Apni aankhoN meiN, kisi aur ko basa na dena............................Aqsh

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«Reply #15 on: June 15, 2013, 09:30:43 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Aqsh ji,Its very beautiful and emotional ghazal.Khaas taur per ye do sher lazawaab lage-

Jidhar bhi dekhoon, bas tumko hi paaoN main
Nazar aa jaaye mera aks, woh aaina na dena

Raah-e-ulfat meiN chal padhe hai mere qadam
Ya rab manzil se pahele “Aqsh” ko qaza na dena

Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #16 on: June 15, 2013, 10:38:37 PM »
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Quote from: Miru;;;; on June 15, 2013, 04:21:51 PM
BAHU BAHUT KHOOB...!!
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thnx miruji a lot.
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«Reply #17 on: June 15, 2013, 10:46:30 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on June 15, 2013, 04:55:04 PM
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Aqsh Ji Its Just Beautiful....Khaas Taur Par yeh 3 ashaar..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Choote Hain..


Tera khwaab, teri chahat, teri aarzoo hooN main
Mujhe zindagi meiN kabhi, bhula na dena

Hadd se jyaada, bas tumhi ko chaha hai
Pal bhar bhi hum juda ho, aisi saza na dena

Jidhar bhi dekhoon, bas tumko hi paaoN main
Nazar aa jaaye mera aks, woh aaina na dena


Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
housla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.
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«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2013, 10:51:44 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on June 15, 2013, 05:20:30 PM
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behad khoobsurat ghazal ki peshkash ki hai aqsh jee..dhero daad..happy9

khaskar ye aashar bahut pasand aaye

Hadd se jyaada, bas tumhi ko chaha hai
Pal bhar bhi hum juda ho, aisi saza na dena

Muntazir hai meri aankhein, tere deedar ko
Raat bhar jaga kar, inhe thaka na dena

Jidhar bhi dekhoon, bas tumko hi paaoN main
Nazar aa jaaye mera aks, woh aaina na dena

thnx a lot nashwaniji.
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«Reply #19 on: June 16, 2013, 12:27:44 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on June 15, 2013, 01:35:56 PM
Apni aankhoN meiN, kisi aur ko basa na dena
Mere siwa kisi aur ko, apni wafa na dena

Tera khwaab, teri chahat, teri aarzoo hooN main
Mujhe zindagi meiN kabhi, bhula na dena

Hadd se jyaada, bas tumhi ko chaha hai
Pal bhar bhi hum juda ho, aisi saza na dena

Tumse bichadkar, jeena na aayega humein
Hum mar jaayenge, kabhi daga na dena

Muntazir hai meri aankhein, tere deedar ko
Raat bhar jaga kar, inhe thaka na dena

Jidhar bhi dekhoon, bas tumko hi paaoN main
Nazar aa jaaye mera aks, woh aaina na dena

Raah-e-ulfat meiN chal padhe hai mere qadam
Ya rab manzil se pahele “Aqsh” ko qaza na dena


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: June 16, 2013, 01:14:24 AM »
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Quote from: Saavan on June 15, 2013, 05:46:46 PM
No words to say dear..
cery nice. keep it up.
thnx saavanji
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2013, 01:15:24 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on June 15, 2013, 06:42:15 PM
WAAH WAAH AQSH JI KYA KHOOB BAYANI KI HAI JAZBAATON KI

ZABARDAST!!!!
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thnx a lot sahal.
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«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2013, 01:16:25 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 15, 2013, 08:54:10 PM
Raah-e-ulfat meiN chal padhe hai mere qadam
Ya rab manzil se pahele “Aqsh” ko qaza na dena

sabse behatreen..

thnx a lot mukeshji.
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«Reply #23 on: June 16, 2013, 01:29:24 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 15, 2013, 09:30:43 PM
love9 love9 love9 love9 love9 love9
Wah,Wah,Wah Aqsh ji,Its very beautiful and emotional ghazal.Khaas taur per ye do sher lazawaab lage-

Jidhar bhi dekhoon, bas tumko hi paaoN main
Nazar aa jaaye mera aks, woh aaina na denay

Raah-e-ulfat meiN chal padhe hai mere qadam
Ya rab manzil se pahele “Aqsh” ko qaza na dena

Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

thnx sudhirji a lot.
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«Reply #24 on: June 16, 2013, 03:44:57 AM »
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bahut achha likha hai! awesome!
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«Reply #25 on: June 16, 2013, 11:48:54 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 16, 2013, 12:27:44 AM
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thnx adilji.
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«Reply #26 on: June 16, 2013, 03:06:15 PM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on June 16, 2013, 03:44:57 AM
bahut achha likha hai! awesome!
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thnx kaashji.
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«Reply #27 on: June 17, 2013, 06:05:17 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on June 15, 2013, 01:35:56 PM
Apni aankhoN meiN, kisi aur ko basa na lena
Mere siwa kisi aur ko, apni wafa na dena

Tera khwaab, teri chahat, teri aarzoo hooN main
Mujhe zindagi meiN kabhi, bhula na dena

Hadd se zyaada, bas tumhi ko chaha hai
Pal bhar bhi hum juda ho, aisi saza na dena

Tumse bichadkar, jeena na aayega humein
Hum mar jaayenge, kabhi daga na dena

Muntazir hai meri aankhein, tere deedar ko
Raat bhar jaga kar, inhe thaka na dena

Jidhar bhi dekhoon, bas tumko hi paaoN main
Nazar aa jaaye mera aks, woh aaina na dena
this sher is not clear to me ,ma'am

Raah-e-ulfat meiN chal padhe hain mere qadam
Ya rab manzil se pahele “Aqsh” ko qaza na dena


nice,ma'am
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«Reply #28 on: June 17, 2013, 07:07:08 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hee khoobsoorat dheron daad aur mubarak baad
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«Reply #29 on: June 17, 2013, 09:56:48 PM »
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