Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab ! -Panna 3:Occassion Specific Poetry

AbhiTamrakar

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«Reply #30 on: August 19, 2010, 02:04:39 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 19, 2010, 01:35:04 PM

Abhi ji, aap kaa wichaar aikdam thheek hai! Aapkaa swaagat hai! Meyraa aik qitaa kuchh yuun hai: jo shaayad aapkee baat ko aur bhee pushht kar deygaa:

Mein tumhain pyaar kartaa hun, sach hai; magar,
Farq padtaa hai kyaa: aik-tarfaa hai yeh!
Mein na jaanuun tumhain, na tumhaaraa patah;
Ho lugaat-e-jahaan, dhhaayee-harfaa hai yeh!!

The languages & the literature are infinite! And we're like the dhhaayee-harfaa (call it ishq or prem or sneh), whereas THEY are like that dictionary (lugat) that contains words of all the world-languages!!

- abd bundeli

mashallah bahutt khoob kaha he apne ~ bilkul sahi..
bahut khushi huyi ye jankar koi he jise mooltah hindi me likhna pasand he...meri kuchh rachnaye khud ko bahut akela paati thi ab tak~
khush rahiye~ likhte rahiye~


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #31 on: August 19, 2010, 02:05:55 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 19, 2010, 01:11:04 PM

Pattar ko jab heera bana rahe they tab aapne bataaya tha "me engineer hu"....... hello

ohh kshma prarthi hun fir to~


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #32 on: August 19, 2010, 02:41:21 PM »

"meri kuchh rachnaye khud ko bahut akela paati thi ab tak~" ABHI......agar wo tumhaari copy mai rahengi tou aur kya expect karte ho
Aur ye soch ki koi appriciate nahi kar paayega bhi galat hai...kam-jayada ho sakta hai.....jaise
kavi sammelan aur laughter challenge......sab ka IQ same tou nahi ho sakta...

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 19, 2010, 02:04:39 PM


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #33 on: August 19, 2010, 03:16:38 PM »

hmm par wo copy me anhi thi unhe mene share kiya kai jagaho par u know logo ki ek mentallity ban gayi ...

jaise -hindi me sirf kavitaye likhi jati he shayari nhai.
kavitaye padhne m maja nahi ata~ kahani type hoti he...

is tarah ki isiliye mene wo line likhi warna me likhna chhod to kabhi nahi sakta ....jindagi he kaise chhod du~

or yaar me appreciatin ka bhooka nhai hu sirf inhe likhne or padhne ka bhooka hun...koi appreciate na kare to na kare sabki apni pasand he~


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #34 on: August 19, 2010, 03:34:26 PM »

Tou kyu shikayat karte ho....tumhe kya pata kitne logo ne padha...
Bas baat appriciation par hi aa gayee....chuki kisi ne nahi kaha achhi hai....tumne socha akeli pad gayee....ye kyu nahi socha k achhi nahi likhi hain.... Giggle


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #35 on: August 19, 2010, 03:39:08 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 19, 2010, 03:34:26 PM

aji koi apko mile jo kahe mene achhi nahi likhi he please mere paas bhejna me paas bithauga halua poori khilauga or tab tak likh kar koshish karta rahuga jab tak use achhii na lage ~ me to tarasta hu koi kahe achhi nahi lagi~

koyal ji mene apko logo ke views bina unke likhe nahi bataye jo unhone likha na sirf mre liye balki or bhi logo ke liye wo bataya~ ya yu kahiye share kiya~


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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #36 on: August 19, 2010, 05:49:57 PM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 19, 2010, 02:04:39 PM

Bahut bahut shukriyah Abhi ji!

- abd bundeli


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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #37 on: August 19, 2010, 05:55:23 PM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 19, 2010, 03:39:08 PM

abhi ji poem dikhaiye.....main kehti hun bht buri hai...mujhe khani hai halwa puriii ....jaldi karo...


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«Reply #38 on: August 19, 2010, 11:02:03 PM »

chalo hum dono chalte hai ABHI k ghar hawa poori khane.......Sample tak to dikhaya nahi aur.....achha kaun kahega......aapki poems achhi hain tou kitni tariffffffffffffffffffffff karte hain hum anu-di....


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