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«Reply #15 on: October 20, 2011, 12:07:41 PM » |
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<> Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai
Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai
Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai
Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai
Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai
Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!
KASAK JI BAHUT KHOOB ,SABHI ASHAAR BAHUR ACCHE HAI. KHUD SE HI CHUPATI PHIR RAHI AUR KHILONE KI TARAH KHELA HAI....VERY TOUCHING. KHUSH RAHE, |
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«Reply #16 on: October 20, 2011, 04:53:17 PM » |
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«Reply #17 on: October 24, 2011, 04:34:01 AM » |
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KHUD KO KHUD SE CHIPAANA ASAAN NAHI HOTA
BEWAJAH KOI SHAKHS PARESHAAN NAHI HOTA
BHAROSA RAKHO KHUD PAR MANJAR NAHI BADLA
AAJ BHI CHALTI HAWA HAI PURAANI
NAFRAT LIYE FIRTI NAHI KOI DIWAANI
ANJAAN HAI SAHAR TO ACCHA HI RAHEGA
RAAH ME KOI DHOKHA NA MILEGA
AUR KAHAR SE KYUN DARTI HO JAB
KHUN SE RANGE HAATH NAHI TUMHARE
GAUR SE DEKHO MEHNDI CHADI HAI
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«Reply #18 on: November 04, 2011, 11:31:44 PM » |
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«Reply #19 on: June 12, 2012, 11:29:11 AM » |
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buhat khoobsurat ehsaas poori ghazal men kaaim rehtay he... buhat khoob.....
ufffffffffffffffff VB ji aapne meri post pe 2 saal me pehli baar comment kiya hai....... wo bhi aapko pasand aaya mera likha ...... mujhe samjh me nahin aaraha main kya kahun..... behadddddddddddd shukriya aapka ,,, bas yunhi iss nacheez par karam rakhiyega..... |
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«Reply #20 on: June 12, 2012, 05:55:17 PM » |
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jee! bus yunhi guzar huva yahan say... achha laga.. tu nishaan chhora...
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«Reply #21 on: June 12, 2012, 05:58:28 PM » |
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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2012, 06:06:41 PM » |
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hamen andesha tha k aap aisa na matlab len ... is liyay... hum ne likh diya tha... k "yahan say guzar huva" ... that means... k aap ki baaki likhi poems k sheher say hamara guzar nahi huva...
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«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2012, 06:08:17 PM » |
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to guzariye na... aur dekhiye padhiye kuch kahiye... kabhi kabi kuch achche kaam kar lene chahiye na VB ji
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«Reply #24 on: June 12, 2012, 06:13:51 PM » |
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nahi ! ... kho jaatay hen hum... kabhi guzar huva... tu nishaan chhoren gay...
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«Reply #25 on: June 12, 2012, 06:16:55 PM » |
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kya VB ji aap bhi... itne pyaar se kaha humne aur aap mana kar diye... kitne khush hue the aap ka reply dekh kar hum .. aur aap yunhi mana kar diye  |
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«Reply #26 on: June 12, 2012, 06:21:28 PM » |
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aap ki posts wesay he replies and logon ki taareefon say bhari hoti hen... hamaray 2 lafz kya kar len gay... ab is maasoomiyat say bhe na kahiyay kuchh... k majboor ho jaain...
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«Reply #27 on: June 12, 2012, 06:23:19 PM » |
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aap hamare fav shayar hain VB ji... aur aap samjh sakte hain ke jinhe padhkar aaplikhen unki waah waahi kya kar sakti hai... to thodisi zehmat uthaaya kijiye... aaya kijiye.. comment kiya kijiye...
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«Reply #28 on: June 12, 2012, 06:27:22 PM » |
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<> Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai
Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai
Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai
Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai
Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai
Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!
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«Reply #29 on: June 12, 2012, 06:28:32 PM » |
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thnx KA ji... thnx for d Rau ...
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