ग़ज़ल किस तरह होगी ज़िंदगी की

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ग़ज़ल किस तरह होगी ज़िंदगी की
कही हम से गई दिल की न जी की.

हमारी अक़्ल पर पत्थर पडे थे,
जो हम ने जात चुन ली आदमी की.

तुम्हारे ही लिए पैदा हुए हम,
मुरादें कर लो पूरी रहबरी की.

न लहजा नम न आँखें ही भिगोईं,
बहे वो बाढ में सूखी नदी की.

अंधेरा क्यों चराग़ों के तले है,
ख़बर तो लो ज़रा इस रौशनी की.

सभी प्रश्नों के मिल जाएंगे उत्तर,
ज़रूरत है ज़रा संजीदगी की.

चुराया था यक़ीनन शब ने सूरज
जमानत हो गई पर चोरनी की.

ये माना कोइ तेरी इक न माने,
“परम” तूने भी कब मानी किसी की.

“परम”
१९/०८/२०१४
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2014, 01:28:09 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2014, 02:24:18 PM »
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Param Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut umdaa janab bahut khoob kafi gehre aur pur asar ashaar kaheN haiN aapne...

Behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam huyi hai is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

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bahut bahut khub paramji.....

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ग़ज़ल किस तरह होगी ज़िंदगी की
कही हम से गई दिल की न जी की.

हमारी अक़्ल पर पत्थर पडे थे,
जो हम ने जात चुन ली आदमी की.

तुम्हारे ही लिए पैदा हुए हम,
मुरादें कर लो पूरी रहबरी की.

न लहजा नम न आँखें ही भिगोईं,
बहे वो बाढ में सूखी नदी की.

अंधेरा क्यों चराग़ों के तले है,
ख़बर तो लो ज़रा इस रौशनी की.

सभी प्रश्नों के मिल जाएंगे उत्तर,
ज़रूरत है ज़रा संजीदगी की.

चुराया था यक़ीनन शब ने सूरज
जमानत हो गई पर चोरनी की.

ये माना कोइ तेरी इक न माने,
“परम” तूने भी कब मानी किसी की.

“परम”
१९/०८/२०१४


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