Paigaam... (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on September 14, 2007, 12:15:13 PM
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Uthhta hua maut ka, toofan nazar aata hai,
Lahu mein dooba hua, Insaan nazar aata hai...

Sehma hua dil liye, phirte hai kamre kamre,
Apno ke sir pe baitha, Shaitaan nazar aata hai...

Laftejigar karta hai chaak, Apni Maa ke jigar ko,
Mamta mein bhi usko, Ehsaan nazar aata hai...

Ajanami hui kali phir, masli gayi garabh mein,
Kitna Bebas sa hua, Bhagwaan nazar aata hai...

Beech Chowk ek laash, koi phek ke chal diya,
Sheher Sheher kaisa, Shamshaan nazar aata hai...

Jism par lapeta Kas kar, chadar ka kona humne,
Kyon Ishq mein hawas ka, Haiwaan nazar aata hai...

Talasha dil ka har kona, na dhadkan mili na rooh,
Dekho ek aks aaine mein, Bejaan nazar aata hai...

Milta hai sukoon kuch likh kar, koi jab yeh kehta hai,
Tumhari nazm mein "Shikha", Paigaam nazar aata hai...


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Ek CheerHaran ko aaj phir, dekha kiye tamashaayi,
Phir Daanv par laga, ek bezubaan nazar aata hai..

Har Darakht ro ke bola, “Boodhe Bargadd ko na kaato”,
Ghar bujargo ki dua bin, bada Viraan nazar aata hai…

Ghughroo ki awaaz mein, dab ke reh gayi siskiyaan,
Matlabi Bazaaron jaisa, yeh jahaan nazar aata hai…
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2007, 01:49:14 PM »
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Wow ! Superb =D>

Kya Paigaam diya hai ! =D> =D> =D>

Very very good ! Bahut khoob !
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2007, 02:02:19 PM »
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Thanks Rajbir Ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2007, 07:44:53 PM »
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It is very good.  
Anjaam bhi bohot acha hai. Rajbir Ji already gave compliments, all I can do is copy them.
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2007, 10:01:07 PM »
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=D> =D> =D> WAH WAH WAH... KAYA BAAT HAI...

BAHOOT KHOOB SHIKHA...

Ek ek shabd Trasha hua.... bahoot khoob!!  =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2007, 12:01:30 AM »
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wow...shikha di...samajh me nahi aa raha kya boloon...
shabd hi nahi hai mere paas ....
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2007, 11:25:02 PM »
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wa wah ap toh sabko paigam de rahi hain

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:D :D :D
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2007, 04:53:46 PM »
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bahut ache shikha
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2007, 06:25:30 PM »
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Shikha, Its so deep...I read again and again and again....I dont have words....just fabulous =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2007, 01:52:13 PM »
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Thanks a lot... Ricky, Pooja di, Punam, Sahiba, Samnoj and Talat...

It feels nice, you people like it... Usual Smile Thanks for appreciation....
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2007, 09:45:52 PM »
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Ek CheerHaran ko aaj phir, dekha kiye tamashaayi,
Phir Daanv par laga, ek bezubaan nazar aata hai..

Har Darakht ro ke bola, “Boodhe Bargadd ko na kaato”,
Ghar bujargo ki dua bin, bada Viraan nazar aata hai…

Ghughroo ki awaaz mein, dab ke reh gayi siskiyaan,
Matlabi Bazaaron jaisa, yeh jahaan nazar aata hai…
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2007, 04:00:38 AM »
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Very good Shikha =D>  Maine chaha ki yahan kuch likhun, lekin tumhari is poem ke aage mere lafz hi nahin jud rahe hain !! Too good !
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2007, 04:37:46 PM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"

Uthhta hua maut ka, toofan nazar aata hai,
Lahu mein dooba hua, Insaan nazar aata hai...

Sehma hua dil liye, phirte hai kamre kamre,
Apno ke sir pe baitha, Shaitaan nazar aata hai...

Laftejigar karta hai chaak, Apni Maa ke jigar ko,
Mamta mein bhi usko, Ehsaan nazar aata hai...

Ajanami hui kali phir, masli gayi garabh mein,
Kitna Bebas sa hua, Bhagwaan nazar aata hai...

Beech Chowk ek laash, koi phek ke chal diya,
Sheher Sheher kaisa, Shamshaan nazar aata hai...

Jism par lapeta Kas kar, chadar ka kona humne,
Kyon Ishq mein hawas ka, Haiwaan nazar aata hai...

Talasha dil ka har kona, na dhadkan mili na rooh,
Dekho ek aks aaine mein, Bejaan nazar aata hai...

Milta hai sukoon kuch likh kar, koi jab yeh kehta hai,
Tumhari nazm mein "Shikha", Paigaam nazar aata hai...
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Ek CheerHaran ko aaj phir, dekha kiye tamashaayi,
Phir Daanv par laga, ek bezubaan nazar aata hai

Har Darakht ro ke bola, “Boodhe Bargadd ko na kaato”,
Ghar bujargo ki dua bin, bada Viraan nazar aata hai…

Ghughroo ki awaaz mein, dab ke reh gayi siskiyaan,
Kitna matlabi yahan se, yeh jahaan nazar aata hai…
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A wonderful creation Shikha.... Just amazing....
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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2007, 01:19:59 AM »
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Nice words again Shikha..
In this poem you have very beautifully conveyed  topics which are always hard to explain.
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«Reply #14 on: September 21, 2007, 11:12:00 AM »
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Thanks a lot... Talat, Jagdish and Ricky... I m glad you people like and appreciated it.


Talat... Do write Something... Koi bahane-baazi nahin chalegi... Usual Smile Its a request...
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