रात बनकर ग़ज़ल है हुई चांदनी ...

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मेरी ग़ज़ल ही मेरी आबरू है ..

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कौन कहता है चाँद से हुई चांदनी ...
वो बेपर्दा हैं आये हुई चांदनी ...

कुछ ऐसा हुआ मुस्कुरा वो दिए ...
होंठ जैसे हिले तो हुई चांदनी ...

रात काजल सी आँखों में ढलने लगी ...
उनकी पलकें उठी तो हुई चांदनी ...

दूर कितना था मैं रात गमगीन थी ...
याद आयी जो उनकी हुई चांदनी ..

दूर जब वो रहे रात काली लगी ...
वो बाँहों में आये हुई चांदनी ..

वो आये जो महफ़िल में चलते हुए ...
कदम चूमा जमीं ने हुई चांदनी ....

कुछ कहने लगे वो ग़ज़ल पर मेरे ..
मोती झरने लगे और हुई चांदनी ...

वो जो जाने लगे रात ढलने लगी ...
हाथ मैंने जो थामा हुई चांदनी ...

"मुसाहिब" समझ ही न पाया कि कब ...
रात बनकर ग़ज़ल है हुई चांदनी ...


KauN Kahtaa HaiN Chand Se Huii ChandNii..
Wo beoardaa HaiN aaye Huii ChandNii...

Kuch Aisa Huaa Muskuraa Wo Diye..
Honth Jaise Hile To Huii ChandNii...

Raat Kazal Si AankhoN me Dhalne Lagii..
Unkii PalkeiN Uthi To Huii ChandNii...

Dur Kitna Tha MaiN Raat GamgiiN Thii..
Yaad Aayi Jo Unkii Huii ChandNii...

Dur Jab Wo Rahe Raat Kaalii Lagii...
Wo Bahon me Aaye Huii ChandNii...

Wo Aaye Jo Mahfil Me Chalte Hue..
Kadam Chumaa ZamiN ne Huii ChandNii...

Kuch Kahne Lage Wo Ghazal Par Mere ...
Moti Jharne Lage or Huii ChandNii...

Wo Jaane Lage Raat Dhalne Lagii..
Hath Maine Jo Thama Huii ChandNii...

"Musaahib" Samajh Hi Na Paya Ki Kab...
Raat Bankar Ghazal Hai Huii ChandNii...
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2013, 11:07:21 PM »
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दूर कितना था मैं रात गमगीन थी ...
याद आयी जो उनकी हुई चांदनी ..

Khub Sahab Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2013, 11:11:37 PM »
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waah waah bishwajeet sahab..

Behad khoobsurat adayegi..

Pasand aayi ye ghazal aapki..

Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2013, 11:14:15 PM »
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Dur Kitna Tha MaiN Raat GamgiiN Thii..
Yaad Aayi Jo Unkii Huii ChandNii...

Dur Jab Wo Rahe Raat Kaalii Lagii...
Wo Bahon me Aaye Huii ChandNii...

Beautifulll.. bahot umda likha hai aapne..   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2013, 12:29:02 AM »
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waaahhhhh............ kyaa jazbaat hain

likhte rahiye

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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2013, 12:35:01 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2013, 01:06:51 AM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह....क्या बात है....बहुत खूब.....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद.....

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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2013, 02:09:15 AM »
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कौन कहता है चाँद से हुई चांदनी ...
वो बेपर्दा हैं आये हुई चांदनी ...

कुछ ऐसा हुआ मुस्कुरा वो दिए ...
होंठ जैसे हिले तो हुई चांदनी ...

रात काजल सी आँखों में ढलने लगी ...
उनकी पलकें उठी तो हुई चांदनी ...

दूर कितना था मैं रात गमगीन थी ...
याद आयी जो उनकी हुई चांदनी ..

दूर जब वो रहे रात काली लगी ...
वो बाँहों में आये हुई चांदनी ..

वो आये जो महफ़िल में चलते हुए ...
कदम चूमा जमीं ने हुई चांदनी ....

कुछ कहने लगे वो ग़ज़ल पर मेरे ..
मोती झरने लगे और हुई चांदनी ...

वो जो जाने लगे रात ढलने लगी ...
हाथ मैंने जो थामा हुई चांदनी ...

"मुसाहिब" समझ ही न पाया कि कब ...
रात बनकर ग़ज़ल है हुई चांदनी ...


KauN Kahtaa HaiN Chand Se Huii ChandNii..
Wo beoardaa HaiN aaye Huii ChandNii...

Kuch Aisa Huaa Muskuraa Wo Diye..
Honth Jaise Hile To Huii ChandNii...

Raat Kazal Si AankhoN me Dhalne Lagii..
Unkii PalkeiN Uthi To Huii ChandNii...

Dur Kitna Tha MaiN Raat GamgiiN Thii..
Yaad Aayi Jo Unkii Huii ChandNii...

Dur Jab Wo Rahe Raat Kaalii Lagii...
Wo Bahon me Aaye Huii ChandNii...

Wo Aaye Jo Mahfil Me Chalte Hue..
Kadam Chumaa ZamiN ne Huii ChandNii...

Kuch Kahne Lage Wo Ghazal Par Mere ...
Moti Jharne Lage or Huii ChandNii...

Wo Jaane Lage Raat Dhalne Lagii..
Hath Maine Jo Thama Huii ChandNii...

"Musaahib" Samajh Hi Na Paya Ki Kab...
Raat Bankar Ghazal Hai Huii ChandNii...



nice ,sir what a definition narrated about  CHANDNI 
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2013, 02:10:53 AM »
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vry nice ghazal. bahut c daad
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