कहीं चुप हुआ है अभी, अब्र रो कर!

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तुम्हारा, अगर, मैं रहूँगा न हो कर :
शफ़क़ रोज़ गुजरेगी पलकें भिगो कर!

हवा, सिसकियों से भरी, बह रही है;
कहीं चुप हुआ है अभी, अब्र रो कर!

नहीं जानता, मैं कहाँ जा रहा हूँ :
रहे  इश्क़ को मोतियों में पिरोकर ?

कहीं खार हैं, तो कहीं रेगो पत्थर :  
सियह है रवां : हर लम्हे एक ठोकर!  

शफ़क़ की नई रोशनी है मुखातिब :
उठोगे न क्या आज, ताहश्र सो कर?

न जाने उतारेगा कब पैरहन यह,
'अबद ': लोग हाज़िर हैं मुँह-हाथ धो कर?

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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2013, 10:39:26 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2013, 10:49:15 PM »
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हवा, सिसकियों से भरी, बह रही है;
कहीं चुप हुआ है अभी, अब्र रो कर!

नहीं जानता, मैं कहाँ जा रहा हूँ :
रहे  इश्क़ को मोतियों में पिरोकर ?
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तुम्हारा, अगर, मैं रहूँगा न हो कर :
शफ़क़ रोज़ गुजरेगी पलकें भिगो कर!

हवा, सिसकियों से भरी, बह रही है;
कहीं चुप हुआ है अभी, अब्र रो कर!

नहीं जानता, मैं कहाँ जा रहा हूँ :
रहे  इश्क़ को मोतियों में पिरोकर ?

कहीं खार हैं, तो कहीं रेगो पत्थर : 
सियह है रवां: हर लम्हे एक ठोकर! 

शफ़क़ की नई रोशनी है मुखातिब :
उठोगे न क्या आज, ताहश्र सो कर?

न जाने उतारेगा कब पैरहन यह,
'अबद ': लोग हाज़िर हैं मुँह-हाथ धो कर?

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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2013, 02:24:08 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2013, 02:25:32 AM »
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तुम्हारा, अगर, मैं रहूँगा न हो कर :
शफ़क़ रोज़ गुजरेगी पलकें भिगो कर!

हवा, सिसकियों से भरी, बह रही है;
कहीं चुप हुआ है अभी, अब्र रो कर!

नहीं जानता, मैं कहाँ जा रहा हूँ :
रहे  इश्क़ को मोतियों में पिरोकर ?

कहीं खार हैं, तो कहीं रेगो पत्थर : 
सियह है रवां: हर लम्हे एक ठोकर! 

शफ़क़ की नई रोशनी है मुखातिब :
उठोगे न क्या आज, ताहश्र सो कर?

न जाने उतारेगा कब पैरहन यह,
'अबद ': लोग हाज़िर हैं मुँह-हाथ धो कर?

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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2013, 08:39:10 PM »
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हवा, सिसकियों से भरी, बह रही है;
कहीं चुप हुआ है अभी, अब्र रो कर!

नहीं जानता, मैं कहाँ जा रहा हूँ :
रहे  इश्क़ को मोतियों में पिरोकर ?
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