कब तलक

by ramspathak on July 05, 2013, 11:23:59 PM
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कब तलक लोगों को लूटते जाओगे ,
वो दिन कब आएगा जब पछताओगे !

जिनकी दुआओं से राजा बन बैठे हो ,
उनकी ही नज़र से एक दिन गिर जाओगे !

मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2013, 12:16:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah bahut khoob. bade hi achche khayalon se saji hai aapki yeh rachna. aapko hazaron dili daad is kalaam par...

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2013, 12:49:54 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.Very nice.
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2013, 01:06:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause बहुत खूब
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2013, 02:28:30 AM »
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waah waah waah, bahut khoob deepak jee, dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2013, 02:31:22 AM »
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behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi ram jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2013, 02:53:54 AM »
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कब तलक लोगों को लूटते जाओगे ,
वो दिन कब आएगा जब पछताओगे !

जिनकी दुआओं से राजा बन बैठे हो ,
उनकी ही नज़र से एक दिन गिर जाओगे !

मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"


bahut khoob........!
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2013, 09:41:57 AM »
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bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2013, 11:00:41 AM »
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waah waah kya baat hai bahut khoob hai......
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2013, 12:20:09 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB..... Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2013, 11:58:59 PM »
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मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"

Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2013, 03:43:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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