जलने से जादा जलाती है मोहब्बत ...

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on October 29, 2013, 04:55:48 PM
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ये कहने कि बातें है याद आयेंगे आप ...
ये लम्हा गुजरते ही भूल जायेंगे आप ...

अब बस भी करो यूँ नज़रों से खेलना ..
शायर और कितनो को बनायेंगे आप ...

जलने से जादा जलाती है मोहब्बत ...
ये बात किस किस को बतायेंगे आप ...

आप हो तो ग़ज़ल खुद लबों पर चले आते ...
हो के दूर हमसे कितना रुलायेंगे आप ...

नया है ज़माना दिल भी बदल गए हैं यहाँ ...
पुराने दिल कहानी कब तक सुनायेंगे आप ...

जिस दिन "मुसाहिब" ने मुकम्मल ग़ज़ल लिख दी ...
हो के बेचैन बहुत मुझतक चले आयेंगे आप ...

Ye Kahne Ki BateiN haiN Yaad AayeNge Aap..
Ye Lamha Gujarte Hi Bhool JayeNge Aap..

Ab bas bhi karo YuN NazroN se KhelNaa ..
Shayar or Kitno Ko BanayeNge Aap ...

Jalne Se Jyada Jalati Hai Mohabbat ...
Ye Baat Kis Kis Ko BatayeNge Aap ...

Aap Ho To Ghazal Khud LaboN Par Chale Aate ...
Ho Ke Dur Humse Kitnaa Rulayenge Aap ....

Naya Hai Zamana Dil Bhi Badal Gaye HaiN YahaN ...
PuraaNe Dil Ki Kahani Kab Tak SunayeNge Aap ...

Jis Din "Mussahib" Ne Mukammal Ghazal Likh Di...
Ho ke Bechain Bahut Mujhtak Chale AayeNge Aap ...

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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 05:44:33 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 06:59:05 PM »
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BEAUTIFULLLL......
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 07:15:52 PM »
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waah waah bahut badhiya ...
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 07:41:11 PM »
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Bishwajeet Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade umdaa khayaaloN ko behad khoob lafz diye haiN aapne ... sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab...

YeH quoted ashaar hume behad khoob lage... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...




Jalne Se Jyada Jalati Hai Mohabbat ...
Ye Baat Kis Kis Ko BatayeNge Aap ...

Aap Ho To Ghazal Khud LaboN Par Chale Aate ...
Ho Ke Dur Humse Kitnaa Rulayenge Aap ....

Jis Din "Mussahib" Ne Mukammal Ghazal Likh Di...
Ho ke Bechain Bahut Mujhtak Chale AayeNge Aap ...


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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 07:48:21 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
Dhanyawaad Sir..
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2013, 07:49:07 PM »
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BEAUTIFULLLL......
Thanks Suman Ji...
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2013, 07:53:09 PM »
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waah waah bahut badhiya ...
Thanks Gaytri Ji...
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2013, 07:53:57 PM »
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Bishwajeet Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade umdaa khayaaloN ko behad khoob lafz diye haiN aapne ... sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab...

YeH quoted ashaar hume behad khoob lage... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Bahut Bahut shukriyaa Parwaaz ji,,,,
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2013, 09:12:33 PM »
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Waaaaaah Musaahib ji... kya kehne... bahut bahut bahut hi pyaari peshkash.. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye.. dheron dheron daaaaaad..


Ye Kahne Ki BateiN haiN Yaad AayeNge Aap..
Ye Lamha Gujarte Hi Bhool JayeNge Aap..

Ab bas bhi karo YuN NazroN se KhelNaa ..
Shayar or Kitno Ko BanayeNge Aap ...

Jalne Se Jyada Jalati Hai Mohabbat ...
Ye Baat Kis Kis Ko BatayeNge Aap ...

Aap Ho To Ghazal Khud LaboN Par Chale Aate ...
Ho Ke Dur Humse Kitnaa Rulayenge Aap ....

Naya Hai Zamana Dil Bhi Badal Gaye HaiN YahaN ...
PuraaNe Dil Ki Kahani Kab Tak SunayeNge Aap ...

Jis Din "Mussahib" Ne Mukammal Ghazal Likh Di...
Ho ke Bechain Bahut Mujhtak Chale AayeNge Aap ...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2013, 09:28:07 PM »
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bahot khooooob, dheron daaaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2013, 11:03:23 PM »
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ये कहने कि बातें है याद आयेंगे आप ...
ये लम्हा गुजरते ही भूल जायेंगे आप ...

अब बस भी करो यूँ नज़रों से खेलना ..
शायर और कितनो को बनायेंगे आप ...

जलने से जादा जलाती है मोहब्बत ...
ये बात किस किस को बतायेंगे आप ...

आप हो तो ग़ज़ल खुद लबों पर चले आते ...
हो के दूर हमसे कितना रुलायेंगे आप ...

नया है ज़माना दिल भी बदल गए हैं यहाँ ...
पुराने दिल कहानी कब तक सुनायेंगे आप ...

जिस दिन "मुसाहिब" ने मुकम्मल ग़ज़ल लिख दी ...
हो के बेचैन बहुत मुझतक चले आयेंगे आप ...

Ye Kahne Ki BateiN haiN Yaad AayeNge Aap..
Ye Lamha Gujarte Hi Bhool JayeNge Aap..

Ab bas bhi karo YuN NazroN se KhelNaa ..
Shayar or Kitno Ko BanayeNge Aap ...

Jalne Se Jyada Jalati Hai Mohabbat ...
Ye Baat Kis Kis Ko BatayeNge Aap ...

Aap Ho To Ghazal Khud LaboN Par Chale Aate ...
Ho Ke Dur Humse Kitnaa Rulayenge Aap ....

Naya Hai Zamana Dil Bhi Badal Gaye HaiN YahaN ...
PuraaNe Dil Ki Kahani Kab Tak SunayeNge Aap ...

Jis Din "Mussahib" Ne Mukammal Ghazal Likh Di...
Ho ke Bechain Bahut Mujhtak Chale AayeNge Aap ...



very nice,sir
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2013, 12:14:39 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Bishwajeet ji, kyaa kehne, ek dum jaanlewaa, maar hi daalaa hai aapne apne is rachnaa se humein, bahut achche sarkaar....!!!
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Waaaaaah Musaahib ji... kya kehne... bahut bahut bahut hi pyaari peshkash.. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye.. dheron dheron daaaaaad..


Ye Kahne Ki BateiN haiN Yaad AayeNge Aap..
Ye Lamha Gujarte Hi Bhool JayeNge Aap..

Ab bas bhi karo YuN NazroN se KhelNaa ..
Shayar or Kitno Ko BanayeNge Aap ...

Jalne Se Jyada Jalati Hai Mohabbat ...
Ye Baat Kis Kis Ko BatayeNge Aap ...

Aap Ho To Ghazal Khud LaboN Par Chale Aate ...
Ho Ke Dur Humse Kitnaa Rulayenge Aap ....

Naya Hai Zamana Dil Bhi Badal Gaye HaiN YahaN ...
PuraaNe Dil Ki Kahani Kab Tak SunayeNge Aap ...

Jis Din "Mussahib" Ne Mukammal Ghazal Likh Di...
Ho ke Bechain Bahut Mujhtak Chale AayeNge Aap ...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Bahut Shukriyaa Aqsh Ji,,,
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bahut bahut Shukriyaa Iqtedar Ji...
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