Auron ke mahal banaata hai, per khud bhookha so jaata hai, - Beete palaon ke saye-2008

by Ram Saraswat on July 19, 2013, 03:59:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2013, 01:29:37 PM »
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lajawab creation bahut umda rhytham ke sath sath sachai se oatprot..hazaron daad 0 mubarakbaad ....salute u sir
Bahut bahut shukriya soudagarji
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«Reply #16 on: July 19, 2013, 01:44:41 PM »
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bahut bahut hi umda peshkash. bahut achchi khayalon se saji is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad...
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«Reply #17 on: July 19, 2013, 01:53:58 PM »
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beautiful ! beautifulll !!  kya  khubsurat
ghazal hai aur kitne khgubsurat qafiye aur
unka istemaal. Hats off with 1 Rau
Siddiqui Sahab,1967 mein Aftaab Hostel (A.M.U.) mein Engineering ke dakhile ke waqt naya naya tha, Ek mere senior room partner they zanab Farooq , unko Gaban Film ka Mohd. Rafi saheb ka gaya yeh geet bahut pashand tha aur wo mujhse aksar sunane ke liye kahte they . Aaj 46 saal baad fir se man gungunane ko kar raha hai......
  
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ye dil tumhare pyar ka mara hai dosto."

Bahut bahut shukriya aap ka  
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«Reply #18 on: July 19, 2013, 01:56:25 PM »
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bahut bahut hi umda peshkash. bahut achchi khayalon se saji is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad...
Bahut bahut shukriya aqshji
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«Reply #19 on: July 19, 2013, 05:30:39 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Ram ji....!!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 19, 2013, 06:55:24 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Ram ji....!!!

Bahut bahut shukriya Hridayji
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«Reply #21 on: July 19, 2013, 08:00:59 PM »
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Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #22 on: July 19, 2013, 10:33:50 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob
Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #23 on: July 19, 2013, 10:37:52 PM »
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Koi  roop  nahin koi rang naheen , jeene ka bhi koi dhang naheen
Mehnat  kar ke   khaane waala , rakhta hai jigar ko tang  naheen.

Hai  himmat  jiski  saanson  mein, meethe  meethe ahsaanson mein,
Hansate  hansate  jee  leta hai , chaahe koi bhi ho sang  naheen.

Khone  ka  gham  na  satata hai,  din raat  wo  khwab sajata hai,
Rahe  mast  malang  fakiiri  mein, kam hoti kabhi  umang  naheen. 

Aankhon  mein  jiske  paani  hai,  per   komal fir bhi baani hai.
Annyay  ko  bhi  sah  leta   hai,  karta  hai koi  jang   naheen.

Auron  ke  mahal  banaata  hai, per khud  bhookha so jaata  hai,
Auron   ki  daulat  dekh  kabhi  bhi, hota  hai wo  dang naheen.

Duniya ke liye “insaan” naheen, aankhon mein  bhi samman naheen,
Per ‘Ram’ moh “maanavta” ka, fir  bhi  hota  hai  bhang  naheen.
 
कोई रूप नहीं कोई रंग नहीं, जीने का भी कोई ढन्ग नहीं,
मेहनत करके खाने वाला,  रखता है ज़िगर को तन्ग नहीं !

है  हिम्मात जिसकी सांसों में , मीठे  मीठे   अहसासों में, 
हंसते  हंसते  ज़ी लेता है , चाहे  कोई  भी हो सन्ग नहीं !

खोने का ग़म न सताता है, दिन रात वो ख्वाब सजाता है,
रहे मस्त मलंग फ़क़ीरी में , कम होती कभी उमन्ग नहीं !   

आँखों में जिसके पानी है, पर कोमल  फिर भी बानी   है ,
अन्याय को भी सह लेता है,  करता है कोई  जन्ग  नहीं !

औरों के महल बनाता है, पर खुद भूखा  सो  जाता  है,
औरों की दौलत देख कभी भी, होता  है वो  दन्ग  नहीं ! 
 
दुनिया के लिये “इंसान” नहीं,आँखों मे भी  सम्मान  नहीं,
पर "राम" मोह "मानवता" का,फिर भी होता है भन्ग नहीं !


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«Reply #24 on: July 19, 2013, 10:48:38 PM »
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«Reply #25 on: July 21, 2013, 08:57:54 PM »
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Namaste Sir
Apne dil ke udgaaron ko bakhoobi darshaya hai aapne.
aap kitne khoobsurat vyaktitva ke maaliq hai ise padh kar pata  chalta hai.
Ek-2 shabda..dil ko cheer jaata hai. mai jaanta hun ki duniya me bahut se aise log hai jinka dil auron ke liye dhadakta hai..aap bhi unme se ek hai.

is tarz par likhne vaale aur bhi hai par vo sirf waahwaahi ke liye likhte hai..kisi ke dard se unhe kuch lena nahee.

Laajavaab...dil choo lene vaali peshkash

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«Reply #26 on: July 21, 2013, 09:42:42 PM »
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Namaste Sir
Apne dil ke udgaaron ko bakhoobi darshaya hai aapne.
aap kitne khoobsurat vyaktitva ke maaliq hai ise padh kar pata  chalta hai.
Ek-2 shabda..dil ko cheer jaata hai. mai jaanta hun ki duniya me bahut se aise log hai jinka dil auron ke liye dhadakta hai..aap bhi unme se ek hai.

is tarz par likhne vaale aur bhi hai par vo sirf waahwaahi ke liye likhte hai..kisi ke dard se unhe kuch lena nahee.

Laajavaab...dil choo lene vaali peshkash


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