Bachpan

by soudagar on June 12, 2012, 08:53:59 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2012, 05:45:44 PM »
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bohot khoob sir bohot umda likha hai aapne ....  Applause  Applause  icon_salut


aapke BACHPAN NE MUJHE MERA BACHPAN YAAD DILA DIA JO MAINE EK BAR LIKHA THA SHAYAD APNE PADA HO
AAPKE PESHE E KHIDMAT HAI

   BACHPAN:-
Jiya nahi mene bachpan apna , mere liye ye sab hai ek sapna….
Janu nahi kesa hota hai gudde-guddio se khelna,

Video game me level par karna.
Kuch naya   lane ki zid karna ,
Chekhna ,rona or khwahish karna.
Nahi jiya mene kabhi bachpan apna…..

Bachpan ki koi yad he nahi hai abhi,
Mila nahi dadu dadi ka pya kabhi.

Vo dadu ki khanaio me kho jana,
Dadi ki godi me sar rakh kar so jana.

Har roz dadu ka mere liye toffee choclete lana,
Or dadi k hato   se  roti ka khana……

Kabhi mujh se koi galati ho jana, papa ka mujhe gussa dikhana,
Us par dadu ka papa ko ankh dikhana, or dadi ka fir mujh rote ka gale lagana..

Nahi mila kabhi,  Mujhe pyar itna ….. mere liye  ye sab hai ek sapna….
Akela tha mai, akela hun mai..

Dusron k liye khush  hun yun to mai, andar se lekin khali hun mai…
Koi nahi hai mere pas yaden.. bas ye he hai jo hai bebak sapne…
Or ye he haI jo hai mere apne…!!!!


<roy>

roy beta.. last 5 lines really made me emotional. god bless you dear
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soudagar
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«Reply #16 on: July 30, 2012, 05:22:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya suman aunty ji
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«Reply #17 on: July 30, 2012, 06:07:17 PM »
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roy beta.. last 5 lines really made me emotional. god bless you dear

bohoot boohoot shukriya aunty g
aapne meri kavita padne k liye waqt nikala
or apko pasand bhi ayi



bohot bohot shukriya
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«Reply #18 on: July 31, 2012, 03:46:51 AM »
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roy tumne sach mein khoob kaha.... padhkar  bahut jyda emotional ho gaya tha jawab mein kuch nah isujha mujhe...
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«Reply #19 on: July 31, 2012, 04:50:13 PM »
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roy tumne sach mein khoob kaha.... padhkar  bahut jyda emotional ho gaya tha jawab mein kuch nah isujha mujhe...

bhai ye to apka badapan hai !
aapne use pada hoga mere liye ye he bohot hai Usual Smile
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