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by Raqeeb on December 27, 2014, 01:35:40 PM
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वक़्त के थपेड़ों ने मुझे आज फिर खामोश कर दिया।
मानो शोर क़े अवाज़ को खामोश लबों ने चुप कर दिया॥

वक़्त के शिकार ने जैसे इस शिकारी को ख़्तम कर दिया।
ताउम्र ज़िंदगी के ख़ुशनुमा शरारतो को रक़ीब ने छोड़ दिया॥
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2014, 06:07:16 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2014, 11:49:06 PM »
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Waah waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2014, 04:58:53 AM »
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वक़्त के थपेड़ों ने मुझे आज फिर खामोश कर दिया।
मानो शोर क़े अवाज़ को खामोश लबों ने चुप कर दिया॥

वक़्त के शिकार ने जैसे इस शिकारी को ख़्तम कर दिया।
ताउम्र ज़िंदगी के ख़ुशनुमा शरारतो को रक़ीब ने छोड़ दिया॥
Very nice. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

You can improve it by changing the last line to ' Taa umr zindgi ke khushnamaa shraarton ko radd kar diyaa.'
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2014, 04:33:13 PM »
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Good one keep going on...
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2014, 01:55:03 PM »
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