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by Sonu on November 20, 2004, 04:18:48 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2004, 02:48:02 PM »
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very nice rawat ji...

shukriya waheed ji...

jhuthey sapney deykhtey keo hoo,
yea too tut janyngey jindgi too vo preyab hai,
aaj jeysey apna kahogey,
kal co tumhey bhool jayngey.


wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! touching word aaj likh rahi ho.............sonu...

waqt har gham ko, har dard ko bhula deta hai,
waqt ke saath yeh sadma bhi guzar jaayega,
aur yeh baate jo maine, is waqt kahi hai tere aage,
yehi baate tu kisi aur ke aage doohrayega,
Dost Maayus naa ho....
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«Reply #16 on: December 12, 2004, 09:24:48 AM »
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shukriya waheed ji...

waqt har gam ko bhar pata nahi
dil key dard ko bhar pata nahi
mana key kabhi waqt theyra nahi
dil ki bazi koi hara nahi.
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«Reply #17 on: December 12, 2004, 03:02:20 PM »
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very nice sonu ji


 :dance:
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«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2004, 11:23:22 PM »
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Nice Sonu and Waheed_rose!!!

waqat aor jakham ka sath kuch aisa raha
jaise tera mera sath her janam raha
her jakham tera mout jaisa tha
phir bhi shukariyan, her janam mai
kam se kam tera sath to raha!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: December 14, 2004, 08:24:33 AM »
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shukriya poojaji bhot khoob
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«Reply #20 on: December 14, 2004, 05:31:57 PM »
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Nice Sonu and Waheed_rose!!!

waqat aor jakham ka sath kuch aisa raha
jaise tera mera sath her janam raha
her jakham tera mout jaisa tha
phir bhi shukariyan, her janam mai
kam se kam tera sath to raha!!!!!


ur welcome .........pooja................sonu............... .....agar repeat ho rahi hai to sorry.................................... sad5

Karoge Yaad To Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Guzarte Waqt Ki Har Mauj Thehar Jayegi

Yeh Chand Beete Zamanon Ka Aaina Hoga
Bhatakti nigha Mein Chehra Koi Bana Hoga
Udaas Raah Koi Dastaan Sunayegi
Karoge Yaad To...

Barasta Bheegta Mausam Dhuan - Dhuan Hoga
Pighalti Shammon Pe Dil Ka Mere Guma Hoga
Hatheliyon Ki Heena Yaad Kuchh Dilayegi
Karoge Yaad To...

Gali Ke Mor Pe Soona Sa Koi Darwaaza
Tarasti Aankhon Se Rasta Kisika Dekhega
Nigaah Door Talak Jaake Laut Aayegi
Karoge Yaad To...
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«Reply #21 on: December 14, 2004, 09:11:19 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob waheed!!! Is gaane ka ek ek shabad bahoot acha hai!!!!


Jo Tujh Bin Na Jeene Ka Kehte Hum
So Us Ahad Ko Ab Wafa Kar Chale

Koi Na Umeed Na Karte Nigahen
So Tum Humse Munh Bhi Chhupa Kar Chale (nm)
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«Reply #22 on: December 14, 2004, 09:23:07 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob waheed!!! Is gaane ka ek ek shabad bahoot acha hai!!!!


Jo Tujh Bin Na Jeene Ka Kehte Hum
So Us Ahad Ko Ab Wafa Kar Chale

Koi Na Umeed Na Karte Nigahen
So Tum Humse Munh Bhi Chhupa Kar Chale (nm)


really pooja.............  khoobsurat andaaz mein hain............very  nice pooja....
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«Reply #23 on: December 28, 2004, 04:07:04 AM »
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bahoot khoob waheed ji and pooja ji very nice...
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«Reply #24 on: December 28, 2004, 10:11:12 PM »
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ur welcome sonu..............  :lol:
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«Reply #25 on: December 29, 2004, 08:41:26 AM »
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chidyeoo ko chahekna ata hai,
phoolu ko mehkena ata hai,
suraj ko dhekna ata hai,
chand ko chamakna ata hai,
mager humey sirf oru key leya leay duya kerna ata hia.
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«Reply #26 on: January 08, 2005, 10:23:30 PM »
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wow sonu..............very nice..........

Utre jo zindagi teri gharaiyon main hum
Mehfil main reh kar bhi rahe Tanhaiyon main hum
Deewangi nahi to isay aur kya kahein
Insaan dhundte rahe Parchahiyon main hum.....
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«Reply #27 on: January 09, 2005, 09:48:45 AM »
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Thanks waheed(u r welcome)...

very nice waheed....

her kesi ki jindagi ki gheyrayeo mey utra na kro,
mehfil mey reh ker khud ko tanha samjha na kro,
or bhi hungey tumahrye jeysey unsey baat kerkey apna dil dukhaya na kro,
deewangi nahi esey ek jindgi ka toofa samjho jo her kesi ko melta nahi,
her parchayeo mey insaan ko dhunda na kro,
keo es jalim duniya mey koi pyar ko samjhey esa koi nahi,
dil ki gheyrayeo mey jo utrey esa koi aks nahi.
bhari mehfil mey thamey jo tumahra haath eysa koi shaks nahi...
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«Reply #28 on: January 09, 2005, 10:48:35 PM »
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Thanks waheed(you r welcome)...

very nice waheed....

her kesi ki jindagi ki gheyrayeo mey utra na kro,
mehfil mey reh ker khud ko tanha samjha na kro,
or bhi hungey tumahrye jeysey unsey baat kerkey apna dil dukhaya na kro,
deewangi nahi esey ek jindgi ka toofa samjho jo her kesi ko melta nahi,
her parchayeo mey insaan ko dhunda na kro,
keo es jalim duniya mey koi pyar ko samjhey esa koi nahi,
dil ki gheyrayeo mey jo utrey esa koi aks nahi.
bhari mehfil mey thamey jo tumahra haath eysa koi shaks nahi...



ur welcome sonu................  nice wordings...........superb.........  zabardast likhi ho sonu.............

sonu ............... jagjeet singh ki ek ghazal main sunta hoon........shayad javed akhtar ki likhi gayee ghazal hai............ dhayaan se padhna....mujhe bahot pasand hai yeh ghazal.............   :lol:


aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa
jo bhii degaa vahii Khudaa degaa


meraa qaatil hii meraa munsib hai
kyaa mere haq mein faisalaa degaa


zindagii ko qariib se dekho
isakaa cheharaa tumhen rulaa degaa


hamase puuchho dostii kaa silaa
dushmanon kaa bhii dil hilaa degaa


ishq kaa zahar pii liyaa "Faakir"
ab masiihaa bhii kyaa davaa degaa...................
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«Reply #29 on: January 12, 2005, 08:58:22 AM »
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shukriya (u r welcome) waheed...

waheed bahot he gazel hia haan haved ahkhtar ji ki likhi huye hia yea gazel achi hai kuch gazeley eysi huti hai key unko bar bar padney koi dil kerta hai or kuch esi huti hia key unmey dhoob janey ko dil kerta hia or kuch eysi huti hai jinko sunker sirf runey ko dil kerta hia.
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