Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

by nikki on August 01, 2005, 01:20:09 PM
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Sonu
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«Reply #210 on: July 19, 2006, 06:18:09 AM »
Kumar thanks so much... bahut bahut shukriya jo tuhanu tutey phutey shair sadey passend andey ney  :lol: ... bahut khoob.. wonderful sur..


sanu teyri yaada ney mar sutiya
jo betya si waqt teyrey nal sanu on bahra ney mar sutiya
hanjow nal hun likhi sadi taqdeer jandi hia
reth tey benadi haan teyri tasvir per samaender di lheyra ahkey mita jandi hai
hun taan bus teyriay yaada di tasvira menu bahut preysha kerdi hai
phula na likhi si jeydi mahubat di ketaab hun taan oh kandiya nalo jayda dil vech chubdi hai..
kidha es dil nu samjhava mey....
teyri yaada menu her veyley sataundiya ney  

Quote from: "skumar"
bahut sohna sonu...kya khoob hai...

Tu no aayo teri yaad aa ke
tera vada yaar waffa kar gyi
Mainu taang rahi pal pal teri
bechain nu chain tabah kar gyi
Buha kayi bari te haleya si
main socheya asar dua kar gyi
Jad kholeya kuj vi nahi labheya
mere nal majak hawa kar gyi...
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nikki
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«Reply #211 on: July 19, 2006, 08:52:10 PM »
Quote from: "dalwara1"
Nikki very nice poetry. Bahut sohne lafaz chunhe ne tusin.


Thank u so much brother..for appriciating my work. Tussi kuch nahi likhiya?
welcome to Yoindia!!!
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skumar
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«Reply #212 on: July 20, 2006, 08:11:00 AM »
nikki te sonu yar..... bot vadiya likheya hai..
yar sirf tusi hi ethe punjabi ch likhde ho..
so jaldi jaldi aya karo.. Usual Smile

Ishq ibadat Rabb di je koi is nu jaane
Hun ta ishq gali ch firda, lende firan niane
Samjhan majak ishq nu loki, Gaunde firde gaane
Par sajjna ishq na ena sasta, eh gal koi na jaane....
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Sonu
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«Reply #213 on: July 22, 2006, 02:46:41 AM »
kumar thanks... bahut bahut shukirya janab.... tey ehda kareya kro sadi post search ker leya kro koi na koi ketey na ketey punjabi form mil jauga  :lol:  :lol:  jadh tak asi nahi ahndey tedh tak bako posta tey reply ker daya kro  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:


bahut sohna likhaya hai kumar..

pyar di sadra vech pyar da mul koi na
dil dey ahgey dil da joor koina
lakh lukhi chahuuna ishq da majak kerna
per ishqaa nu es dard da elam koina
pyar dey es jhaan vech kaye luki abaadh hu gay tey kai barbadh hu gaye
kai ranjey baney tey kaye sheeri farha baney koi laila tey koi majnu baney
lukha ney her zanam vech pyar da makhul hi udahya hai
una dey saa mukh jaan badh uhna ishqa da ek majaar banaya hai...

Quote from: "skumar"
nikki te sonu yar..... bot vadiya likheya hai..
yar sirf tusi hi ethe punjabi ch likhde ho..
so jaldi jaldi aya karo.. Usual Smile

Ishq ibadat Rabb di je koi is nu jaane
Hun ta ishq gali ch firda, lende firan niane
Samjhan majak ishq nu loki, Gaunde firde gaane
Par sajjna ishq na ena sasta, eh gal koi na jaane....
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #214 on: July 22, 2006, 05:07:53 PM »
wowow good job by all....
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skumar
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«Reply #215 on: July 24, 2006, 04:55:23 AM »
shukriya sonu pankhuri n nikki ji...
bot hi sohna likheya hai sonu..
likhde raho dosto ise tarah..

kade fursat hove ta mil javi
tere darshan paun nu jee karda
tere kol beh ke dil bhar ke ron nu jee karda
je mil javega ta asi bach javage
aje hor jeen nu jee karda....... sad5
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Sonu
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«Reply #216 on: July 24, 2006, 04:58:29 AM »
thanks Pankhuri ji..

Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
wowow good job by all....
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Sonu
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«Reply #217 on: July 24, 2006, 05:04:33 AM »
your most welcome kumar ....

ok boss ji asi ehda hi likhdey ravangey...
ki gal ajj beda roon nu chit kerda keo gavanden ney phur too dukha deyta   glasses2  :lol:  

asi taan fursat vech hi huney haan per teyrey kol time koina
teyrey samney asi haan per teynu sanu taken da time koina
ek vari dilu avaj tey mar key vekh to apney samney pavenga sanu
pavey rava door hun per sanu apni nazra dey kol paveynga...
ek vari nazra tey apniya ghumaa sanu khul khada paveynga...

Quote from: "skumar"
shukriya sonu pankhuri n nikki ji...
bot hi sohna likheya hai sonu..
likhde raho dosto ise tarah..

kade fursat hove ta mil javi
tere darshan paun nu jee karda
tere kol beh ke dil bhar ke ron nu jee karda
je mil javega ta asi bach javage
aje hor jeen nu jee karda....... sad5
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skumar
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«Reply #218 on: July 24, 2006, 10:10:03 AM »
bot sohna likheya yar .
sonu yar nale tenu ta sab pta hai...

Kade jindgi dokha de jandi
kade dokha dindi takdeer rabba
kade kismat bewafa ho jandi
kade bewafa mathe di lakeer rabba.....
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Style_guru
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«Reply #219 on: July 24, 2006, 01:39:57 PM »
The Style Guru Says.......


Mnaa pyaar na kari nahi  ta rul javenga,
Daru diyan bottlan ch ghul javenga,

Tainu haasa v auna par hasya nai jana,
Dukh dil vich hona par dasya nai jaana.....
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nikki
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«Reply #220 on: July 27, 2006, 07:11:52 PM »
Thank u so much everyone for appriciating my work...Tussi sariyan ne vi bahut hi pyara likhiya hai...

rab aasre zindagi langha deni
tera naa laike jaan gavavange
tu mile chahein na mile
tainu saari umr pyar de sadke de ke bulavange
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skumar
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«Reply #221 on: July 28, 2006, 08:19:54 AM »
bot sohna likheya hai nikki ji....
nale tusi ini der kithe rahe ji..... bot dina bad aaye ho.. sab thek hai na?

Main tod lenda je oh Gulaab hundi
main jwab banda je oh swaal hundi
main apni neend kade na tutan dinda
je oh akh vich aaya khawab hundi
saare kehnde ne main koi nasha nahi karda
par fir vi main pee lainda dosto
je oh chandri sharaab hundi...
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Sonu
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«Reply #222 on: July 29, 2006, 03:04:25 AM »
kumar ji haan ji sanu peta hai dastan tuhadi.... thanku ji thanku boss ji....

bahut vadiya likhiya hai....

rab dey kheyd anukey ney
dil deiya tara najuk ney
kadi sadey nal dukha keesmat ker jandi hai tey kadey rab
kadey taqdeer hi makhul ker jandi hai
rab hi janey ki likhiya hai usney meyri taqdeer vech
jeyda her koi ahkey meyri keesmat di lakiyra nal kheydh janda hia

Quote from: "skumar"
bot sohna likheya yar .
sonu yar nale tenu ta sab pta hai...

Kade jindgi dokha de jandi
kade dokha dindi takdeer rabba
kade kismat bewafa ho jandi
kade bewafa mathe di lakeer rabba.....
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Sonu
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«Reply #223 on: July 29, 2006, 05:15:54 AM »
style ji... niky.. tey kumar bahut sohna likhiya hia....
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skumar
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«Reply #224 on: July 29, 2006, 05:58:04 AM »
shukriya ji sonu..... vadiya likheya hai...
lao ji eh 'usi' de nam hai....

Tere vichore ne ditti peed aisi
jehdi arse baad vi mukdi nahi
tenu rokeya par tu nahi rukeya
jive muthi vicho ret kade rukdi nahi
tere dil diya Rabb kare hoon pooriyan
sanu parvah apne kise sukh di nahi
tere bina ho gye jinda laash varge
te laash di kade koi rag dukhdi nahi....
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