कब तलक

by ramspathak on July 06, 2013, 04:53:59 AM
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कब तलक लोगों को लूटते जाओगे ,
वो दिन कब आएगा जब पछताओगे !

जिनकी दुआओं से राजा बन बैठे हो ,
उनकी ही नज़र से एक दिन गिर जाओगे !

मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2013, 05:46:20 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob. bade hi achche khayalon se saji hai aapki yeh rachna. aapko hazaron dili daad is kalaam par...

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2013, 06:19:54 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.Very nice.
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2013, 06:36:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause बहुत खूब
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2013, 07:58:30 AM »
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waah waah waah, bahut khoob deepak jee, dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2013, 08:01:22 AM »
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behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi ram jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2013, 08:23:54 AM »
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कब तलक लोगों को लूटते जाओगे ,
वो दिन कब आएगा जब पछताओगे !

जिनकी दुआओं से राजा बन बैठे हो ,
उनकी ही नज़र से एक दिन गिर जाओगे !

मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"


bahut khoob........!
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2013, 03:11:57 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2013, 04:30:41 PM »
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waah waah kya baat hai bahut khoob hai......
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2013, 05:50:09 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB..... Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2013, 05:28:59 AM »
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मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"

Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2013, 09:13:35 AM »
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