एक दिन सबाब मे bekarar

by bekarar on January 09, 2011, 12:46:03 AM
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खुश्बू सी फिर आने लगी, सूखे गुलाब मे,
देखा है आज उसको, शब-ए-महताब मे,

वो आया तो गिले भूल गया, शिकवे नही रहे,
सोच था अब ना आउन्गा मे, उसके रुआब मे,

रूठे ही रहते वो अगर, ना कहता उनसे मे,
हर रात वो आते रहे हैं, मेरे खुआब मे,

अब उनका ज़िक्र क्या करूँ, क्या उनपे मे कहूँ,
रुसवा करे जो इश्क़ को, डूबो के शराब मे

चुप रहता मे भी तो, कभी लगती नही खबर
वो सब जो वो सुना गया, मुझको जवाब मे,

जो रहनुमा बने हैं तेरे, कभी मेरे साथ थे,
बेपर्दा हो चुके हैं, आज बैठे नक़ाब मे

कुछ पन्नों पे हँसी तो कुछ नम से गीले गीले
सब कुछ मिलेगा तुमको, मेरे दिल की किताब मे,

ना पूछो दर्द कितना और ये मुस्काने किसकी,
कमजोर ही रहा हुआ मे, थोड़ा हिसाब मे,

कैसी वफ़ादारी और कैसे एहसान मियाँ,
हैरान कर दिया मुझे, उसके जवाब ने,

मे खाक छानता रहा, जिसकी तलाश मे
मेरे ही दिल मे मिल गया, एक दिन सबाब मे
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2011, 01:50:36 AM »
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bahut acche
khas kar

jo beparda ho chuke wo baithe nakab mei
खुश्बू सी फिर आने लगी, सूखे गुलाब मे,
देखा है आज उसको, शब-ए-महताब मे,

वो आया तो गिले भूल गया, शिकवे नही रहे,
सोच था अब ना आउन्गा मे, उसके रुआब मे,

रूठे ही रहते वो अगर, ना कहता उनसे मे,
हर रात वो आते रहे हैं, मेरे खुआब मे,

अब उनका ज़िक्र क्या करूँ, क्या उनपे मे कहूँ,
रुसवा करे जो इश्क़ को, डूबो के शराब मे

चुप रहता मे भी तो, कभी लगती नही खबर
वो सब जो वो सुना गया, मुझको जवाब मे,

जो रहनुमा बने हैं तेरे, कभी मेरे साथ थे,
बेपर्दा हो चुके हैं, आज बैठे नक़ाब मे

कुछ पन्नों पे हँसी तो कुछ नम से गीले गीले
सब कुछ मिलेगा तुमको, मेरे दिल की किताब मे,

ना पूछो दर्द कितना और ये मुस्काने किसकी,
कमजोर ही रहा हुआ मे, थोड़ा हिसाब मे,

कैसी वफ़ादारी और कैसे एहसान मियाँ,
हैरान कर दिया मुझे, उसके जवाब ने,

मे खाक छानता रहा, जिसकी तलाश मे
मेरे ही दिल मे मिल गया, एक दिन सबाब मे

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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2011, 08:37:12 AM »
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kya baat hai bekaraar ji bahut hi badhiya...

Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2011, 02:59:58 PM »
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bht sweet bht pyari poem hai bekarar ji.........
specially 2nd one......
its so damn good.....
hats off for dis beautiful poem......
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2011, 03:15:14 PM »
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excellent creation  bekaraar ji...behad khubsurat feelings and wordings...dil me chubh gaye kai aashaar aapke.....bht mast ...
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2011, 09:03:48 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro...

Kya Kehne Aapke..Vaakai Lajawaab Shayar Hia Aap..Har ek sher Lajawaab!!!!

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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2011, 08:38:36 AM »
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bahut acche
khas kar

jo beparda ho chuke wo baithe nakab mei

bahoot shukriya aapki sarahna ke liye manoj ji....
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kya baat hai bekaraar ji bahut hi badhiya...

Intezar !

bahoot bahoot shukriya Intezar ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2011, 08:40:52 AM »
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bht sweet bht pyari poem hai bekarar ji.........
specially 2nd one......
its so damn good.....
hats off for dis beautiful poem......

manjil-e-ishq ji housala-afzai ke liye bahoot shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2011, 08:42:25 AM »
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excellent creation  bekaraar ji...behad khubsurat feelings and wordings...dil me chubh gaye kai aashaar aapke.....bht mast ...

KDK ji un sabhi aasharon ki taraf se aapka shukriya jinhone aapke dil ko chubhan pahunchai
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2011, 08:45:38 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro...

Kya Kehne Aapke..Vaakai Lajawaab Shayar Hia Aap..Har ek sher Lajawaab!!!!

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Kai baar Hum dost log milkar ek Mehfil si jamaa lete hai Sher-o-shayari ki, Ek Khwaish Si  Hai Ke Kabhi Aap Ke saath Bhi Baitne Ka Mauka Mile..

Hats Off!!!!! Thumbs UP


humesha ki tarah dil khol ke aapki tareef mili..yakinan aur behtar likhne ke liye aapke prashansa ke shabd madagaar sabit hote hain....dil se shukriya bhai khwaish
 
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2011, 09:32:38 AM »
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wah wah..bekararji...wah

kis kis line ke lie daad dun... sab kuchh bhu khub hai

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wah wah..bekararji...wah

kis kis line ke lie daad dun... sab kuchh bhu khub hai

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bahoot bahoot shukriya manjum ji aapne samay nikala aur meri is koshish ko pasand kiya   Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2011, 02:45:01 PM »
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Bahut Khub Bekrar Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Aur Susojit Aapki Kavita Hai Padhkar Accha Laga Applause Applause
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ghazal ko pasand farmane ka shukriya rishi ji  Usual Smile
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