Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

by abdbundeli on July 29, 2008, 09:02:03 AM

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abdbundeli

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«Reply #15 on: January 25, 2010, 11:22:03 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on January 25, 2010, 11:12:10 AM

bahut bahut acha likha hai Aaapne Abd ji,
Aur Roja ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai Applause

laut hain to sune phir taan nayi koi aapse
madhur se ashaar hamare Abd ji aur Roja ji se

aap log bahut acha likhte hain,hamesha kuch seekhne ko milta hai

Shukriyah, @kaash ji!

Yuun to mushkil sey lout paaeyengey jaaney waaley:
Lout aatey roz, saaqiyah key matwaaley!
Lout aayi hai itrayez wahee baad-e-shameem!
Khushaamdeed! Chaley aa rahey aaneywaaley!!

- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

«Reply #16 on: January 25, 2010, 11:55:50 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on January 25, 2010, 11:32:56 AM

my pleasure,bahut acha likha hai aapne Abd ji
pls keep writing

aane ke baad kabhi jana nahi hota
jane ke baad hamesha hi rahta
doston yun hi likhte rahen aap sab
to padhte padhte kuch seekhne ko milta

Thanks, @kaash ji!

- abd bundeli


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malli

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Re: Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

«Reply #17 on: February 11, 2010, 02:00:57 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 16, 2010, 01:34:04 PM

Honaa tum na udaas, sakhi,
Beeteygaa yeh dour!
Koyee kahtaa aayegaa,
"Milaa na tum-saa aour!!"

- abd bundeli

Yeh pyar, yeh dostana, ye tadap
Aakhir tumhi batao, "ABD", Kyu na dil tumhe chahe?


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abdbundeli

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Re: Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

«Reply #18 on: February 12, 2010, 08:05:33 AM »

Quote from: malli on February 11, 2010, 02:00:57 PM

Yeh pyar, yeh dostana, ye tadap
Aakhir tumhi batao, "ABD", Kyu na dil tumhe chahe?

Yah to man kaa kheyl hai;
Man kaa hee yah meyl!
Madhur milan key maarg mein,
Abhee wirah lo jheyl!!

- abd bundeli


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malli

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Re: Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

«Reply #19 on: March 06, 2010, 02:37:28 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on February 12, 2010, 08:05:33 AM

Yah to man kaa kheyl hai;
Man kaa hee yah meyl!
Madhur milan key maarg mein,
Abhee wirah lo jheyl!!

- abd bundeli

Hazar baar bi wada wafaan ho, lekin
Mai unki raah mein aankhein bichake dekh to lu... Usual Smile


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madhuwesh

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Re: Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

«Reply #20 on: March 06, 2010, 03:08:52 AM »

Wah wah very beautiful gazals Abd ji,Roja ji,Kaash ji,Malli ji.great creation. Hats off to you!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

«Reply #21 on: March 06, 2010, 06:53:55 AM »

Quote from: malli on March 06, 2010, 02:37:28 AM

Hazar baar bi wada wafaan ho, lekin
Mai unki raah mein aankhein bichake dekh to lu... Usual Smile

Phool-pattoun sey, bahaaroun key, sajaa dar hogaa!
Eik din hogaa, meyraa yaar meyrey ghar hogaa!
Yah bhi sach hai, azal sey raah deykhtaa huun mein;
Muqaddasoun sey muqammal nayaa safar hogaa!!

- abd bundeli