दर्द का नग़मा निकले.............saru..........

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तमन्ना   थी   ज़माने   में   कोई  हमसा  निकले
कोइ फिर  उससे  मोहब्बत का सिलसिला  निकले

गर  है  कोई  लय  कोई  तर्ज़   ज़िंदगी  में  तो
अब दिल से मीठे - मीठे दर्द  का  नग़मा निकले

जिसे   हुआ  ये  इल्म दर्द  क्या  है  रोना  क्या
इस बार शायद  वो खुद  पर  ही  हँसता  निकले

घने  जंगलों  में  लगी  है  आग  अब  ज़रूरी  है
किसी  पत्थर  का  सीना  चीरकर  झरना  निकले

चाँद  सी  चमकती  हैं  आँखे   कजरारी   क्यूंकि
जलती  लौ  सि  अंधेरे  खाकर  ही सुरमा  निकले

कहने   को   भूल   चुके   हैं     हम   पुरानी   बात
भड़क उठते हैं  बुझते  शोलों  सि  जब  हवा  निकले

मिलने  से पहले  खुश ही  लगते  थे  लोग   मुझे
ये  क्या हर  चेहरे  में 'सरु' अक्स  अपना निकले



Tamanna thi  zamane  mein koi ham saa  nikle
Koi  fir  uss  se   mohabbat   kaa  sil -sila  nikle

Gar hai koi laya  koi   tarz  zindagi  mein  to
Ab dil se meethe meethe dard ka nagma nikle

Jise huaa  ye  ilm  dard  kyaa hai  ronaa kya
Iss baar shayad vo khud par hi hansta nikle

Ghane junglon mein lagi hai aag ab zaroori hai
Kisi  pathhar  ka seena  cheerkar jharna nikle

Chand si chamakti hain aankhen kajraari kyunki
Jalti lau se andhere kha kar  hi surma  nikle

Kehne ko   bhool  chuke  haina ham  poorani  baat
Bhadak uthate hain bujhte sholon se jab hawa nikle

Milne se  pehle  khush  hi  lagte the log mujhe
Ye kya har chehre mein  ’saru’ aks  apna  nikle


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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2013, 03:27:13 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2013, 03:28:04 AM »
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Nicee onee..
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 03:28:42 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sksainiji  
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2013, 03:30:17 AM »
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thankewww saman ji......
Nicee onee..
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2013, 03:44:58 AM »
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तमन्ना  थी   ज़माने   में  कोई  हमसा  निकले
कोइ फिर  उससे मोहब्बत का सिलसिला  निकले

गर  है  कोई  लय  कोई  तर्ज़   ज़िंदगी  में तो
अब दिल से मीठे - मीठे दर्द  का  नग़मा निकले

Bahut khoob Saru jee
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 03:47:21 AM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut 2 shukriya mkv ji
तमन्ना  थी   ज़माने   में  कोई  हमसा  निकले
कोइ फिर  उससे मोहब्बत का सिलसिला  निकले

गर  है  कोई  लय  कोई  तर्ज़   ज़िंदगी  में तो
अब दिल से मीठे - मीठे दर्द  का  नग़मा निकले

Bahut khoob Saru jee
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2013, 03:56:18 AM »
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waah waah waah behad umda Saru jee, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

तमन्ना   थी   ज़माने   में   कोई  हमसा  निकले
कोइ फिर  उससे  मोहब्बत का सिलसिला  निकले

घने  जंगलों  में  लगी  है  आग  अब  ज़रूरी  है
किसी  पत्थर  का  सीना  चीरकर  झरना  निकले

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bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai saru ji . Kya kahne . Har sher parh kar dil khush ho gaya . aap ko tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.
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khoob raha suresh ji!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 04:16:39 AM »
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kya baat kya baat, bas waaaaah hi waaaaaaah...
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2013, 06:17:56 AM »
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तमन्ना   थी   ज़माने   में   कोई  हमसा  निकले
कोइ फिर  उससे  मोहब्बत का सिलसिला  निकले

गर  है  कोई  लय  कोई  तर्ज़   ज़िंदगी  में  तो
अब दिल से मीठे - मीठे दर्द  का  नग़मा निकले

जिसे   हुआ  ये  इल्म दर्द  क्या  है  रोना  क्या
इस बार शायद  वो खुद  पर  ही  हँसता  निकले

घने  जंगलों  में  लगी  है  आग  अब  ज़रूरी  है
किसी  पत्थर  का  सीना  चीरकर  झरना  निकले

चाँद  सी  चमकती  हैं  आँखे   कजरारी   क्यूंकि
जलती  लौ  सि  अंधेरे  खाकर  ही सुरमा  निकले

कहने   को   भूल   चुके   हैं     हम   पुरानी   बात
भड़क उठते हैं  बुझते  शोलों  सि  जब  हवा  निकले

मिलने  से पहले  खुश ही  लगते  थे  लोग   मुझे
ये  क्या हर  चेहरे  में 'सरु' अक्स  अपना निकले



Tamanna thi  zamane  mein koi ham saa  nikle
Koi  fir  uss  se   mohabbat   kaa  sil -sila  nikle

Gar hai koi laya  koi   tarz  zindagi  mein  to
Ab dil se meethe meethe dard ka nagma nikle

Jise huaa  ye  ilm  dard  kyaa hai  ronaa kya
Iss baar shayad vo khud par hi hansta nikle

Ghane junglon mein lagi hai aag ab zaroori hai
Kisi  pathhar  ka seena  cheerkar jharna nikle

Chand si chamakti hain aankhen kajraari kyunki
Jalti lau se andhere kha kar  hi surma  nikle

Kehne ko   bhool  chuke  haina ham  poorani  baat
Bhadak uthate hain bujhte sholon se jab hawa nikle

Milne se  pehle  khush  hi  lagte the log mujhe
Ye kya har chehre mein  ’saru’ aks  apna  nikle




wonderful,ma'am
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2013, 06:18:17 AM »
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bahur bahut shukriya Hasan ji........yun hi hausla afzahi karte rahen
bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai saru ji . Kya kahne . Har sher parh kar dil khush ho gaya . aap ko tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.
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bahut 2 shukriya marhoom ji.....
wonderful,ma'am
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2013, 06:19:56 AM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut 2 shukriya iftakhar ji...
waah waah waah behad umda Saru jee, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

तमन्ना   थी   ज़माने   में   कोई  हमसा  निकले
कोइ फिर  उससे  मोहब्बत का सिलसिला  निकले

घने  जंगलों  में  लगी  है  आग  अब  ज़रूरी  है
किसी  पत्थर  का  सीना  चीरकर  झरना  निकले


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