तन्हा रह जायेगा आजमा कर के ...

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«Reply #15 on: November 08, 2013, 01:14:36 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob
Thanks a lot Sir....
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«Reply #16 on: November 08, 2013, 01:15:12 AM »
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रिश्तों में इतनी मुतालबा कर के ...
तन्हा रह जायेगा आजमा कर के ...

आना होता तो बताकर जाते ...
कुछ न होगा याद बारहा कर के ...

Ye Do Bahut Achchey Lage Sahab Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab
Shukriyaa Janab....
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«Reply #17 on: November 08, 2013, 01:16:00 AM »
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Aana Hotaa To Batakar Jaate ...
Kuch Na Hogaa Yaad Barhaa Kar ke...

Bas Isi Darr se MaiN Na Pita HuN ...
Mukar Jaungaa Waayde Wafa Kar ke...

"Musaahib"  Tum Hi agaaz Karo...
Duri Ghategi Nisbat Me Izaafa Kar ke...


wwwwwaaaaahhhhhh ..... aap ki ghazal behad pasand aayee Musaahib ji .... Dheron daad qabool karein !!!

Shukriyaa Zarra Ji...
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«Reply #18 on: November 08, 2013, 01:17:08 AM »
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Aana Hotaa To Batakar Jaate ...
Kuch Na Hogaa Yaad Barhaa Kar ke

waaaahhhhhh

Is Mahine To Waqt Par Aao ...
Jhuth NahiN Bolte HaiN Rozaa Kar ke...

bahot khooooobbb

Manaa Ki Mahaz Shauk Tha Tera ....
Kyaa Milaa Mujhkoo YuN Khafa Kar ke

bahot acche.. likhte rahiye...


Sidra

Shukriyaa Sidra Ji....
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«Reply #19 on: November 08, 2013, 01:17:51 AM »
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रिश्तों में इतनी मुतालबा कर के ...
तन्हा रह जायेगा आजमा कर के ...

आना होता तो बताकर जाते ...
कुछ न होगा याद बारहा कर के ...

इस महीने तो वक़्त पर आओ ...
झूठ नहीं बोलते हैं रोज़ा कर के ...

बस इसी डर से मैं न पीता हूँ ...
मुकर जाऊँगा वायदे वफ़ा कर के ...

माना कि ये महज़ शौक था तेरा ..
क्या मिला मुझको यूँ खफा कर के ...

साँसे थी तो तरसे नाचार बहुत...
मर गए तो भेजेंगे सजा कर के ...

"मुसाहिब" तुम ही आगाज़ करो ...
दूरी घटेगी निस्बत में इज़ाफ़ा कर के ...

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मुतालबा  - demand, निस्बत - relation

wah wahhhh bahut hi accha likha hai aapne bishwajeet sb. daad daad daad
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«Reply #20 on: November 08, 2013, 01:19:14 AM »
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wah wahhhh bahut hi accha likha hai aapne bishwajeet sb. daad daad daad
bahut bahut Shukriyaa Maám...
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«Reply #21 on: November 08, 2013, 01:25:03 AM »
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रिश्तों में इतनी मुतालबा कर के ...
तन्हा रह जायेगा आजमा कर के ...

आना होता तो बताकर जाते ...
कुछ न होगा याद बारहा कर के ...

इस महीने तो वक़्त पर आओ ...
झूठ नहीं बोलते हैं रोज़ा कर के ...

बस इसी डर से मैं न पीता हूँ ...
मुकर जाऊँगा वायदे वफ़ा कर के ...

माना कि ये महज़ शौक था तेरा ..
क्या मिला मुझको यूँ खफा कर के ...

साँसे थी तो तरसे नाचार बहुत...
मर गए तो भेजेंगे सजा कर के ...

"मुसाहिब" तुम ही आगाज़ करो ...
दूरी घटेगी निस्बत में इज़ाफ़ा कर के ...

RishtoN me Itni Mutaalbaa Kar ke...
Tanhaa Rah Jayegaa Aazmaa Kar ke...

Aana Hotaa To Batakar Jaate ...
Kuch Na Hogaa Yaad Barhaa Kar ke...

Is Mahine To Waqt Par Aao ...
Jhuth NahiN Bolte HaiN Rozaa Kar ke...

Bas Isi Darr se MaiN Na Pita HuN ...
Mukar Jaungaa Waayde Wafa Kar ke...

Manaa Ki Mahaz Shauk Tha Tera ....
Kyaa Milaa Mujhkoo YuN Khafa Kar ke...

Saanse Thi To Tarse Nachaar Bahut...
Mar Gaye To Bhejenge Saja Kar ke...

"Musaahib"  Tum Hi agaaz Karo...
Duri Ghategi Nisbat Me Izaafa Kar ke...


मुतालबा  - demand, निस्बत - relation

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: November 08, 2013, 02:00:50 AM »
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Bishwajeet Jee Aadaab....!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad khoob aur behad laa jawaab kalaam kahi hai aapne gazab ke umdaa khayaalaat ko khoobsurat lafzoN meiN kalambaNd kiya hai janab...

Har sher qabil e daad hai ... behad khoob janab lajawaab ...
Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #23 on: November 08, 2013, 02:40:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

RishtoN me Itni Mutaalbaa Kar ke...
Tanhaa Rah Jayegaa Aazmaa Kar ke...

Aana Hotaa To Batakar Jaate ...
Kuch Na Hogaa Yaad Barhaa Kar ke...

Is Mahine To Waqt Par Aao ...
Jhuth NahiN Bolte HaiN Rozaa Kar ke...

Bas Isi Darr se MaiN Na Pita HuN ...
Mukar Jaungaa Waayde Wafa Kar ke...

Manaa Ki Mahaz Shauk Tha Tera ....
Kyaa Milaa Mujhkoo YuN Khafa Kar ke...

Saanse Thi To Tarse Nachaar Bahut...
Mar Gaye To Bhejenge Saja Kar ke...

"Musaahib"  Tum Hi agaaz Karo...
Duri Ghategi Nisbat Me Izaafa Kar ke...
 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Kya kahooooooon bishwajeet sirf waaaaah hi waaaaaaah... dilse hazaron daad qubool kariye..
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«Reply #24 on: November 08, 2013, 03:19:26 AM »
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माना कि ये महज़ शौक था तेरा ..
क्या मिला मुझको यूँ खफा कर के ...

Bahut badhiya Musahib saheb
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«Reply #25 on: November 08, 2013, 03:58:58 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut hi khoob Musahib jee, likhte rahiye aate rahiye.
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«Reply #26 on: November 08, 2013, 04:26:04 AM »
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bahut khoob Musaahib ji .
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«Reply #27 on: November 08, 2013, 07:19:39 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriyaa Bechain Sahab..
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«Reply #28 on: November 08, 2013, 07:20:35 PM »
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Bishwajeet Jee Aadaab....!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad khoob aur behad laa jawaab kalaam kahi hai aapne gazab ke umdaa khayaalaat ko khoobsurat lafzoN meiN kalambaNd kiya hai janab...

Har sher qabil e daad hai ... behad khoob janab lajawaab ...
Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Shukriyaa Parwaaz Sahab, bahut bahut shukriyaa..
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«Reply #29 on: November 08, 2013, 07:21:41 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

RishtoN me Itni Mutaalbaa Kar ke...
Tanhaa Rah Jayegaa Aazmaa Kar ke...

Aana Hotaa To Batakar Jaate ...
Kuch Na Hogaa Yaad Barhaa Kar ke...

Is Mahine To Waqt Par Aao ...
Jhuth NahiN Bolte HaiN Rozaa Kar ke...

Bas Isi Darr se MaiN Na Pita HuN ...
Mukar Jaungaa Waayde Wafa Kar ke...

Manaa Ki Mahaz Shauk Tha Tera ....
Kyaa Milaa Mujhkoo YuN Khafa Kar ke...

Saanse Thi To Tarse Nachaar Bahut...
Mar Gaye To Bhejenge Saja Kar ke...

"Musaahib"  Tum Hi agaaz Karo...
Duri Ghategi Nisbat Me Izaafa Kar ke...
 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Kya kahooooooon bishwajeet sirf waaaaah hi waaaaaaah... dilse hazaron daad qubool kariye..
Shukriyaa Maam, kuch na kho ji bas aapki daad or hauslaaafzaii bahut hai is nachiiz ke liye...
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