भीड़ ...*उषा राजेश

by usha rajesh on September 05, 2011, 08:46:56 PM
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भीड़ बनते इंसानी सरों का
बूँद बूँद रिस जायेगा
सारा लहू    
केवल ठूंठ रह जायेगा.

खो जायेगा
गुमनामियों के अन्धेरों में
अनचाहे बोझों तले.

दब के रह जायेगा
एक जीवाश्म की तरह
संवेदनहीन.

आने वाले वक्त की आँखों  में
टंगा होगा यक्ष प्रश्न -
 
तुम
अत्यंत संवेदनशील
सोचने विचारने वाले
मनुष्य नामक प्राणी को
चुपचाप
भीड़ बनते क्यों तकते रहे?

             ----- उषा राजेश
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2011, 09:56:42 PM »
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भीड़ बनते इंसानी सरों का
बूँद बूँद रिस जायेगा
सारा लहू    
केवल ठूंठ रह जायेगा.

खो जायेगा
गुमनामियों के अन्धेरों में
अनचाहे बोझों तले.

दब के रह जायेगा
एक जीवाश्म की तरह
संवेदनहीन.

आने वाले वक्त की आँखों  में
टंगा होगा यक्ष प्रश्न -
 
तुम
अत्यंत संवेदनशील
सोचने विचारने वाले
मनुष्य नामक प्राणी को
चुपचाप
भीड़ बनते क्यों तकते रहे?

             ----- उषा राजेश

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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2011, 11:24:43 PM »
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Usha Jee Aadaab!

Behad marmik vichaar kaheN hai aapne... Usual Smile
VichaaroN ki gehrai aur shabdoN ki saNvedna
spasht rahi... Usual Smile

Humari daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

HaaN kuch mann meiN aaya so soNche ke kahte chaleN
Hum aapki kavita ka tatprya nahi samajh paye.. ?

Aap ne bheed se manushya ki tulna ki hai?
Aik margi vichar tak pahuNche hum par sahiN se shayad
samajh nahi paaye Kripa karke kuch vistaarit roshni
daliyeNga Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye... Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2011, 06:12:43 PM »
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usha rajesh ji,

Waah...Bahut khoob, ati sunder

Daad kubool farmaayen.

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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2011, 06:21:26 PM »
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भीड़ बनते इंसानी सरों का
बूँद बूँद रिस जायेगा
सारा लहू    
केवल ठूंठ रह जायेगा.

खो जायेगा
गुमनामियों के अन्धेरों में
अनचाहे बोझों तले.

दब के रह जायेगा
एक जीवाश्म की तरह
संवेदनहीन.

आने वाले वक्त की आँखों  में
टंगा होगा यक्ष प्रश्न -
 
तुम
अत्यंत संवेदनशील
सोचने विचारने वाले
मनुष्य नामक प्राणी को
चुपचाप
भीड़ बनते क्यों तकते रहे?

             ----- उषा राजेश


gud one usha ji     abaadi ke badne se jo pareshaniyaan ho rahi hain usko aapne bakhoobi byaan kiya hai..
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2011, 11:39:29 AM »
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bahut umda Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2011, 08:48:15 PM »
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aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2011, 08:53:39 PM »
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भीड़ बनते इंसानी सरों का
बूँद बूँद रिस जायेगा
सारा लहू    
केवल ठूंठ रह जायेगा.

खो जायेगा
गुमनामियों के अन्धेरों में
अनचाहे बोझों तले.

दब के रह जायेगा
एक जीवाश्म की तरह
संवेदनहीन.

आने वाले वक्त की आँखों  में
टंगा होगा यक्ष प्रश्न -
 
तुम
अत्यंत संवेदनशील
सोचने विचारने वाले
मनुष्य नामक प्राणी को
चुपचाप
भीड़ बनते क्यों तकते रहे?

             ----- उषा राजेश


Bahut Bahut Khooob Usha Rajeshji..

Gambhir Vishaye Par Aapne Roshni Daali..

Bahut acha likha hai aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2011, 09:09:06 PM »
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 Parwaz saheb,

 Sabse pahle to shukriya kabool kijiye.

 Chaliye ab apke sawal par aate hein. baat kuch is tarah hai ki manushya ko sabse adhik sochne, samjhne aur samvedansheel prani mana jata hai. Mana hi nahi jata balki wah yakeenan hai.

Lekin aaj ke samay mein, insaan ke bheetar se ye khoobiyan jinki wazah se wah insan kahlane ke layak banta hai na jane kahan khoti ja rahi hain.

Bhai bhai ka gala kaat raha hai. Bhasha aur dharm ke naam par log marne maarne par utaaru hain.

Dusre ka dard dekh kar, use tadpata dekh kar wah khush hota hai.

Baap khud apni beti ka balatkar kar raha hai.

Insan ki sochne samjhane ki shakti na jane kahan kho gayee hai.

Wah janwaron ki tarah bartav karne laga hai.Janvaron mein to phir bhi samvedana hoti hai.

Aise samvedan heen prani ka duniya mein bheed badhane ke sivay doosra kya yogdan ho sakta hai? Aap hi kahiye.

Mera bas yahi tatparya tha ki agar insaan ban kar janm liya hai to insan bankar hi raha jaye, Ek bhheed  nahi jis mein ek insaan ka koi wajood nahi hota. Bheed ka koi chehra nahi hota.


Ummeed hai ki apki shanka ka samadhaan karne main mein safal rahi.
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2011, 09:11:12 PM »
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 Khwaish Ji,

  Apka bahut bahut Shukriya
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