*Gazal*>>> Roja

by Roja on May 09, 2007, 08:10:49 PM
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angel4u
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«Reply #15 on: August 18, 2007, 01:05:04 AM »
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wonderful roja,
each and every word is heart touching..
lovely.
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syednaami
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«Reply #16 on: August 16, 2008, 11:56:31 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 15, 2007, 09:42:42 PM
Jab-jab berta is dunia ko
Tab-tab maine dhoka khaya
Jis pyale main amrit samjha
Us pyale main hii vish paya   :cry:

Rangee.n thi dunia ki kasmein
Dilkash they dunia ke wadein
Par waqt pe sab jhoote nikhle
Kuch kaam nahi koyee aaya  :cry:

Mai Pyar khojthi firthi thi
Manav ki aankhon main, Dil main
Joh aankhein mili pattar ki mili
Jo Dil paya pattar paya..  :cry:

Yeh dunia chalti hai aise
Sab akhal dhari reh jaati hai
Maya ki maya se badkar
Maine payee iski maya   sad5

Mat poocho haqikat dunia ki
"Roja" jaankar kya legi?
Utni iski niyat khoti
Jitni sundar iski kaya..  sad5

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Frankly, all your ghazals are amazing and perfect sense to melt down heart.
But the quoted one is really astouding superb and presenting a social issue in such an inteleect way. Bravo!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: August 16, 2008, 12:06:49 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 14, 2007, 07:26:48 AM
Ek Aur Gazal >>>>> Roja

Kyu aankhon main aasoo aaye?
Yeh math poocho toh accha hai
Kaise-kaise dhokha khaye?
Yeh math poocho toh accha hai..!!

Kyu upvan main jee gabrata?
Kyu darpan se mann darta hai?
Kyu Chaunkate apne saaye?
Yeh math Poocho toh accha hai..!!

Kin kayalon main hum khoye they?
Kya apne mann main aaya tha?
Kyu baite-baite muskaye?
Yeh math poocho toh accha hai..!!

Kyu apno ko humne choda?
Kyu apno se naata toda?
Kyu begane hai apnaye?
Yeh math poocho toh accha hai..!!

Jeevan ber saath nibhane ki
Joh kasmain khate they,
Ve kitna saath nibha paye?
Yeh math poocho toh accha hai..!!

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waise to sabhi ghazals acchi hain par ismein kuch khaas baat hai roja ji
kya hai yeh lafzon mein nahin bataya ja sakta
yeh mat poocho to accha hai ...!!!
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Roja
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«Reply #18 on: August 25, 2008, 08:21:40 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on August 18, 2007, 01:05:04 AM
wonderful roja,
each and every word is heart touching..
lovely.

Thank you angel dear
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Roja
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«Reply #19 on: August 25, 2008, 08:24:04 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on August 16, 2008, 11:56:31 AM
Frankly, all your ghazals are amazing and perfect sense to melt down heart.
But the quoted one is really astouding superb and presenting a social issue in such an inteleect way. Bravo!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Syed Naami sb aapne hamara likha pasand kiya aur hame kitna accha laga..... kitna accha laga, yeh na poocho toh accha hai..!!
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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: August 25, 2008, 08:24:58 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on August 16, 2008, 12:06:49 PM
waise to sabhi ghazals acchi hain par ismein kuch khaas baat hai roja ji
kya hai yeh lafzon mein nahin bataya ja sakta
yeh mat poocho to accha hai ...!!!

Thank you very much diya dear.
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Roja
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«Reply #21 on: August 25, 2008, 08:34:31 PM »
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Yeh safar aag ka pair hai mom ke
Hum chale bhi toh kaise chale kuch kaho !

Her taraf aandhiyan ghar mein toofan hai,
Hum jale bhi toh kaise jale kuch kaho !

Jhad toh mausam ke ghar mein hai girvi padi
Hum fhale bhi toh kaise fhale kuch kaho !

Bhook ke gaov mein pyass ki chat tale
Hum pale bhi toh kaise pale kuch kaho !

Khud ko chalna katin ab swayam ko yahan
Hum chale bhi toh kaise chale kuch kaho !

Aa gaye aapke dwar ab bin kahe
Hum tale bhi toh kaise tale kuch kaho !
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syednaami
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«Reply #22 on: August 26, 2008, 12:03:08 PM »
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Roja jee, Aap ki yeh nazam bhi bahut badhiya hai.
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Roja
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«Reply #23 on: August 26, 2008, 10:35:40 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on August 26, 2008, 12:03:08 PM
Roja jee, Aap ki yeh nazam bhi bahut badhiya hai.

Bahut bahut shukhriya Syed ji..
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syednaami
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«Reply #24 on: October 12, 2008, 08:31:21 PM »
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Aage bhi kuchh likhen Roja jee, aajkal aap jaisi ghazalen bilkul dastiyaab nahin. Baraah-e-karam mazeed qalambandi karte rahiye.
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dead heart
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«Reply #25 on: October 12, 2008, 11:34:32 PM »
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jo tere ghar ke chakar laga kar thak gaya;woh main nahin toh kaun hai,
teri tariffon ke phool bandne wala;woh main nahin toh kaun hai...

jisne tere liye khud ka dil kurban kar dia woh main nahin toh kaun hai,
jisse tune juthe pyar ke vaade kiye the woh main toh kaun hai...



isse zada nahin likh sakte hai roja ji...atleast ap jitna acha likti hai utna nahin...nice one
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dead heart
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«Reply #26 on: October 12, 2008, 11:43:47 PM »
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dil ke apke pas aur jee rahe hai hum,
ab agey kaise jeeye kuch kaho!

dard apne diya aur seh rahe hai hum,
kaise sahe hum yeh dard kuch kaho!

pyar apse kiya aur ap hi hume dokha degaye,
iss dokhe ko pyar ka tofa samjhe ya nafrat ki aag kuch kaho!

dil toh nahin dia apne par inkaar ka thapad mara apne,
apse pyar karna apni bhool samjhoon ya apko mere pyar ke layak nahin kuch kaho!
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syednaami
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«Reply #27 on: October 13, 2008, 01:57:50 AM »
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Good ones lively heart.
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dead heart
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«Reply #28 on: October 14, 2008, 12:01:51 AM »
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ohh thnx syed ji
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honeyrose
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«Reply #29 on: October 15, 2008, 12:07:06 AM »
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Super Roja good lines... Applause

Very nice lines heart ... Applause
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