगाल आया है

कल तो निकला था बहुत सज—धज के

आज लौटा तो निढाल आया है

हमने सोचा था जवाब आएगा

एक बेहूदा सवाल आया है


waaaaaahhhh  Applause Applause Applause

vimmi jee I really like your collection. do share many more. love to read them all  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2012, 07:07:32 PM »
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shukriya saini sir ji........... Usual Smile
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waaaaaahhhh  Applause Applause Applause

vimmi jee I really like your collection. do share many more. love to read them all  Usual Smile


hausla badhaane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Suman ji.........   happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2012, 05:37:47 AM »
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wah wah, thanx for sharing
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2012, 12:20:29 PM »
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shukriya nandbahu ji....... Usual Smile
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