सिवा हमारे फरिश्ता न कोई आयेगा...

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ग़ज़ल

- अरुण मिश्र

सिवा  हमारे,  फरिश्ता  न   कोई  आयेगा।
हमारी  डूबती  कश्ती  को   जो   बचायेगा।।

सुनहरी फ़स्ल की उमीद  किस  बिना पे करें।
बाड़ का बॉस ही,  जब  बढ़ के खेत खायेगा।।

करो ये  ख़ुद  से अहद, क़ामयाब  होंगे हम।
न  हारे  मन, तो  हमें कौन  फिर हरायेगा??

जले  मशाल,   तभी  ख़त्म  अँधेरा  होगा।
हमीं  में  होगा  कोई, जो  इसे   जलायेगा।।

हैं  राह  ताक रहे लोग,  रहनुमा  के  लिये।
सही  दिशा  में,  कोई  तो क़दम  बढ़ायेगा।।

हो जिसके हाथ को  दायें,  न यकीं बायें पर।
उससे  उम्मीद  हो  कैसे,  वजन  उठायेगा??

‘अरुन’ शमा की तरह,खुद को जलाओ पहले।
फिर तो परवानों का,  तय है, हुज़ूम आयेगा।।

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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 04:31:28 PM »
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fir se ek anmol krti padhne ka mouka dene ka shukriya arun ji....khud shuruaat karne ka sandesh samete aapki ye kavita bahoot achchi lagi
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 05:21:50 PM »
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aapki ye motivationl poem padh kar main bht motivate hui hun arun ji...
superbb wordings and thoughts ji......
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 05:54:35 PM »
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Mishraa Jee Aadaab!

Kafi umdaa aur inspiral Gazal se nawaaza hai janab daad hazir hai...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob lage hume....

Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye...
         



ग़ज़ल

- अरुण मिश्र

सिवा  हमारे,  फरिश्ता  न   कोई  आयेगा।
हमारी  डूबती  कश्ती  को   जो   बचायेगा।।

Kafi achcha matla kaha hai aapne daad.. Usual Smile         


सुनहरी फ़स्ल की उमीद  किस  बिना पे करें।
बाड़ का बॉस ही,  जब  बढ़ के खेत खायेगा।।

Gehri soch ka muzahera diya hai janab .. Usual Smile         


करो ये  ख़ुद  से अहद, क़ामयाब  होंगे हम।
न  हारे  मन, तो  हमें कौन  फिर हरायेगा??

Bahut achcha sher hai daad...         


जले  मशाल,   तभी  ख़त्म  अँधेरा  होगा।
हमीं  में  होगा  कोई, जो  इसे   जलायेगा।।

SahiN hai janab... koi to hoNga.. Usual Smile         


हैं  राह  ताक रहे लोग,  रहनुमा  के  लिये।
सही  दिशा  में,  कोई  तो क़दम  बढ़ायेगा।।

Kia baat hai behad sahiN daad..           


हो जिसके हाथ को  दायें,  न यकीं बायें पर।
उससे  उम्मीद  हो  कैसे,  वजन  उठायेगा??

Achcha tanz hai aaj ke aaine ke chalane waloN ke liye.. daad Usual Smile         


‘अरुन’ शमा की तरह,खुद को जलाओ पहले।
फिर तो परवानों का,  तय है, हुज़ूम आयेगा।।

Maqta sab se superb raha janab daad daad daad... Usual Smile         

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Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke sath aate rahiye..

Khush O aabad rahiye
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 10:45:46 PM »
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bahut khubsurat rachna  hai Arunji
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 03:53:26 AM »
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wah wah Arunji...

bahut bahut khub likha hai..

ek ek sher ek ek lafz khubsurat hai...
dil chhuta hai.  khub
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2011, 04:39:46 AM »
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प्रिय'बेक़रार'जी,'कसक'जी,'परवाज़'जी,'कल्सुन'जी एवं'मंजुम'जी, आप सब का बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद|
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2011, 07:11:05 AM »
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Dear Misra ji,

Can you please translate Huzum?
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2011, 04:07:32 PM »
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Dear AnandPherwani Ji, Huzoom is crowd.
- Arun Mishra.
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2011, 02:32:50 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat AUr Lajawab Hai Aapki Ye Rachana Padhkar Accha Laga Arun Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2011, 07:09:42 AM »
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Thanks! Rishi Agarwal Ji.
- Arun Mishra.
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