वो उसका आना मुझे लूट के जाना ऐसा...

by arunmishra on December 14, 2010, 03:12:32 PM
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ग़ज़ल


- अरुण मिश्र.


वो  उसका  आना,  मुझे  लूट के  जाना ऐसा।
था   मुहब्बत  का,  मेरे  पास   खजाना ऐसा॥


हुआ अमीर वो, मुझको भी कुछ कमी न हुई।
अज़ीब  लगता  है,  पर   है  ही फ़साना ऐसा॥


हज़ार   बार   चले ,   तो   हज़ार  बार   लगे।
अचूक  बान   नयन  के ;  है  निशाना  ऐसा॥


न कोई ज़ुल्म,न ज़ालिम,जियें सुक़ून से लोग।
ऐ  काश ! आये  कभी,  कोई  ज़माना  ऐसा॥


’अरुन’  ये  गहने  गुनों के,  बहुत  पुराने  हैं।
कोई    खरीदेगा   क्यूँ ,  माल  पुराना  ऐसा॥

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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2010, 05:14:23 PM »
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Arun ji aapne bahot achhe khayalaat ka izhar kiya hai. Ek guzarish hai ke aapko behr(meter) me likhne ki mazeed koshish ki zaroorat hai. Ghazal ke liye ye bahot zaruri hai.
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2010, 05:53:46 PM »
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Mast Gazal hai aapki Arun ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo tera muskuraana,aur mera fida ho jaana aysaa
Tha jadu tere pyaar ka,Na khatm ho nasha aysaa...

Jalim teri Gazal ke jumle,hain bahut rasile aysey
Koi padhega kyu nahi,Hy Nagma naseela aysaa

ग़ज़ल


- अरुण मिश्र.


वो  उसका  आना,  मुझे  लूट के  जाना ऐसा।
था   मुहब्बत  का,  मेरे  पास   खजाना ऐसा॥


हुआ अमीर वो, मुझको भी कुछ कमी न हुई।
अज़ीब  लगता  है,  पर   है  ही फ़साना ऐसा॥


हज़ार   बार   चले ,   तो   हज़ार  बार   लगे।
अचूक  बान   नयन  के ;  है  निशाना  ऐसा॥


न कोई ज़ुल्म,न ज़ालिम,जियें सुक़ून से लोग।
ऐ  काश ! आये  कभी,  कोई  ज़माना  ऐसा॥


’अरुन’  ये  गहने  गुनों के,  बहुत  पुराने  हैं।
कोई    खरीदेगा   क्यूँ ,  माल  पुराना  ऐसा॥

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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2010, 11:42:41 AM »
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Bahut khoob Arun Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2010, 11:42:46 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Arun Ji..!!

Yun hi likhte rahiye..God bless..

Shally
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2010, 10:39:22 PM »
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Thanks riyaz ji, KOYAL ji, RAjesh Harish ji & Shally ji.
- Arun Mishra.
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