Behane Hote Sabse Pyaare Hai "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: May 31, 2010, 08:28:59 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 21, 2010, 10:58:17 AM
Bhai Khwaish Ab Kya Tareef Karun Aapki
Aapka To Har Baar Ek Alag Hi Andaz Hota Hai
Is Baar Bhi Aapne Ek Behatreen Peshkash Ki Hai
Bahut Hi Umda Applause Applause

Dil Se Nikli Hazaron Dad...

ALLAH Pak Har Bhai Behan Ko Salaamat Rakhe
Aur Unme Muhabbat Banaye Rakhe....


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Mere Bhai,Majid Bhai Aapne Padha Aur Saraha Yehi Jaankar Behad Khushi Hui hai..Aapka Sirf Yahan Par Aana Aur Iss Nazm Ko padhna Hi Bahut Hai..Izzat-afzaai ka Teh Dil Se shukriya Bhai..

Duayon Ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya,Khuda Kare Har Bhai-Behan Ka Rishta Yuhi Mehakta Rahe.. icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: May 31, 2010, 09:13:22 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

sach kaha aapne betiyo ko hi kyu vida kiya jata

kyu hame puri zindagi maa baap bhai behan nasib nahi hote

kyu hamhe hi sasural jana padta hai

kyu betiya parayie hoti hai...

 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #17 on: June 02, 2010, 06:51:53 AM »
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khwaish,this poetry touched my soul.it's rare to see such kind of a poetry nowadays.the way you expressed your love for your sister has really moved me to tears.i just want to tell you something..you wrote this that why girls get married and move to other's home,they could be only one reply

girls get married and go to other's home b'coz they are blessed angels of the almighty,after filing their own home with colour of happiness,they go away to colour other's home too
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«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2010, 09:07:29 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 21, 2010, 11:10:05 PM
Wah Khwaish Ji Kamal.......

Bhut hi Khoob .......

 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Neelji
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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2010, 08:50:33 AM »
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Quote from: monamithiya on May 31, 2010, 09:13:22 AM
bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

sach kaha aapne betiyo ko hi kyu vida kiya jata

kyu hame puri zindagi maa baap bhai behan nasib nahi hote

kyu hamhe hi sasural jana padta hai

kyu betiya parayie hoti hai...

 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much Monaji..

Apane Padha AUr Inn Ehsaaso Ko samjha..Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya...

Aur Mona Ji Aapke Unn Sawalo ka jawaab Nahi Hai Mere Paas..Bas Yehi Duniya Ki Reet Hai..

Aap Apna Khayal rakhe..
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«Reply #20 on: July 16, 2010, 05:49:26 AM »
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bahoot khoob khwaish bro komal bhawnaon se bhari aapki ye rachna dil ko choo jaati hai....bahoot bahoot badhai is rachna ke liye...
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«Reply #21 on: August 24, 2010, 07:13:35 AM »
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Quote from: sunaina_love on June 02, 2010, 06:51:53 AM
khwaish,this poetry touched my soul.it's rare to see such kind of a poetry nowadays.the way you expressed your love for your sister has really moved me to tears.i just want to tell you something..you wrote this that why girls get married and move to other's home,they could be only one reply

girls get married and go to other's home b'coz they are blessed angels of the almighty,after filing their own home with colour of happiness,they go away to colour other's home too

Thankx A Million Sunaina.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

If This Poetry Touched Your Heart, What Else could i ask for...

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much For Feeling This Emotions...

And I Really Loved Your ANSWER That why does a Girl has to leave her house??

Thankyou so much for giving your valuable Time..
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«Reply #22 on: June 05, 2011, 11:14:37 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 16, 2010, 05:49:26 AM
bahoot khoob khwaish bro komal bhawnaon se bhari aapki ye rachna dil ko choo jaati hai....bahoot bahoot badhai is rachna ke liye...

Sanjeev Bro..Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai..yeh topic mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai..jab bhi padhta hoon aankhein Nam ho jaati hai, Kal Hi Didi vaapas apne ghar gaye hai..ajeeb lagta hai!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: June 25, 2011, 11:00:13 PM »
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Sir, thanks for this beautiful poetry especially for using hindi to reveal your feeling
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