Ashq behte rahe....................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on January 21, 2013, 04:24:58 AM

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«Reply #30 on: January 21, 2013, 11:32:01 AM »

Quote from: azad mishra on January 21, 2013, 10:45:55 AM

bahoot khoob aqshji

thnx azad mishra jee


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Re: Ashq behte rahe....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #31 on: January 21, 2013, 02:06:45 PM »


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«Reply #32 on: January 21, 2013, 03:07:05 PM »

nice keep it up


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«Reply #33 on: January 22, 2013, 01:21:06 PM »

Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut khoob, bahut achhi koshish, aur haaN apne meiN confidence jagaane ki zarurat hai, baaqi aap agar Saini Jee ke saannidhya meiN haiN to wo dheere dheere sikha hi denge.


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«Reply #34 on: January 23, 2013, 05:34:24 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 21, 2013, 02:06:45 PM

thank you hriday jee


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«Reply #35 on: January 23, 2013, 05:34:54 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on January 21, 2013, 03:07:05 PM

nice keep it up

thank you soooooo much saini sir.it means to me


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«Reply #36 on: January 23, 2013, 05:35:27 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 22, 2013, 01:21:06 PM

Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut khoob, bahut achhi koshish, aur haaN apne meiN confidence jagaane ki zarurat hai, baaqi aap agar Saini Jee ke saannidhya meiN haiN to wo dheere dheere sikha hi denge.

thank you so so so sooooooooooo much ifthakar jee


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Re: Ashq behte rahe....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #37 on: January 23, 2013, 05:24:57 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 21, 2013, 04:24:58 AM

Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat bhar, ashq behte rahe
Tum hame, yaad aate rahe

Aaj tanha, hui zindagi
Tum hame yun, rulaate rahe

Lootkar roshni, pyaar ki
Tum hame yun, jalaate rahe

Toot kar rah gayi, saans sab
Tum hame yun, mitaate rahe

Chod kar jo, chale tum gaye
Bas hame yaad, aate rahe

achchcha likha hai Applause


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«Reply #38 on: January 24, 2013, 12:28:46 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on January 23, 2013, 05:24:57 PM

achchcha likha hai Applause

thnx adil jee


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«Reply #39 on: January 24, 2013, 03:51:43 PM »

very nice


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«Reply #40 on: January 25, 2013, 06:10:58 AM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on January 24, 2013, 03:51:43 PM

very nice

thanks livingbytheday


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«Reply #41 on: January 25, 2013, 06:34:08 PM »

Appreciable effort.


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«Reply #42 on: January 27, 2013, 10:27:41 AM »

Quote from: mkv on January 25, 2013, 06:34:08 PM

Appreciable effort.

thank you sooooooooooooooo much mukesh jee


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