Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh -Panna 2:Ghazals

marhoom bahayaat

Guest

«Reply #15 on: December 12, 2012, 04:55:17 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 12, 2012, 06:10:27 AM

Gar housla hota, gam saare bhula dete
Nam aankhoN se bhi, hum muskuraa dete

Hota meherbaaN jo, hawa ka rukh kabhi
Ham ret par bhi, tumhara naam sajaa dete

Kaash ke tum padh paate, meri khamoshiyaaN
Apni tarah, tumko bhi hum rulaa dete

AshkoN ne meri, aankhoN ko ghar kar liya
Warna hum, poora samandar bahaa dete

UmmedieN wafa jo hoti hame, tumse kabhi
Guzarte paloN ko rokkar, tumko sadaa dete

mindblowing,ma'am


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	Yeh sadaa-e-dil hai! by abdbundeli in Ghazals « 1 2 All »
	*Sadaa Khush Raho* by AVTAR RAYAT in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
	सदा हालात से/Sadaa haalaat se ...........SAINI by sksaini4 in Ghazals « 1 2 All »
	Aakhir Kis Sadaa Se Aaye Ho by jeet jainam in Miscellaneous Shayri
	sadaa..........A.B by adil bechain in Miscellaneous Shayri

ParwaaZ

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #16 on: December 12, 2012, 07:12:27 PM »

Aqsh Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne waaH behad khoob .. bade hi
khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaas ko lafoN meiN dhala hai
aapne... sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


	Logged

sbechain

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #17 on: December 12, 2012, 08:37:15 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 12, 2012, 06:10:27 AM

Gar housla hota, gam saare bhula dete
Nam aankhoN se bhi, hum muskuraa dete
bahut khoob. per hausla to rakhna hi padta hai. zindagi isi ka naam hai
Hota meherbaaN jo, hawa ka rukh kabhi
Ham ret par bhi, tumhara naam sajaa dete
apni koshish jaari rakho unn kisi ke bharose nahin rahna chahiye.phie ALLAH pe chhod do
Kaash ke tum padh paate, meri khamoshiyaaN
Apni tarah, tumko bhi hum rulaa dete
ye to mard.on ki kamzori hai. hum aurt.on ko samajhna hi nahin chhahte
AshkoN ne meri, aankhoN ko ghar kar liya
Warna hum, poora samandar bahaa dete
bahut khoob
UmmedieN wafa jo hoti hame, tumse kabhi
Guzarte paloN ko rokkar, tumko sadaa dete

nice Applause

bahut khoob...!


	Logged

Aarish

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2012, 02:06:06 AM »

Bohut khoob aqsh jee lajwab peshkash hai, daaad qubool kareN Applause


	Logged

Sanjeev kash

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #19 on: December 13, 2012, 03:48:22 AM »

Bahut Bahut Bahut Hi Khub Kalam Kahi Hai Aqsh Ji Sabhi sher lajawab hain. Dilli Mubarakbaad qabul kijyega
Applause


	Logged

saahill

Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 86

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 14 hours and 9 minutes.
Posts: 18588
Member Since: Jun 2009

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #20 on: December 13, 2012, 03:50:40 AM »

bohut khub aqsh very nice congrats


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #21 on: December 13, 2012, 04:11:08 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 12, 2012, 02:58:17 PM

Bahut khoob aqsh jee, bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal.

thank you so much iftakhar jee


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #22 on: December 13, 2012, 04:11:54 AM »

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 12, 2012, 03:28:53 PM

SuperB creation. Aaj ki gazal bahut mast hai. Aaj aapne wakai bahut achchaa likhaa hai. Mubaarakbaad kabool karo boss with ++1

thnx masoom and thnx a lot for the rau


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #23 on: December 13, 2012, 04:12:21 AM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 12, 2012, 04:55:17 PM

mindblowing,ma'am

thank you marhoom bahayat jee


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #24 on: December 13, 2012, 04:12:52 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 12, 2012, 07:12:27 PM

shukriya parwaaz jee


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #25 on: December 13, 2012, 04:14:15 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on December 12, 2012, 08:37:15 PM

bahut khoob...!

kya baat hai sheba jee apka andaz bhi bahut khoob hai thank you sooooooooooo much


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #26 on: December 13, 2012, 04:15:08 AM »

Quote from: Aarish on December 13, 2012, 02:06:06 AM

Bohut khoob aqsh jee lajwab peshkash hai, daaad qubool kareN Applause

thank you so much aarish jee


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #27 on: December 13, 2012, 04:15:37 AM »

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on December 13, 2012, 03:48:22 AM

Bahut Bahut Bahut Hi Khub Kalam Kahi Hai Aqsh Ji Sabhi sher lajawab hain. Dilli Mubarakbaad qabul kijyega
Applause

thnx sanjeev jee


	Logged

aqsh

Guest

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #28 on: December 13, 2012, 04:16:07 AM »

Quote from: saahill on December 13, 2012, 03:50:40 AM

bohut khub aqsh very nice congrats

thank you so much sahill jee


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh

«Reply #29 on: December 14, 2012, 04:30:34 AM »

bahut khoob Aqsh ji...!!!


	Logged

Pages: 1 [2] 3 All

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Ghazals > Topic: Tum ko sadaa dete.....................................................Aqsh