main ghar ka mukhiya hoon... soudagar

by soudagar on July 22, 2012, 04:57:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2012, 12:47:48 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji...!!!
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«Reply #16 on: July 24, 2012, 04:46:01 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khawahish ji......
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«Reply #17 on: July 24, 2012, 05:24:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji...
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«Reply #18 on: July 24, 2012, 05:31:02 PM »
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sochta hoon gar meri bhi yahi raah hoti to naa aaj koi pareshani oti
dekhkar khud ki haalat yahi lagta hai achhai par burai bhaari hai

mujhe mouke par chunna tha gandhi ji ki photo lage note ko
maine chuna gandhi ji ke aadarsh ko yahan galti meri sari hai

lagta hai mujhe gandhi ji ke to aadarsh chale gaye sath unke
ab to gandhi ki photo lagi note se hi chalti dunia sari hai

I think beta, this one is the BEST from your end. whole creation is too good, effective, touching lines.and the above lines LAJAWAB ..EXCELLANT, WONDERFUL.  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: July 26, 2012, 02:14:05 AM »
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tah -e dil se aapka bahut bahut shukriya suman aunty ji..... aise hi apna sneh banaye rakhein mujh par
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«Reply #20 on: July 26, 2012, 05:17:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ripan dev ji
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«Reply #21 on: July 29, 2012, 03:05:53 AM »
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bahut b ahut bahut shukriya suman aunty ji
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«Reply #22 on: August 14, 2013, 12:27:04 PM »
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thanks to all readers
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