<>*Khoti rahi main*<>

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«Reply #15 on: January 08, 2011, 12:14:41 PM »
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Sach he sach, Saahill aur aapki baaton me jhalakta hai
Kaise samjhein internet k logoko vichar yhi khalta hai

Humein he khud par controll kar yahaan par rehnaa hai
Sab kuchh kalpana hai,shabdon ka khel he samajhna hai

Emotional hokar kisi ki baaton mai nahi ab behna hai
Haan kavita ko he pradhaan samajh ab yaha likhna hai
Thanks a lot both of you....for sach a wonderful guidance... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: January 08, 2011, 12:42:31 PM »
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<>*Khoti rahi main*<>


Sab kuch paane ki khwaish me bhaagti rahi main
Jo tha mere paas apna iss bhaagne me khoti rahi main

Internet ki duniya me rishte banati rahi main yun
K khuun k rishte ,mere apnon ko hi khoti rahi  main

Ponchhne ki khaatir sabke aansu hath badhte rahe mere
Apne aaspaas walon k ankahe ehsaas bhi inme khoti rahi main

Mobile me sms k jariye logon k kareeb rahi itna harpal
Saheliyon k sath kiti parties ki mehfil ka maza khoti rahi main

Ek jhuti pehchan k piche bhaagti rahi kai saal kuch yun k
Apna asli wajuud apni asli pehchaan bhi inme khoti rahi main…!!!


Bahut bahut Khoob Anuji..

bahut Ache Vishey Par Aapne Apni Kavita Likhi Hai,Bahut Ache

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«Reply #17 on: January 08, 2011, 02:23:31 PM »
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ufff ye kya Kasak--
itna sachha kaise likha.
mujhe ye padhkar apni Jaipurwali ki buri tarah yaad sata gai:(
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kitni kosis kari mene uski aisi latt chuddane ki..
afsoos ki woh aaj bhi roya krti hai--mai uska ol frnd hokar usko  Online aane se mana krta rha--
internet me usne kisi se pyar kiya ab Sirf toota dil liye firti hai--
wese koi kuch nahi khota kisi se duur nahi hota bas thodi si doori hi aati hai real lyf me--baad me sab samajh jaate hain.
isme dukhi hone ki baat nhi.
be happy re.
khus rho
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«Reply #18 on: January 08, 2011, 02:56:33 PM »
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well dear all respected members,

aaj anamika ji ne ye post karke jane kitne dilo ke zhakham hare kar diye.....well jo real post thi uski theme kuch alag thi aur relpy kuch alag se aa rahe he .....but ha uske aaspaas hi he koi jayda dur nahi he......

aap sabhi sochenge ki ye MG kya bakwas likh raha h...to dosto me aap sabhi ki batoo se reply se 50% sahmat hu........but ha 100% nahi....kyuki sach kahu to jitna yaha fake he utne hi sacche log bhi he yaha.....well jayda to kuch kah nahi paunga....but ha agar internet nahi hota to shayad meri zindagi adhuri hoti....ya zindagi bas saas lene tak hi simit hoti wo zindagi nahi hoti......me bas kulmilakar ye kahna chahta hu ki internet ki duniya me bure log jayda he but aache bhi he itna yakin he muje aur aap bhi rakhe.....isne muje meri duniya di he so i m thankful to internet forever.....muje internet se koi shikayat nahi.....ha dard aur gum milna ek alag baat he .........wo real life me bhi hota he koi aacha insan milta he koi bura milta he......but i m not agreed ki yaha sab fake he.no way ji......i repeat ki muje meri duniya internet ne hi di he ......bas ye hi kahna chahta hu........me us insan ko aaj bhi god hi manta hu aur hamesha rahgea........ha dard bhi usne diya .....bahot diya.....but god to god he wo khushi deta he to use dard dene ka bhi haq he ......aur god se shikayat kesi......aur ha dosto agar kabhi internet per kisi se koi rishta ban jaye to use bich me chod mat dena ........akhiri saas tak use nibhane ki bachane ki koshish karna........like sports man.....last tak haar nahi mane........ek din aapki jeet hogi.........well bahot kuch bol gaya .....ab yahi stop karta hu.....koi bhi ise personal na le aur fir bhi agar kisi ki bhavna ko hurt hua ho is se to me sorry feel karta hu......
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«Reply #19 on: January 08, 2011, 03:05:07 PM »
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oye hoye kya baat kahi gud Matrix ji.
sirf kuch log Mehsus nhi krte isliye fake ko asli man lete hain...simple.
mai aapki baato se sahmat hun ji poora ka poora.
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«Reply #20 on: January 08, 2011, 03:05:44 PM »
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rajaji icon_king........i agree wid u 100% icon_flower........and same here.... love4 love4

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«Reply #21 on: January 08, 2011, 03:09:09 PM »
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internet ek bht achcha jariya hai logon se contact me rehne ka lekin kuch log iska galat fayda uthate hain ye post unhi k liye likhi gai thi jiske jawab bhi makul aaye......

haan yahan kuch achche log bhi mil jate hain jinse zindagi bhar ka rishta jud jata hai...aur kai baar zindagi bhra ka dard bhi mil jata hai kuch galat rishton se.........

bas ek hi rqst hai sabse k kabhi kisi k feelings k sath na khelen...khud sachcherahen aur soch samjhke kuch bhi karen.....
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«Reply #22 on: January 08, 2011, 03:24:14 PM »
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nirala ji aur anamika ji ke agree hone se muje kuch aur likhne ki bhuk bad gayi he so likha raha hu pls aaj muje jhelo aap sab......plssssssssssssss

ab me sidhi baat karta hu........fake on internet is only love......
sabka yahi lafda he ladka ladki mile net pe lov hua fir jagda aur fir break up.........isme shaq bhi ata he........vishwas bhi tuta he.........dil tuta he........sab kuch hua he ........

yahi hota he na dosto........internet isiliye india me badnaam he......

me aaj apko ek nayi theme deta hu ek baar iske liye sochna jarur......

mana aap ladke ho ya ladki ho apko internet pe koi mila ya mili......apko attraction hua ...cam pe dekha ....batee hui.....sms huey......fir ek din shaq hua.....wo flirt kar rahi he ya kar raha he........ok......ab kya break up.....??

agar koi sacche dil se aatma se pyar kare to pls for god sack sab bhul jaye........apko pata chale she or he is flirting with u.....karne do use.....if u really love him or her....then go thourgh with ur activities.........wo dard de aap pyar do wo dard de aap pyar do..........karte raho sacchce dil.........ek din uske paas apko pyar karne ke siwa koi option nahi bachega........kyuki dosto har galat baat ki galat harkat ki limit hoti he but pyar ki koi limit nahi hoti ........ek din wo ye sab karke haar jayega ya jayegi........aur apne jo itna pyar diya he uske samne natmastak hokar gutne tek degi a dega......yaar pyar me kya return ki umiid rakhna ........pyar to niswarth bhav he ........ba diye jao diye jao......jitn dogey utna hi badta jayega

aur agar in case ki esa nahi bhi hota he ..........to bhi yaroo....apke dil me ye proud to forever rahega ki mene ek se pyar kiya aur usme apna sabkuch jhok diya......dosto ye jo khayal he na wo insan ko khud ki najro me itna uncha bana deta he ki fir use kisi baat ka koi fark nahi padta........aur jo apko cheat karta he ya karti he wo khud hi ki najro me hamesha ke liye gir jayega ya gir jayega.........

yakin mano dosto jo lkiha wo sach he aur sach ke siwa kuch nahi......jo koi internet pe love ke case me he wo isko jarur aajma kar dekhe...result will be posetive......god bless u all
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«Reply #23 on: January 08, 2011, 03:27:23 PM »
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Anamika di, Saahil jee, Koyal di aur Matrix guy...

Bahaut bahaut khoob likha hai ap sabhi ne..

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«Reply #24 on: January 08, 2011, 03:36:41 PM »
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Yeh topic aisa hai kay main bhi kuch likhna chahunga..Mujhe kabhi bhi kisi se internet par pyaar nahin hua mager kuch kehna chahunga..

Matrix guy ne theek kaha..sab fake nahin hote..Honestly main nahin hoon..Jaisa main yahan hoon waisa hi real life main hoon..

Internet ne meri bhi duniya banayi hai..Yeh site mujhe moka deti hai hasne ka..Honestly..jab yahan post karta hoon aur log daad dete hai, mera dil khushi se bhar jata hai..Jab yahan koi kehta hai 'Rahim kyun dard pe likte ho, khushi pe likho' ya koi kehta hai 'Rahim dil nikal kay rakh dete ho' toh doston wakei mujhe badi khushi milti hai..

Jahan tak pyaar ka sawal hai, I beleive pyaar hota hai..Aur yahan wakei do logon ko ek dusre se pyaar hota hai..I can re-call Geet di kay lavz 'kisi ki personality uske lavzon se pata chalti hai'..Yahan lavz hi lavz hai..Main yeh site ki baat kar raha hoon..On general, pyaar ho sakta hai ager do dilon main sachayi ho..

Har baar ki tarha ek mesaage chorrna chahta hoon..chahe internet ho ya real life, ager koi shaks apko khubsoorat lagta hai in terms of personality, ager aisa lagta hai kay ap usse chahne lage hai toh keh de..Shayad ap kisi ki tanhai dhoor kar sake ya uski zindagi bana de..

Khush rahiye..!



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«Reply #25 on: January 08, 2011, 04:22:27 PM »
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rahimi agree wid u...agar pyar karte ho tokeh do,,,,mera to prob hi ye h k main kahe bina reh nahi sakti.............

rajaji.....sab aap jaise nahi ho sakte...na sab me itna patience hota h ji....aapki salaah sahi h ..par karna bht mushkil bht hi mushkil..ye aap achche se jante ho...jo kuch hua .....its not possible for every1 to suffer...
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«Reply #26 on: January 08, 2011, 05:12:48 PM »
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mai pakk gaya ye pyar pyar internet ki baate padh kar--
uffff kuch masti ho jaye ab---
bahar niklo oo deewano
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jo jesa hai usko wesa rahne di--
khud ka hi faisala hota hai aakhir ye sab jante hai bhai log.
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«Reply #27 on: January 08, 2011, 05:24:58 PM »
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chalo KB hum hi kuch karte hain..ye sab to yunhi chalta rahega...
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«Reply #28 on: January 08, 2011, 05:56:46 PM »
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haan yar ---
pak paka gaya mai .
kuch dhamaal karo--
mai ab aa gaya hun na mst maula sa:)
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«Reply #29 on: January 09, 2011, 03:44:48 AM »
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dil ki paak baaton mein ye Internet ye sms kuch maayine nahin rakhta Kasak ji... Niraala ji... Koyal ji... Matrix ji... aur baaki sab log bhi...

jaane hum rishte nibhaate nibhaate kaha kho jaate hain... ab wo duniya hakeekat ki ho ya Internet ki ya phir online rehne ki... har jagah bas yakeen hi hota hai jo hum ek doosre par karte hain... to phir hakeekat mein to bas chehra hi nazar aata hai.. aur jaane us chehre ke peechhe ka kya raaz hai... bas logo ka milna likha hai, chaahe jis tarah mil jaayein... dhokha aur fareb to insaan ki hi fitrat hai... phir chahe wo saamne mile ya Internet par... har insaan ek saa nahin hota aap sab jaante hi honge... aur jahaan tak Kasak ji ne wajood khone ki baat ki hai... aisa kuch nahin hai... har rang hai zindagi ke, kuch na badalta hai na khatm hota hai Kasak ji... bas Yakeen banaaye rakhiye aapas mein... aur waise bhi khud ko alag dikhaane ki jaroorat hi kya hai kisi ko... dusro ki parwaah na kar ke hum to wahi ho sakte hain na jo real life mein hain... aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya itna wakt diya padhne ko... ummeed hai ki meri baat kisi ko buri na lagi hogi...

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