सत्य वचन, धरें कड़वापन

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मन का दर्पण,
है चाल चलन !!

जीवन मेला,
तनहा है गमन!!

हर ओर  दिखे,
नैतिक विचलन !!

कटते हैं वन,
हैं क्रोधित घन!!

सेहरा में है,
क्यूँ गीलापन !!

व्याकुल जन जन,
सोया शासन !!

पर्याप्त है धन,
फिर भी क्रंदन!!

गिरते पर्वत,
जारी है खनन !!

अत्यावश्यक,
है संपादन   !!

सत्य वचन,
धरें कड़वापन !!
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2014, 03:17:56 PM »
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मन का दर्पण,
है चाल चलन !!

जीवन मेला,
तनहा है गमन!!

हर ओर  दिखे,
नैतिक विचलन !!

कटते हैं वन,
हैं क्रोधित घन!!

सेहरा में है,
क्यूँ गीलापन !!

व्याकुल जन जन,
सोया शासन !!

पर्याप्त है धन,
फिर भी क्रंदन!!

गिरते पर्वत,
जारी है खनन !!

अत्यावश्यक,
है संपादन   !!

सत्य वचन,
धरें कड़वापन !!



boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kya kee aap charo tarf chhhaaaaaaaaaaa gaye baap rau deta hoon

 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2014, 03:24:10 PM »
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bahut bahut Shukriya qalb Ji,

अत्यावश्यक,
है संपादन

यह छंद मैंने, आपके और, एक और शायर साहेब के संवाद को समझ के ही लिखा था




boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kya kee aap charo tarf chhhaaaaaaaaaaa gaye baap rau deta hoon

 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2014, 04:53:07 PM »
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Sanchipt Var'nan
Sundar  Darshan
 
just beautiful !
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2014, 05:06:47 PM »
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Shukriya Sir!!
Need your blessings to improve

Sanchipt Var'nan
Sundar  Darshan
 
just beautiful !

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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2014, 05:30:57 PM »
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बहुत खुबसूरत विचार.....

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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2014, 07:21:46 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2014, 07:29:24 PM »
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शुक्रिया Sir!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2014, 07:30:58 PM »
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शुक्रिया Amit Ji

बहुत खुबसूरत विचार.....


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