खोखला रिश्ता है/Khokhlaa rishtaa hai ........................SAINI

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«Reply #15 on: February 01, 2012, 11:31:56 AM »
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Riyaz saheb bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #16 on: February 01, 2012, 11:34:52 AM »
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«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2012, 06:47:25 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2012, 06:59:18 AM »
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खोखल रिश्ता  है  इसको  तोड़  दो |

हाल पर मुझको मेरे  अब छोड़  दो ||


ख़ुद करो ग़लती तो ये जायज़  नहीं |

ठींकरा औरों के सर  पे  फोड़  दो ||
 

लफ्ज़ जो लिखते हों बस अलगाव के |

एसे  क़लमों को उठा कर तोड़  दो ||
 

चार  होते हैं  फ़क़त  दो  और  दो |

चाहे उनको  जिस तरह से जोड़  दो ||
 

बाद मुद्दत के उठे  दिल  में  ख़याल |

ख़ूबसूरत सा  इन्हें  इक  मोड़  दो ||
 

दिल का शायर  फिर जगायेगा  तुम्हे |

अब भले  ही आप कहना  छोड़  दो ||
 

हादिसों ने सख्त  की दिल की ज़मीन |

खुश ख़यालों से  इसे अब  गोड़  दो ||


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Khokhlaa  rishtaa  hai  isko  tod  do.
Haal   par   mujhko  mere ab chhod do.

Khud karo ghaltee to ye jaayaz naheeN.
Theenkraa  auroN  ke  sar pe  fod  do.
 
Lafz  jo   likhte   hoN bas algaaw ke.
Ese   qalmoN   ko  uthaa  kar  tod do.

Chaar   hote  haiN  faqat  do  aur do.
Chaahe   unko  jis  tarah  se  jod do.

Baad   muddat  ke uthe dil men khyaal.
Khoobsoorat    saa   inhe  ik  mod do.

Dil kaa  shaayar fir jagaayegaa tumhe.
Ab  bhale   hee  aap  kahnaa chhod do.

HaadisoN  ne sakht kee dil kee zameen.
Khush  khyaaloN  se   ise  ab  god do.

Dr.Surendra Saini



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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2012, 08:58:59 AM »
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«Reply #21 on: February 03, 2012, 04:49:32 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji
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«Reply #22 on: February 03, 2012, 09:13:31 AM »
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खोखल रिश्ता  है  इसको  तोड़  दो |

हाल पर मुझको मेरे  अब छोड़  दो ||


ख़ुद करो ग़लती तो ये जायज़  नहीं |

ठींकरा औरों के सर  पे  फोड़  दो ||
 

लफ्ज़ जो लिखते हों बस अलगाव के |

एसे  क़लमों को उठा कर तोड़  दो ||
 

चार  होते हैं  फ़क़त  दो  और  दो |

चाहे उनको  जिस तरह से जोड़  दो ||
 

बाद मुद्दत के उठे  दिल  में  ख़याल |

ख़ूबसूरत सा  इन्हें  इक  मोड़  दो ||
 

दिल का शायर  फिर जगायेगा  तुम्हे |

अब भले  ही आप कहना  छोड़  दो ||
 

हादिसों ने सख्त  की दिल की ज़मीन |

खुश ख़यालों से  इसे अब  गोड़  दो ||


डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी

 
Khokhlaa  rishtaa  hai  isko  tod  do.
Haal   par   mujhko  mere ab chhod do.

Khud karo ghaltee to ye jaayaz naheeN.
Theenkraa  auroN  ke  sar pe  fod  do.
 
Lafz  jo   likhte   hoN bas algaaw ke.
Ese   qalmoN   ko  uthaa  kar  tod do.

Chaar   hote  haiN  faqat  do  aur do.
Chaahe   unko  jis  tarah  se  jod do.

Baad   muddat  ke uthe dil men khyaal.
Khoobsoorat    saa   inhe  ik  mod do.

Dil kaa  shaayar fir jagaayegaa tumhe.
Ab  bhale   hee  aap  kahnaa chhod do.

HaadisoN  ne sakht kee dil kee zameen.
Khush  khyaaloN  se   ise  ab  god do.

Dr.Surendra Saini


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Kya kehne saheb...Bahut bahut khooob!!!!

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«Reply #23 on: February 03, 2012, 11:58:40 AM »
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