Khuda ka noor...

by brokenbyluv on September 02, 2010, 06:34:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 04, 2010, 05:24:40 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley............

bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob,behtrin,...atisundar....bahut pyara likha hai bbl ji.....sach mein mja aa gya padhkar.....

Veryyyyyyyy nice koyal.......kya baat hai...kya baat hai....badi dhun mein likha hai tumne....isse toh gunguna kar pura geet hi ban jaaye.....
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«Reply #16 on: September 04, 2010, 06:04:19 PM »
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Manzil khud ba khud mil jaayegi
Agr dil mai suchchi mohabaat jag jaayegi
Ye khaab poore honge kaise nahi
Ik shama tu utha,
Dooji khud ba khud jal jaayegi
Kal bhi banta hai hamare aaj se
Kal ye baat bhi samjh aa jaayegi
Karna hi hoga bhraosa
Khud par
Apni hasti bhi, khud ko mil jaayegi
Bas ek nigaah mai dil milta hai
Warna shayd sadiyaaN lag jaayeingi
Mil jaaye jab ruh se ruh
Khuda ke noor ban jaayegi
Tu bas ek qadam bada aage
Phir daikh na ek din kaise
Har khwaahish tujhse milne
Khud aayegi
Manzil khud ba khud miljaayegi
Manzil kudh ba khud miljaayegi!!
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #17 on: September 05, 2010, 11:57:40 AM »
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Wah wah wah Nikhaa-di tariff karna koi aapse seekhe........Thanks a lot.di.....


Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley............

bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob,behtrin,...atisundar....bahut pyara likha hai bbl ji.....sach mein mja aa gya padhkar.....

Veryyyyyyyy nice koyal.......kya baat hai...kya baat hai....badi dhun mein likha hai tumne....isse toh gunguna kar pura geet hi ban jaaye.....

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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #18 on: September 07, 2010, 02:42:59 PM »
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Awesome geet di.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause
zindgi kya he, usse samajaye he aap ne.....


Gr8 poem and presentation Geet-di....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

zindagi hai dua, rab ki adaa
kahe ke shukriya, jee lo na…
laye the ji kya, le jaayen bhi kya
kahe ke shukriya, jee lo na…

hai haseen yeh lamhe
jo mile kam hai sakhee
aise vaise yuhni kahin dekho
kabhi bevajah hum na gavaayein






Shurkiya dev n koyal..very nice lines koyal nikaar ji said true waqai ye lines ko gungunane ko mann kar raha hai...
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«Reply #19 on: September 07, 2010, 02:48:15 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob geet Bahoot Badiya !

wah wah wah kaya baat hai BBL and Koyal. bahoot khoob!!!!

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley............

bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob,behtrin,...atisundar....bahut pyara likha hai bbl ji.....sach mein mja aa gya padhkar.....

Veryyyyyyyy nice koyal.......kya baat hai...kya baat hai....badi dhun mein likha hai tumne....isse toh gunguna kar pura geet hi ban jaaye.....


Merre is thread per tou waqai khuda ka noor hai jo nikhaar ji,pooja ji aur sophiji k comments naseeb hue ek lambe arse baad...aap sab ka tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #20 on: September 07, 2010, 02:54:20 PM »
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Manzil khud ba khud mil jaayegi
Agr dil mai suchchi mohabaat jag jaayegi
Ye khaab poore honge kaise nahi
Ik shama tu utha,
Dooji khud ba khud jal jaayegi
Kal bhi banta hai hamare aaj se
Kal ye baat bhi samjh aa jaayegi
Karna hi hoga bhraosa
Khud par
Apni hasti bhi, khud ko mil jaayegi
Bas ek nigaah mai dil milta hai
Warna shayd sadiyaaN lag jaayeingi
Mil jaaye jab ruh se ruh
Khuda ke noor ban jaayegi
Tu bas ek qadam bada aage
Phir daikh na ek din kaise
Har khwaahish tujhse milne
Khud aayegi
Manzil khud ba khud miljaayegi
Manzil kudh ba khud miljaayegi!!


bahut khoob pooja ji...
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«Reply #21 on: September 13, 2010, 03:57:31 PM »
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Manzil khud ba khud mil jaayegi
Agr dil mai suchchi mohabaat jag jaayegi
Ye khaab poore honge kaise nahi
Ik shama tu utha,
Dooji khud ba khud jal jaayegi
Kal bhi banta hai hamare aaj se
Kal ye baat bhi samjh aa jaayegi
Karna hi hoga bhraosa
Khud par
Apni hasti bhi, khud ko mil jaayegi
Bas ek nigaah mai dil milta hai
Warna shayd sadiyaaN lag jaayeingi
Mil jaaye jab ruh se ruh
Khuda ke noor ban jaayegi
Tu bas ek qadam bada aage
Phir daikh na ek din kaise
Har khwaahish tujhse milne
Khud aayegi
Manzil khud ba khud miljaayegi
Manzil kudh ba khud miljaayegi!!




Bhut hi khoob Pooja jii kya baat hai...........nice work, keep writing



aslam
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #22 on: September 14, 2010, 01:27:11 PM »
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Wah Pooja-di kya khoob likha hai ji.....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Manzil khud ba khud mil jaayegi
Agr dil mai suchchi mohabaat jag jaayegi
Ye khaab poore honge kaise nahi
Ik shama tu utha,
Dooji khud ba khud jal jaayegi
Kal bhi banta hai hamare aaj se
Kal ye baat bhi samjh aa jaayegi
Karna hi hoga bhraosa
Khud par
Apni hasti bhi, khud ko mil jaayegi
Bas ek nigaah mai dil milta hai
Warna shayd sadiyaaN lag jaayeingi
Mil jaaye jab ruh se ruh
Khuda ke noor ban jaayegi
Tu bas ek qadam bada aage
Phir daikh na ek din kaise
Har khwaahish tujhse milne
Khud aayegi
Manzil khud ba khud miljaayegi
Manzil kudh ba khud miljaayegi!!

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