रौशनी के भरम उसने पाले बहुत

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रौशनी के भरम उसने पाले बहुत
कर लिये  उसने घर में उजाले बहुत !!

आ गए सामने ये अलग बात है
ज़ख़्म इस दिल के मैंने सम्भाले  बहुत !!

मै ही थी जिसने हर दर्द को पी लिया
दोस्तों ने तो क़िस्सों  में ढाले बहुत !!

अपनी बस्ती में ऐसे भी इंसान है,
तन के उजाले बहुत, मनं के काले बहुत !!

हर कदम पर मगर सामने आ गए,
ज़िन्दगी के सवालात टाले बहुत !!

सिर्फ मुझ सा कोई मिलेंगा नहीं,
तुमको मिल जायेंगे मिलने वाले बहुत !!
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2012, 09:43:50 PM »
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Suman ji aap ne bahut acha likha hai....hamari shubhkamnayain sawikar kijiye...
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2012, 09:52:57 PM »
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रौशनी के भरम उसने पाले बहुत
कर लिये  उसने घर में उजाले बहुत !!

आ गए सामने ये अलग बात है
ज़ख़्म इस दिल के मैंने सम्भाले  बहुत !!

मै ही थी जिसने हर दर्द को पी लिया
दोस्तों ने तो क़िस्सों  में ढाले बहुत !!

अपनी बस्ती में ऐसे भी इंसान है,
तन के उजाले बहुत, मनं के काले बहुत !!

हर कदम पर मगर सामने आ गए,
ज़िन्दगी के सवालात टाले बहुत !!

सिर्फ मुझ सा कोई मिलेंगा नहीं,
तुमको मिल जायेंगे मिलने वाले बहुत !!

Very very very very beautifullllllllll
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2012, 11:45:35 PM »
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padhte padhte bas ek hi lafz jehan me bar bar aa raha tha,..

WAAH... Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2012, 11:59:07 PM »
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रौशनी के भरम उसने पाले बहुत
कर लिये  उसने घर में उजाले बहुत !!

आ गए सामने ये अलग बात है
ज़ख़्म इस दिल के मैंने सम्भाले  बहुत !!

मै ही थी जिसने हर दर्द को पी लिया
दोस्तों ने तो क़िस्सों  में ढाले बहुत !!

अपनी बस्ती में ऐसे भी इंसान है,
तन के उजाले बहुत, मनं के काले बहुत !!

हर कदम पर मगर सामने आ गए,
ज़िन्दगी के सवालात टाले बहुत !!

सिर्फ मुझ सा कोई मिलेंगा नहीं,
तुमको मिल जायेंगे मिलने वाले बहुत !!


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                  miley bazm sey mujhey nikaalney waaley bahut.!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2012, 01:42:28 AM »
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veryyyyyyy............nice Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2012, 10:08:41 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Suman Ji Har Ashar Lajawab Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2012, 11:55:58 AM »
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Very Nice.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2012, 03:39:28 PM »
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Bahut umda..
Jabardast ghazal hai..gahre ashaar
Applause  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 13, 2012, 11:16:11 AM »
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suman ji bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2012, 12:20:03 PM »
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Ji Bhaut Bhaut Sunder................. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2012, 10:03:59 PM »
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Suman ji aap ne bahut acha likha hai....hamari shubhkamnayain sawikar kijiye...
bahut bahut shukriya gaytri jee
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Very very very very beautifullllllllll

thanks for the comments masoom jee
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padhte padhte bas ek hi lafz jehan me bar bar aa raha tha,..

WAAH... Applause Applause
shukriya Touhid jee
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2012, 10:06:30 PM »
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Barhiya Intekhaab  Suman Ji... Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

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