Zindagii aaj ab Naam hai aapkii..

by Bishwajeet &amp;amp;amp;#039;Musaahib&amp;amp;amp;#039; on December 05, 2013, 05:31:53 PM

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SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #15 on: December 05, 2013, 09:28:09 PM »

very nice Mussahib ji


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Re: Zindagii aaj ab Naam hai aapkii..

«Reply #16 on: December 05, 2013, 10:48:18 PM »

Bishwajeet jee bahut achha laga aapki koshish dekh kar, yuN hi koshish karte rahiye mere khayaal se aapko seekhne meN zyada mushkil nahiN hogi.


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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«Reply #17 on: December 05, 2013, 11:06:59 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 05, 2013, 08:41:36 PM

Arre bishwajeet ji.. mujhe jo kuch maloom tha bas wohi ilm aapse share kee mai toh... baaqi sab kuch aapki mehnat aur lagan hai... waise main yehi kahoongi ke saini sir ki baat par dhyaan do... koshish karte raho....aur rahi ghazal ki baat toh har baar ki tarah bahut hi achchi ghazal rahi.... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad...

ji par suruaat to aapne hi ki thi mujhe ye yakin dilaane me ki mai aise bhi likh sakta hun...
ji mai aap sab ki baton pe dhyaan de raha hun taki mai jaldi se jaldi sikh sakuN...


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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«Reply #18 on: December 05, 2013, 11:12:09 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 05, 2013, 09:01:39 PM

Biswajeet ji , Aap mubarakbad ke mustaheq hain ki aap baher mein likhne ki taraf raghib hue . Pahl koshish achhi hai, agarche ghaltiyan hain. Wazan aur bahron ki taqtee par dhyan dein aur likhte rahye . Apne doston se mashwira bhi karte rahye. Jald achhi tarah likhne lagein ge.Urdu script aur zubaan se waquif hon to VB sb ki refer ki hui Urdu ki kitabein bhi consult kar sakte hain . Aap ki kamyaabi k liye duaaein .

Shukriyaa Sir, ji jaroor sir mai sabki baton pe dhyan de raha hu jis se sikhne me asaani ho...


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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«Reply #19 on: December 05, 2013, 11:13:29 PM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 05, 2013, 09:28:09 PM

very nice Mussahib ji

Shukriyaa Suresh Ji....


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2013, 11:19:00 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 05, 2013, 10:48:18 PM

Bishwajeet jee bahut achha laga aapki koshish dekh kar, yuN hi koshish karte rahiye mere khayaal se aapko seekhne meN zyada mushkil nahiN hogi.

Shukriyaa Iftakhar jee.... bas aap logon se hi sikh raha huN ...


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«Reply #21 on: December 06, 2013, 09:24:36 AM »

very nice


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Re: Zindagii aaj ab Naam hai aapkii..

«Reply #22 on: December 08, 2013, 04:18:52 AM »

Naye safar ke aaghaaz par bahaut bahaut mubaarakbaad Musaahib ji .... pehla qadam bhi achchha uthaaya hai aapne .... aap ka safar khoobsurat rahe aur kaamyaab bhi yahi dua hai ...all the very best !!!