बुझ गया होगा या बुझने ही वाला होगा ... -Panna 2:Ghazals

aqsh

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«Reply #15 on: September 30, 2013, 07:15:59 PM »

Waah musaahib ji.. kya baat hai.. bahut hi khoobsurat jazbaat rahe is ghazal mein.. khaas yeh ashaar dil ke qareeb rahe.. rau ke saath dil se daad qubool kare..

राज कब तक वो छुपाते हाल ऐ दिल का ...
खुल गया होगा या खुलने ही वाला होगा ...

दर्द कहाँ रहता है जाहिर उम्र भर के लिए ...
मिट गया होगा या मिटने ही वाला होगा ..
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«Reply #16 on: September 30, 2013, 07:20:53 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on September 30, 2013, 07:15:59 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aqsh Ji....


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«Reply #17 on: September 30, 2013, 10:40:09 PM »

waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne , bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!


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«Reply #18 on: September 30, 2013, 11:29:47 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 30, 2013, 10:40:09 PM

waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne , bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!

Dhanyawaad Hriday Ji...


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«Reply #19 on: September 30, 2013, 11:35:58 PM »

Bahut Umda.


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«Reply #20 on: September 30, 2013, 11:41:46 PM »

सबका ख़ुदा बे मेहर नहीं है मेरे जितना ...
मिल गया होगा या मिलने ही वाला होगा ...

Bahut khoob Musaahib jee


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«Reply #21 on: October 01, 2013, 12:32:33 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 30, 2013, 11:35:58 PM

Bahut Umda.

Shukriya Ravi ji...


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«Reply #22 on: October 01, 2013, 12:34:03 AM »

Quote from: mkv on September 30, 2013, 11:41:46 PM

Shukriya mkv Sahab..


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«Reply #23 on: October 01, 2013, 04:23:55 PM »

bahut khoob Applause


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«Reply #24 on: October 01, 2013, 04:42:34 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on October 01, 2013, 04:23:55 PM

bahut khoob Applause

Shukriya Nandbahu Ji...


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«Reply #25 on: October 03, 2013, 07:07:06 PM »

Bishwajeet Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH janab kia kaheN aapki kalam ki dhaar aur aapke khayaaloN ki raawaani dekhkar prasannta ho rahi hai... aap jaise khoob khayaal ke shayar bhi YO par hai...

Badi khoob kalaam kahi hai janab, khoobsurat khayaal aur umdaa bayaani rahi... aakhri teenoN ashaar hume behad pasaNd aaye...
Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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