**Ek haseen sa ajnabi** by Rahim

by dead heart on February 19, 2010, 02:58:44 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 22, 2010, 08:54:23 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu di...

Hmm..Ok..Mager yaad rakho ek baat Rahim ki...Intezar main kayi log maregaye..Kahin woh yeh sochta ho ke tum dikhaoge raasta mohobat ka!!!



Iqraar karne main der kahin dard ka sabab na banjaye 'Geet',
Rahim tanha hai toh bas isiliye ke keh nahin paaya usse...
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«Reply #16 on: February 23, 2010, 07:30:55 PM »
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ye bat bhi sahi hai per iss baar mamla thoda pechida hai bata nhi sakti hu..per khuda pe sab chhoda hai ab tou aur uspe poora yakin hai vo jo raasta chunga sahi hi hoga......

Kahungi use ek din apne dil ki baat,
per abhi raasta thoda sa anjan hai,
izahar karne k liye sirrf ek pal chahiye..
lekin abhi merra ajnabi thoda sa nadaan hai......
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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2010, 09:34:51 PM »
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Hmm ok...Haan usually such things are kept quite personal...I understand about that...Btw bahaut acha shaer likha hai apne...Hmm jaise mere lavs cheen gaye hon yeh shaer parr kar... Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: February 23, 2010, 09:38:06 PM »
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Waise toh mohobat main sabhi nadan hojate hai Geet,
Kahin aisi nadani ki wajah se tumhari mohobat anjan na hojaye...
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«Reply #19 on: February 23, 2010, 09:48:05 PM »
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thnx for liking n understanding.....

Jante the kisi ko phir bhi dhokha kha baithe hai,
apne zakhmo ko khamkha hi jala baithe hai,
aaj jis ajnabi ko chahne laga hai dil..
kam se kam vo tou mujhe palko pe saja baithe hai......
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«Reply #20 on: February 24, 2010, 09:54:34 AM »
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Palkon pe sajaya hai toh dil main utar jaoge Geet,
Dua hai jo Rahim na kar saka woh tum hi karlo...
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«Reply #21 on: February 24, 2010, 07:23:20 PM »
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Koshhish ki hai phir se ek rishta banane ki..
per janti nhi kitni taqat hai ise nibhane ki.......
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«Reply #22 on: February 24, 2010, 07:37:19 PM »
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thnx ji..
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«Reply #23 on: February 24, 2010, 07:42:26 PM »
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Thnx Shihab bhaijan aur Geet jee..Haan bhai bada haseen sa ajnabi hai..

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Koshhish ki hai phir se ek rishta banane ki..
per janti nhi kitni taqat hai ise nibhane ki.......

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«Reply #24 on: February 24, 2010, 08:21:59 PM »
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Tu bas himat karke ek baar uska haath thamle Geet,
Phir dekh taqdeer usse teri takkat khud ba khud banaegi...
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«Reply #25 on: February 25, 2010, 12:57:36 PM »
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Yeh kalam ek ajnabi ke naam hai...Bada haseen ajnabi tha...Pata nahin kaun thi mager dil choo gayi..Yeh uss ajnabi ko dedicated hai...

Masoomiyat unke chehre se beh rahi thi shabnam ki tarha,
Anjan hum unse aur who humse thi bilkul na-mile logon ki tarha…

Masroof the who apne kam main itna ke bhool baithe hum samne hai,
Hum bhi unpar like rahe the unhe dekh kar bilkul choron ki tarha…

Unki nigahon main dikh raha tha kuch chup mager sailabi sapno ka manzar,
Shayad unki khwahishat bhi adhuri rehgayi; humare sapnon ki tarha…

Woh mere saath hokar bhi saath na thi ‘Rahim’,
Par unka ehsaas dil main lag raha tha behti fiza ki tarha…


~Rahim~

Bohot Khoob Rahim
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«Reply #26 on: February 25, 2010, 07:03:02 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di...
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«Reply #27 on: February 01, 2011, 01:46:20 PM »
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kya baat hai janab .........aapki rachna ek se bada ek hai

achha lagta hai aapki ehesaas ko padhna
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«Reply #28 on: February 01, 2011, 02:55:35 PM »
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kya baat hai janab .........aapki rachna ek se bada ek hai

achha lagta hai aapki ehesaas ko padhna
Ek bahaut purane kalam ko yaad karane ka shukriya Ek Tamana jee..
Aur shukriya pasand farmane ka..
Khush rahiye..!
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