मोहब्बत की क़सम कुछ कुछ.......सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

by Satish Shukla on June 11, 2011, 02:22:44 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 12, 2011, 05:42:50 AM »
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वो अरमां अब तो निकलेंगे, रहे जो मुद्दतों दिल में
ख़ुदा के फ़ज्ल से चलने लगा मेरा क़लम कुछ कुछ

Good One ... Satish Ji !

Very Impressive Creation ... dil se daad qubuul kareN ... !
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«Reply #16 on: June 12, 2011, 06:08:57 AM »
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Bechain Sahab,
 
Kin lafzon se shukriya adaa karoon
samajh naheen aata. Koshish karta
hoon aur aur jab aap jaise log ghazal
pasand karte hain aur daad milti hai
to aur achchha kahne ki koshish men
laga jata hoon.

Duaaon men yaad rakhiyega.

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«Reply #17 on: June 12, 2011, 06:13:49 AM »
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Mehra Sahab,

Ghazal padne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut
bahut shukriya.

Bhvishya men bhi sneh bahaaye rahen.

Aabhaar sahit,

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«Reply #18 on: June 12, 2011, 06:18:17 AM »
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Raqeeb sahab aadab ,,

GHazal parhke suroor ata hai ,, itni mushkil radeef ko apne itni khubsurati se ada kiya hai ke kya kahe.N ,, ghazal ki ghinayat mutacir karti hai ,, kaunsa sher ziyada acha hai ye kahene mushkil ho chala hai ,, dad behad o hisab , saat hi saat mubarak baad bhi khubool kare.N

Mujhe yaad aa raha hai phir se jaane kya sanam khuch khuch ,,,
Tere koche ki jaanib aaj hain gamzaa.N qadam khuch khuch,,,



allah apko mazeed nawaze,,

dua go

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«Reply #19 on: June 12, 2011, 07:07:15 AM »
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Janab Abdul Qadeer Sahab,

Sabse pahle to aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki
aapne ghazal ko padha aur pasand kiya.

Lakht-e-jigar hai ye ghazal mere liye, khayaalon
ko baandhne, radif ka chunaav karne aur is manzil
tak pahunchane men bees saal lag gaye.

Bahut logon ne kaha ki is radif ( kuchh kuchh ) ka
is se pahle kisee shayar ne istemaal naheen kiya aur
maine bhi ab tak koyee ghazal is radif men naheen padhee.

Aapne jo sambodhan kaha tha kiya hai bhool jaaoon to
fir se yaad dila deejiyega.

Ek baar fir se shukriya.

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«Reply #20 on: June 12, 2011, 07:16:06 AM »
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Satish ji,Bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ne meri farmaish ki laaj rakh lee aur poori ghazal inayat kee.Bahut hi khoobsoorat aur pur maani ashaar hai.n.Tahe dil se shukriya,mubarakbaad aur dhero.n daad.Allah kare zor e kalaam aur ziyada....Aapka 'Hasan'
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«Reply #21 on: June 12, 2011, 08:10:00 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Jawab dene, ghazal padne aur pasand karne
kaa bahut bahut shukriya.

Ummeed karta hoon aage bhee isee tarah saath
dete rahenge.

Duaaon men yaad rakhiyega.

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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2011, 06:30:15 PM »
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zabar dast ji..jawaab nahi....
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«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2011, 07:12:08 PM »
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hameeda ji,

ghazal padne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #24 on: June 13, 2011, 03:53:26 PM »
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Wah wah Kya baat hai Satish Bhai.. ek ek Lafz Dil Par asar kar gaya... Beintehaan Khubsoorat Gazal Likhi hai aapne.. aaj aapko Pahali baar padha hai.. Aur Padh kar Yeh Mehsoos ho gaya Ki Aapki Qalam Me Waqai ek Jadoo Hai...!! Applause Applause


Daad kubool karen Bhai...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #25 on: June 13, 2011, 04:28:52 PM »
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Mann Ji,

Ghazal padne, pasand karne aur jawab dene ke
liye bahut bahut shukriya.

Quantity se jiyadah Quality par vishwaas karta
hoon. Ye to gaib kee aamad hai jo aur jab utra
lafzon men baandh diya.

Bahut pahle ek nashisht men kisee ka she'r yaad
aa raha hai Shayar ka naam bhool gaya...she'r
kuchh aaisa tha..

"log uktaa jaayeN is qadar naheeN kahate
 mukhtasar hi kahate haiN beasar naheeN kahate"

bas isee ko zindagee men utar liya.

Ek baar fir se bahut bahut shukriya. Fir milte
hain isee tarah.

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«Reply #26 on: June 18, 2011, 09:42:27 AM »
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behatareeeeeeeeeen..... bahut kam padhne ko milti hai aise compilation.....

ek gyan mujhe bhi de dijiye.... ye aap hindi me kaise type karte hain?


 hello2  hello2  hello2
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«Reply #27 on: June 18, 2011, 03:20:16 PM »
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raajaindra ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Hindi men google par type kar ke YO
men Submit window par paste kar deejiye.

Jyada problem ho to jab online hon to
mujhe call (09892165892) kar leejiyega
kyonki details likh pana mere liye
is waqt mumkin naheen ho payega.

All the best

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