ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai,....... -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: March 29, 2014, 06:23:18 PM »

Salam vb g
Bohat bohat our bohat shuqria tafseeli repky ke liye..
G maine apne naqis ilm ke hisab se behr ekhafeef ko in alfaz men dhalne k liye chuna ..
Lekin iski defination ko aap ne byan kiya darust our mukamal byan kiya hai aap ne ...islah hamesha ghalatiyon pe di jati hai jahan ghalatee ho gee islah ka pehloo b wahin pe nikalta hai our tanqeed bara e islaah bohat ahmiyat rakhti hai is siksile mein......
Maine points note kr liye hain
In shaa allah agli baar behr e khafeef ke in pehloo ko samne rakh ker kuch behter likhne ki koshish ho gee youn b apke lessons meri nigah se nhi guzre ye meri laailmee hai...well aik baar phir iss lesson ke liye shukr guzar hun...is uumeed ke sath aapki taraf se tanqeed baraye islah ke lessons milte rahen gen .........


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Re: ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai,.......

«Reply #16 on: March 30, 2014, 03:51:43 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on March 28, 2014, 05:23:15 PM

2 1 2 2, 2 2 1 2, 2 1 2 2
uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai

bas uusee kee hee saamne sar jhukaaya
pyaa.r men dil kee her ebaadat ajab hai

khaa.b tootey aaNkhon ke to hum ne jaana
dar.d kee dil men ek hararat ajab hai

saath meiire rehte ho ek um.r se par
jo maiN souchun toh yeh rafaaqat ajab hai

bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...

aankh se dil men roo.h mei n yun hai utra
ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai

,laaiba shah,

uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai

bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...

aankh se dil men roo.h mei n yun hai utra
ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai

WAAH WAAH LAAIBA JEE ,BEHTEREEN GHAZAL AUR UMDA BAYANI KEE HAI APNE

YE ASHAAR BEHAD PASAND AYE HAIN DHERON DAAD

EK RAU KI HAQDAAR GHAZAL .

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Re: ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai,.......

«Reply #17 on: March 30, 2014, 05:33:59 PM »

Bohat bohat shuqria sahal aapkaa .


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Re: ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai,.......

«Reply #18 on: March 30, 2014, 07:01:17 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on March 28, 2014, 05:23:15 PM

I Literally Loved It...

Laaiba Jee Bahut Hi Khoobsurat...Har Lafz mein Anmol Ehsaas Bhare Hue..

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khooooooob....

uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai

saath meiire rehte ho ek um.r se par
jo maiN souchun toh yeh rafaaqat ajab hai

bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...


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Re: ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai,.......

«Reply #19 on: March 30, 2014, 10:37:20 PM »

Beautiful !! waaah


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