Woh Shayar Bhi Kya Shayar "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 07, 2010, 05:17:30 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 10, 2010, 07:19:01 PM »
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VERY NICE  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
KHWAISH JI.
AAP SACHMUCH KAID NAHIN HAIN.
UUDNE KE LIYE PANKHON KE MOHTAZ NAHIN HAIN.


Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sureshji..

Jo Aapne Iss Kalaam ko Samjha.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: March 11, 2010, 05:55:52 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji.ek se badke ek kavita likhte ho aap.bahut bahut khoob.marvelous creation.aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Thankyou Soooooooooooooo Much Dear madhu icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: March 12, 2010, 07:33:11 PM »
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Jis Halaat Se Hum Guzarte Hai
Unhe Qaid Kar Lete Hai Apni Tehreer mein

Zubaan Ki Zaroorat Nahi Humein!!!
Apni Baat Keh Dete Hai Hum Lafzon ki Tasveer Mein

Woh Shayar Bhi kya Shayar!!!!!
Jiske Haath bande Ho Kisi Zanjeer mein

Dil Ka Dard Lafzon Se Bayaan Kar Deta Hoon!!!
Aur Kuch Bhi To Nahi Hai "Khwaish" Ke paas Jaageer Mein

Acha Hoon Yaa Bura Hoon!!! Bas Yehi Hoon!!!!!
"Khwaish" Likhta Nahi kabhi Kisi bandi Hui Lakeer Mein

Shukriya Ada Zaroor Karta Hoon unka Jo Kuch Mashwara Dete Hai!!!
Kuch To Dum Hoga Unki Di Hui Tadbeer mein

"Khwaish" Likhta Rahega Humesha Dil Ke Kalam Se
Sukh-Dukh Ka Kya Hai Woh To Likha Hai Har Ek Ki Taqdeer Mein

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Wah Khwaish ji behad achchhe ehsaas, bahut khoob...

Ye raah 'Adab' ki hai chalna hai samhal ke,
Sau husn ayaan kar doo bas aik ghazal mein.
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«Reply #18 on: April 21, 2010, 07:02:56 PM »
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AAPNEY BAHUT GAHRI BAAT KAHI HAI BAHUT ACHCHA LIKHA HAI KHAWAISH JI...KUCH LOGON KO MASHWERA DENEY KI BURI AADAT HAI........AAP JIS TARAH SEY CHAHAIN APNI BAAT RAKH SAKTEY HAIN.....AUR MAIN IMPROVISATION PER BELIEVE RAKHTI HOON........AUR UNN LOGON SEY GUZARISH HAI...... PLZ BINA MANGEY MASHWARA NAA DAIN AUR (P.M) NA BHEJAIN.....!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aapne Pasand Farmaya, Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Shebaji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2010, 12:58:59 PM »
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bahut hi badhiya likha hai khwaish ji...sach mein bahut hi umda...

Thankyou Sooooooooo Much Geetji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #20 on: July 14, 2010, 01:07:19 PM »
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wah kya bat he~~

kuchh meri or se~

"kabhi jab tanhai me 'Abhi' khuda se mulakqaat hoti he,
 dil se shabda nikalte he kisi shayari ki nayi barsaat hoti he"
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«Reply #21 on: July 14, 2010, 01:09:51 PM »
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dil ka har pehlu aapne khol k rakh diya....
apne likhne ki wajah bhi bata di
kaise likh lete hain aap itna khub surat ye bhi bata diya
aur likhne ki nai surat bhi samjha di love4

aapki iss peshkash ne bht kuch sikha diya khwaish ji...ek alag andaaz jo hai aapke likhne ka wo kahan se aaya wo bhi samjh gaye hum ji.....bht hi khub bht hi pyara likha hai aapne
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«Reply #22 on: July 14, 2010, 01:10:20 PM »
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abhi tumhari 2 lines ..as usual mastam re
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«Reply #23 on: November 03, 2013, 12:44:20 AM »
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Khwahish jii aapne bahot hi achha likha hai.. alfaz km pad gye mere...
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