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Apna hi leta by Rahim

by dead heart on September 16, 2009, 07:14:48 PM

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«Reply #15 on: September 19, 2009, 08:09:26 PM »

Shukriya Sammual jee..


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Re: **Apna hi leta** by Rahim

«Reply #16 on: September 20, 2009, 04:31:05 PM »

Wah Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Chand Alfaazon Me Aapne Apna Haal-e-Dil Bayan kar diya.. Bahut Hi Lajawab Sher Hai.. Bahut Khooooooob Dost..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: **Apna hi leta** by Rahim

«Reply #17 on: September 20, 2009, 04:52:41 PM »

Shukriya Bhaijan...


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Re: **Apna hi leta** by Rahim

«Reply #18 on: September 21, 2009, 12:10:44 PM »

Thanks Madhu-di...koi taariff kare tou dhanyawaad tou dena he chahiye n.....

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 19, 2009, 07:01:23 PM

Wah bahut khoob Cara ji n Koyal ji,beautiful lines. icon_thumleft


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Re: **Apna hi leta** by Rahim

«Reply #19 on: September 21, 2009, 12:14:37 PM »

Aap likhte rahiye padh tou hum lenge he...
".Rahim k sher "
Meri lines ki tariff k liye shukriya....

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 19, 2009, 07:05:50 PM

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Cara jee...Aur bahaut sahi baat kahi ke kya uss pe asar kar gaya...Do shaer yaad agaye apki lines padkar...

Haseeno se haseen banke gunaah kiya,
Auron ko to tikh humko bhi tabah kiya,
Pesh kiya jab ghazlon main unki bewaffai ko,
Auron ne to tikh unhone bhi sirf wah wah hi kiya...

Woh kya samajta jazbaton ko tere shaeron main Rahim,
Jo lavz-e-mohobat janta hai bas mohobat karna nahin...
Shukriya Divya di, Nikhaar jee aur Fairykhan jee..
Bas yunhi shaer padte rahiye aur nawazte rahiye...Apne bahaut acha likha hai...