Kah Na Paye Lab / कह न पाए लब....... Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: August 25, 2014, 06:49:30 AM »
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waah Satish ji . Khubsurat ghazal kahi hai .

Dili Mubarakbaad qubool kijye.

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Hasan Sahib.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #16 on: August 25, 2014, 10:16:08 AM »
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waah waah kyaa kahne satish ji dheron daad

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Saini Sahib.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #17 on: August 25, 2014, 10:34:31 AM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
is ghazal ne purane dinon ki yaad dila thi..
kuch khaas ghazlen hamesha dimaag men rahti hain..ye unmen se khaas hai.
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«Reply #18 on: August 26, 2014, 04:43:37 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Janaab, dheron daad.
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Bahut shukriya.....surindran Ji.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #19 on: August 26, 2014, 07:10:43 AM »
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क्या कहने भाई सतीश शुक्ला जी, मेरे पास तो शब्द ही नहीं बचे। 
बहुत ही उम्दा ग़ज़ल, हजारों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद कुबूल फरमायें।

"दिल में 'रक़ीब' खोट थी शायद इसीलिए
इज़हारे इश्क़ करते हुए थरथराए लब" ...........!! 

Aapki mohabbaton ka bahut shukriya drpandey ji.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #20 on: August 26, 2014, 09:34:45 AM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
is ghazal ne purane dinon ki yaad dila thi..
kuch khaas ghazlen hamesha dimaag men rahti hain..ye unmen se khaas hai.

Aapki mohabbaton ka bahut shukriya....Chiragh Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #21 on: September 09, 2014, 12:23:50 PM »
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आँखों ने कह दिया जो कभी कह न पाए लब
हालाँकि उस ने बारहा अपने हिलाए लब

चेहरे से जब नक़ाब हवा ने उलट दिया
देखा मुझे तो दाँत से उसने दबाए लब

मेरी तलाश पूरी हुई देखकर उसे
आँखों से आँखें चार हुईं मुस्कुराए लब

रूदादे-ग़म सुनाऊँ तो किसको सुनाऊँ मैं ?
इज़हारे ग़म को यूँ तो बहुत तिलमिलाए लब

अश्कों का एक दरिया मिला रेगज़ार में
संजीदगी की धुन पे बहुत गुनगुनाए लब

लाली लगा के होंठ पे चमकी लगाई जब
तारों भरे गगन की तरह झिलमिलाए लब

दिल में 'रक़ीब' खोट थी शायद इसीलिए
इज़हारे इश्क़ करते हुए थरथराए लब

Aankhon ne kah diya jo kabhi kah na paaye lab
Haalaanki us ne baarhaa apne hilaaye lab
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard mohabbt ke muamle mein aakhein khoob saath deti hain!
Chehre se jab naqaab hawa ne ulat diya
Dekha mujhe to daant se us ne dabaaye lab
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))haan ji aisa hota hai!
Meree talaash poori huyee dekhkar use
Aankhon se aankhen chaar huyeen muskraaye lab
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))kitni ghalatfahmi rahti hai logo.n ko ALLAH raham kare!
Roodaade gham sunaaun to kisko sunaaun main
Izhaare gham ko yoon to bahut tilmilaaye lab
jo daastaa.n hum ne sunaayee.n to aap kyon ro diye . icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Ashkon ka ek dariya mila regzaar men
Sanjeedagi ki dhun pe bahut gungunaaye lab
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Laali laga ke honth pe chamki lagaayi jab
Taaron bhare gagan ki tarah jhilmilaaye lab
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Dil men ‘Raqeeb’ khot thi shaayad iseeliye
Izhaare ishq karte huye thartharaaye lab
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--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



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«Reply #22 on: September 10, 2014, 12:30:06 PM »
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wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Nazre inaayat aur alag andaz se comment ka bahut shukriya ... baghair aapke comments ke meri post adhoori rah jati hai....

Raqeeb
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«Reply #23 on: September 10, 2014, 12:48:30 PM »
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 wonderful satish ji
deron 2 daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad kubool karein
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

आँखों ने कह दिया जो कभी कह न पाए लब
हालाँकि उस ने बारहा अपने हिलाए लब

चेहरे से जब नक़ाब हवा ने उलट दिया
देखा मुझे तो दाँत से उसने दबाए लब

मेरी तलाश पूरी हुई देखकर उसे
आँखों से आँखें चार हुईं मुस्कुराए लब

रूदादे-ग़म सुनाऊँ तो किसको सुनाऊँ मैं ?
इज़हारे ग़म को यूँ तो बहुत तिलमिलाए लब

अश्कों का एक दरिया मिला रेगज़ार में
संजीदगी की धुन पे बहुत गुनगुनाए लब

लाली लगा के होंठ पे चमकी लगाई जब
तारों भरे गगन की तरह झिलमिलाए लब

दिल में 'रक़ीब' खोट थी शायद इसीलिए
इज़हारे इश्क़ करते हुए थरथराए लब

Aankhon ne kah diya jo kabhi kah na paaye lab
Haalaanki us ne baarhaa apne hilaaye lab

Chehre se jab naqaab hawa ne ulat diya
Dekha mujhe to daant se us ne dabaaye lab

Meree talaash poori huyee dekhkar use
Aankhon se aankhen chaar huyeen muskraaye lab

Roodaade gham sunaaun to kisko sunaaun main
Izhaare gham ko yoon to bahut tilmilaaye lab

Ashkon ka ek dariya mila regzaar men
Sanjeedagi ki dhun pe bahut gungunaaye lab

Laali laga ke honth pe chamki lagaayi jab
Taaron bhare gagan ki tarah jhilmilaaye lab

Dil men ‘Raqeeb’ khot thi shaayad iseeliye
Izhaare ishq karte huye thartharaaye lab

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #24 on: September 10, 2014, 12:58:00 PM »
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wonderful satish ji
deron 2 daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad kubool karein
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...

Mohtarma Suresh Sangwan Ji.... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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