गुज़री है रात कैसे, सबसे कहेंगी आँखें......सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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गुज़री है रात कैसे सबसे कहेंगी आँखें
शरमा के ख़ुद से ख़ुद ही यारों झुकेंगी आँखें
guzree hai raat kaise sabse kaheNgee aaNkheN
sharma ke khud se khud hee yaaroN jhukeNgee aaNkheN

ओ यार मेरे मुझको तस्वीर अपनी दे जा
तन्हाइयों में उससे बातें करेंगी आँखें
oH yaar mere mujhko tasweer apni de jaa
tanhaaiyoN meN us se baateN kareNgee aaNkheN

उसने कहा था मुझसे परदेस जाने वाले
जब तक न आएगा तू रस्ता तकेंगी आँखें
us ne kaha tha mujhse pardes jaane waale
jab tak na aayega too rasta takeNgee aaNkheN

होठों की मेरे कलियाँ कब तक नहीं खिलेंगी
अश्के लहू से आखिर कब तक रचेंगी आँखें
hothoN kee mere kaliyaaN kab tak naheeN khileNgee
ashk-e-lahoo se aakhir kab tak racheNgee aaNkheN
 
तू भी 'रक़ीब' सो जा होने को है सवेरा
वरना हथेली दिन भर मलती रहेंगी आँखें
too bhi 'Raqeeb' so ja hone ko hai savera
warnaa hathelee din bhar malti raheNgee aaNkheN

              ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2011, 05:53:42 PM »
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गुज़री है रात कैसे सबसे कहेंगी आँखें
शरमा के ख़ुद से ख़ुद ही यारों झुकेंगी आँखें
guzree hai raat kaise sabse kaheNgee aaNkheN
sharma ke khud se khud hee yaaroN jhukeNgee aaNkheN

ओ यार मेरे मुझको तस्वीर अपनी दे जा
तन्हाइयों में उससे बातें करेंगी आँखें
oH yaar mere mujhko tasweer apni de jaa
tanhaaiyoN meN us se baateN kareNgee aaNkheN

उसने कहा था मुझसे परदेस जाने वाले
जब तक न आएगा तू रस्ता तकेंगी आँखें
us ne kaha tha mujhse pardes jaane waale
jab tak na aayega too rasta takeNgee aaNkheN

होठों की मेरे कलियाँ कब तक नहीं खिलेंगी
अश्के लहू से आखिर कब तक रचेंगी आँखें
hothoN kee mere kaliyaaN kab tak naheeN khileNgee
ashk-e-lahoo se aakhir kab tak racheNgee aaNkheN
 
तू भी 'रक़ीब' सो जा होने को है सवेरा
वरना हथेली दिन भर मलती रहेंगी आँखें
too bhi 'Raqeeb' so ja hone ko hai savera
warnaa hathelee din bhar malti raheNgee aaNkheN

              ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



BEHTREEN GHAZAL RAQEEB SAHAB


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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2011, 06:50:53 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2011, 09:51:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob,Raqeeb saheb.Bahut  khoobsurat ghazal se nawaaza.Khas taur se 2re sher aur maqte ka jawaab nahiin.HASAN
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2011, 10:14:15 PM »
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 Wah! Raqeeb Saheb. Bahut Khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2011, 10:27:49 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2011, 04:51:39 PM »
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Sheba Ji,

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya

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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2011, 01:35:22 PM »
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sksaini4 Ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya mere ek koshish
ko padhne, pasand karne aur bimaari ke
baawjood turant jawaab dene ke liye.

Take care of your health first.

Regards,

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Jawaab dene aur ghazal pasand karne ka
bahut bahut shukriya...Raqeeb Lucknowi

Bahut khoob,Raqeeb saheb.Bahut  khoobsurat ghazal se nawaaza.Khas taur se 2re sher aur maqte ka jawaab nahiin.HASAN
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usha rajesh ji,

            aadaab,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #10 on: September 10, 2011, 02:21:10 PM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Ek baar fir se shukriya..

Raqeeb

 
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Bahut Khoob Satish Ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2011, 02:49:16 PM »
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गुज़री है रात कैसे सबसे कहेंगी आँखें
शरमा के ख़ुद से ख़ुद ही यारों झुकेंगी आँखें
guzree hai raat kaise sabse kaheNgee aaNkheN
sharma ke khud se khud hee yaaroN jhukeNgee aaNkheN

ओ यार मेरे मुझको तस्वीर अपनी दे जा
तन्हाइयों में उससे बातें करेंगी आँखें
oH yaar mere mujhko tasweer apni de jaa
tanhaaiyoN meN us se baateN kareNgee aaNkheN

उसने कहा था मुझसे परदेस जाने वाले
जब तक न आएगा तू रस्ता तकेंगी आँखें
us ne kaha tha mujhse pardes jaane waale
jab tak na aayega too rasta takeNgee aaNkheN

होठों की मेरे कलियाँ कब तक नहीं खिलेंगी
अश्के लहू से आखिर कब तक रचेंगी आँखें
hothoN kee mere kaliyaaN kab tak naheeN khileNgee
ashk-e-lahoo se aakhir kab tak racheNgee aaNkheN
 
तू भी 'रक़ीब' सो जा होने को है सवेरा
वरना हथेली दिन भर मलती रहेंगी आँखें
too bhi 'Raqeeb' so ja hone ko hai savera
warnaa hathelee din bhar malti raheNgee aaNkheN

              ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2011, 02:51:14 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2011, 05:09:04 PM »
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Dil Shah Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriy....

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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2011, 05:17:17 PM »
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qalb sahab,

Thanks a lot for
reply...

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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