Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: December 11, 2012, 11:33:05 AM »

waah, bahut umda baaten hain..khaas kar ye sher.."aapse ho to kareN hamse to hoga na shumaar, ujle dil kitne yahaaN aur hain kaale kitne" kaafi gahraai liye hue hai"...
meri jaanib se bahut si daad or mubarakbad!


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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #31 on: December 11, 2012, 11:41:08 AM »

Arun Mishra Ji,

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya
bahut dino ke baad aana ho paya YO par
is darmiyaan kaafee kuchh padhne se mahroom
rah gaya...fursat miltey hi padhoonga...

Saadar,

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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #32 on: December 12, 2012, 05:01:52 AM »

vimmi singh ji,

ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya...

Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #33 on: December 12, 2012, 07:27:23 AM »

Aarish Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya....aap sab
ahbaab ki hausala afzai aur achchha
kahne ke liye prerit karti hai...

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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #34 on: December 12, 2012, 09:45:31 AM »

aqsh Sahab,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka bahut
bahut shukriya....

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«Reply #35 on: December 12, 2012, 11:30:14 AM »

ParwaaZ Sahab....Aadab,

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya
aapka jawab padhkar yaqeenan bahut khushi
hoti hai aur in dino kuchh masroofiyat ziyaada
rahti hai fir bhi jo bhi waqt milta hai..adab
ki khidmat kar leta hoon....

Ham se to kya ho sakta hai bas jo gaib ki aamad
ho jaatee hai toota-foota pesh kar deta hoon taake
aap sab ahbaab se nisbat bani rahe...

Ek baar fir se bahut bahut shukriya...

Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #36 on: December 12, 2012, 08:22:07 PM »

Quote from: Satish Shukla on December 09, 2012, 07:52:46 AM

लाखों अरमान थे काग़ज़ पे निकाले कितने
खूने-दिल से जो लिखे ख़त वो संभाले कितने
oh , wo saare khutut tumne khoon se likhe the. main to bus laal rung samjh baithi thi. maaf karna sabhi ko phir se collect kar ke rakhoon gi yahaan wahaan rakh diye the miane. choo chorry. maauf kar do na baba Embarrased

आपसे हो तो करें, हम से तो होगा न शुमार
उजले दिल कितने यहाँ, और हैं काले कितने
main nigro aur angrezon mein farq nahin karti aur dil kisi ka bhi jhaank kar nahin dekhti.
hoga kalaa meri bala se icon_silent

ख़्वाब दौलत के यूँ ही पूरे नहीं तूने किये
मुँह से मुफ़लिस के भी छीने हैं निवाले कितने
haan ji ye baat to hamaare respected leaders pe poori tarah aayad hoti hai Clapping Smiley

इक अयोध्या के लिए क्यूँ हैं परेशाँ दोनों
मस्जिदें और भी हैं, और शिवाले कितने
ab kahun samjhaaye. agar siyasat na karein to roti ke laale nahin padh jaayein inn looteron ke ghar.allah jaane kab chain mile ga innn se Clapping Smiley

मुश्किलें रेत की मानिन्द फिसल जाती हैं
अक्ल की चाबी ने वा कर दिए ताले कितने
main to taale kholne mein maahir hoon ji. meri ungliyon pe fida hokar taale khud -b-khud khull jaaya karte hain ji. ab main kya karoon Laughing hard

तीरगी में है घिरी ऐसे हयाते-फानी
मुझसे कतरा के निकलते हैं उजाले कितने
bahut bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley

अब तो मजमूए की तू शक्ल इन्हें दे दे 'रक़ीब'
तेरी ग़ज़लों को संभालेंगे रिसाले कितने
mujhe de do main sambhaal kar rkoon gi tumhaari azim ghazlein icon_flower

---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

lakhoN armaan the kaagaz pe nikaale kitne
khoone-dil se jo likhe khat wo sambhale kitne

aapse ho to kareN hamse to hoga na shumaar
ujle dil kitne yahaaN aur hain kaale kitne

khawab daulat ke yooN hee poore naheenN too ne kiye
muNh se muflis ke bhi chheene haiN niwaale kitne

ik AYODHYA ke liye kyoN haiN pareshaaN dono
masjideN aur bhi haiN, aur shivaale kitne

mushkileN ret kee maanind fisal jaatee haiN
akl kee chaabi ne waa kar diye taale kitne

teergee meN hai ghiri aaise hayate-faanee
mujhse katra ke nikalte haiN ujale kitne

ab to majmooe ki too shakl inheN de de 'Raqeeb'
teree ghazloN ko sambhaleNge risale kitne

---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

superb satish ji...........!


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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #37 on: December 14, 2012, 05:35:31 AM »

shara63 ji,

hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya

Raqeeb Lucknowi


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«Reply #38 on: December 14, 2012, 09:26:26 AM »

sheba ji,

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya
I really enjoyed your comments on every
she'r.....keep it on in future too...

Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Khat Wo Sambhale Kitne / ख़त वो संभाले कितने*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #39 on: December 17, 2012, 05:07:36 PM »

waah waah, gehri ghazal, bahut khoob


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«Reply #40 on: December 18, 2012, 05:46:28 AM »

livingbytheday ji,

ghazal pasand karne aur hausala
afzai ka bahut bahut bahut shukriya...

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«Reply #41 on: December 18, 2012, 09:53:52 AM »

bahut jabardast ghazal
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«Reply #42 on: December 18, 2012, 12:12:07 PM »

albelamai ji,

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya

Raqeeb Lucknowi


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