करती है धुन परेशां मुझको साज़ से ..

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कब तक रुके रहोगे रस्मो रिवाज़ से ..
पास खींच लाउंगा तुझको आवाज़ से ..

एक बार बोल दे जो तुझे वास्ता नहीं ..
ख्वाबों से भी मिटा दूँ तुझको आज से ..

हर सुर कटे हुए हैं हर ताल बेमज़ा ..
करती है धुन परेशां मुझको साज़ से ..

यूँ तो मोहब्बत में दिलबर हुआ खुदा ..
कैसे कहूँ खुदा मैं तुझको नाज़ से ..

वो करते रहे तगाफुल हम पाते रहे सज़ा ..
दुनिया लगे है ग़ाफिल "मुसाहिब" को आज से ..

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Kab Tak Ruke Rahoge Rsmo RiwaaZ se  ..
Paas Khinch Laungaa Tujhko AwaaZ se ..

Ek Baar Bol De Jo Tujhe Wasta NahiN..
Khwaabon Se Bhi Mita DU Tujhko AaaZ se ..

Har Sur Kate Hue Hai Har Taal BemaaZa..
Karti Hai Dhun Paresha Mujhko SaaZ se ..

Yun To Mohabbat Me Dilbar Hua Khudaa..
Kaise Kahun Khuda Mai Tujhko NaaZ se ..

Wo Karte Rahe Tagaful Ham Paate Rahe SaaZa..
Duniya Lage Hai Ghaafil "Musaahib" Ko AaaZ se ..
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2013, 04:16:54 PM »
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कब तक रुके रहोगे रस्मो riwaaj से .. Usual Smile Usual Smile
पास खींच लाउंगा तुझको आवाज़ से ..

एक बार बोल दे जो तुझे वास्ता नहीं ..
ख्वाबों से भी मिटा दूँ तुझको आज से ..

हर सुर कटे हुए हैं हर ताल बेमज़ा ..
करती है धुन परेशां मुझको साज़ से ..

यूँ तो मोहब्बत में दिलबर हुआ खुदा ..
कैसे कहूँ खुदा मैं तुझको नाज़ से ..

वो करते रहे तगाफुल हम पाते रहे सज़ा ..
दुनिया लगे है ग़ाफिल "मुसाहिब" को आज से ..

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Kab Tak Ruke Rahoge Rsmo Riwaaj se  ..
Paas Khinch Laungaa Tujhko AwaaZ se ..

Ek Baar Bol De Jo Tujhe Wasta NahiN..
Khwaabon Se Bhi Mita DU Tujhko AaaZ se ..

Har Sur Kate Hue Hai Har Taal BemaaZa..
Karti Hai Dhun Paresha Mujhko SaaZ se ..

Yun To Mohabbat Me Dilbar Hua Khudaa..
Kaise Kahun Khuda Mai Tujhko NaaZ se ..

Wo Karte Rahe Tagaful Ham Paate Rahe SaaZa..
Duniya Lage Hai Ghaafil "Musaahib" Ko AaaZ se ..



bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2013, 04:50:16 PM »
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AApki shayari kamaal lagti hain jo bhi likhte hoon apne andaz se

Hum aap ko susarjit karte hain Shayaro ke Taj se
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2013, 05:08:25 PM »
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AApki shayari kamaal lagti hain jo bhi likhte hoon apne andaz se

Hum aap ko susarjit karte hain Shayaro ke Taj se


Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaaad Varun Jee.....
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2013, 05:43:00 PM »
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 Applause
 bahut khoob , musahib ji.
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2013, 05:59:41 PM »
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Applause
 bahut khoob , musahib ji.

Shukriyaa Sir...
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2013, 07:26:05 PM »
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Nice  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2013, 07:52:07 PM »
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Nice  Applause  Applause

Thanks..
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2013, 08:45:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob Musaahib Jee.
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2013, 10:53:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob Musaahib Jee.

Shukriya janab..
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2013, 12:25:36 AM »
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 कब तक रुके रहोगे रस्मो रिवाज़ से ..
पास खींच लाउंगा तुझको आवाज़ से ..
एक बार बोल दे जो तुझे वास्ता नहीं ..
 ख्वाबों से भी मिटा दूँ तुझको आज से ..
हर सुर कटे हुए हैं हर ताल बेमज़ा ..
 करती है धुन परेशां मुझको साज़ से ..
यूँ तो मोहब्बत में दिलबर हुआ खुदा ..
 कैसे कहूँ खुदा मैं तुझको नाज़ से ..
 वो करते रहे तगाफुल हम पाते रहे सज़ा ..
दुनिया लगे है ग़ाफिल "मुसाहिब" को आज से ..
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,wah very nice.
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2013, 12:28:47 AM »
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bahut umda kalam likha hai aapne. bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2013, 02:32:18 PM »
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 Applause
         Applause
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                           Applause  very nice
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