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Mashhur Shayar
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«Reply #15 on: March 24, 2011, 03:16:47 PM » |
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boht khoob likha hai radhika ji
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«Reply #16 on: March 24, 2011, 05:40:53 PM » |
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Badhiya Hai Ji
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«Reply #17 on: March 24, 2011, 11:00:09 PM » |
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Ji .. Shukriya ... Koyal Ji ! |
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«Reply #18 on: March 25, 2011, 12:01:58 PM » |
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Ji ..... Thanksssssssssss ! |
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«Reply #19 on: March 25, 2011, 12:49:44 PM » |
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ek ek sher dil ko chhuu gaya ... radhika ji ! the best ... !
Thankssssssss ... Naghmaa Ji ! |
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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2011, 03:03:39 PM » |
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Ji .. shukriya ............ ! |
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«Reply #21 on: March 26, 2011, 05:25:13 PM » |
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very good radhika ji  |
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«Reply #22 on: March 28, 2011, 02:46:21 PM » |
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Fantastic.. Creation... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai Radikha Ji .. kamaal kita ji !
Ji bahut bahut shukriya ... !!! |
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«Reply #23 on: March 29, 2011, 01:38:33 AM » |
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bht bht khoob radhika ji...
Shukriya ........... Manzil e ishq !! |
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«Reply #24 on: March 29, 2011, 01:12:51 PM » |
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radhika ji jesa aap hamesha likhti he us se kuch alag likha he apne is baar.........bahot khoob........theme bht dilchasp he aur jo words use kiye he wo bhi khoobsurat he.........keep it up ji
Ji behad shukriya ............. ! |
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«Reply #25 on: March 29, 2011, 02:30:02 PM » |
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GOOD POEM RADHIKA JI.......  
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
.........nm Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui
Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui
Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui
Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui
Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui
Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui |
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«Reply #26 on: March 30, 2011, 03:00:42 AM » |
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Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui
Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui
Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui
Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui
Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui
Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui Nice One ........ Radhika Ji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #27 on: March 30, 2011, 03:14:33 AM » |
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well beautiful....... really nice lines.........
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«Reply #28 on: March 30, 2011, 02:14:29 PM » |
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ek ek sher bahut khoob likha hai ... radhika ji !
the best creation .... daad hi daad ji ...... !
Ji bahut bahut shukriya ............... ! |
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«Reply #29 on: April 01, 2011, 05:11:24 PM » |
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radhika ji…radhe radhe  aapki ghazal kya baat kya baat  ““ kabhi dil ka shola bhadak uthta hai kabhi rah jaati hai chingari bhi dabi hui!! dekh kar mukda unka khil jaati hain kaliyan dil ki badh jaati hain dhadkane chalne lgti hain saanse bhi ruki hui !!! ““ dont mind Ji ... Behad Shukriya ...... ! |
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