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«Reply #15 on: May 08, 2010, 08:35:53 PM »
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Wah kapil ji Bhut khoob..........

Simply Kamal

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«Reply #16 on: May 08, 2010, 08:46:17 PM »
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Wow ek baar phir aapne bahut khoobsurti se likha kapil ji.heart touching creation.beautiful lines by Cara ji n Veena ji Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: May 08, 2010, 10:34:51 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim bhai... bas aap logo ka likha padh padh ke hi likhna sikh rahe hain...!!!

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«Reply #18 on: May 08, 2010, 10:35:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 08, 2010, 08:35:53 PM
Wah kapil ji Bhut khoob..........

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«Reply #19 on: May 08, 2010, 10:36:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 08, 2010, 08:46:17 PM
Wow ek baar phir aapne bahut khoobsurti se likha kapil ji.heart touching creation.beautiful lines by Cara ji n Veena ji Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: May 10, 2010, 05:17:39 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob klaskar ji.bohat khoobsoorat baat kahi aapne.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: May 10, 2010, 10:19:13 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Saurabh ji...!!!

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bohat bohat khoob klaskar ji.bohat khoobsoorat baat kahi aapne.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: May 31, 2010, 07:25:02 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 07, 2010, 11:40:43 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Veena ji...!!!

aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!! Applause Applause Applause


aasaan nahi hota har kisi k liye muskurana ghumon me,
par koshish karoge to muskaan aa hi jaati hai kai baar,
zindagi itni bhi kathin nahi ki thak jao haar ke tum,
koshish karke dekho safalta mil hi jaati hai kai baar...


zindagi ne zindagi di hai
dukh ki pahchaan sukh ki chah di hai
judai milan ki aas  di hai
jodhiyo ki shaan yehi to hai
ek ke bina duji aduri hai
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«Reply #23 on: May 31, 2010, 07:40:06 AM »
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Beautiful lines Veena ji bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: May 31, 2010, 06:03:05 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Veena ji...!!!


zindagi ne humein zindagi ko jeena sikhaya,
kaanto pe bhi usi ne humein chalna sikhaya,
aansuon se hum to mohabbat kar baithe the,
zindagi ne hi humein ghum me hasna sikhaya...

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zindagi ne zindagi di hai
dukh ki pahchaan sukh ki chah di hai
judai milan ki aas  di hai
jodhiyo ki shaan yehi to hai
ek ke bina duji aduri hai
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«Reply #25 on: June 01, 2010, 09:47:07 AM »
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zindagi ke kamal aapne sare lik diye
khoob likte ho so saaf saaf lik diye
shayro ke mizaz piro diye
char line me puri kitab kah gaye



Quote from: klaskar on May 31, 2010, 06:03:05 PM
bahut bahut khoob Veena ji...!!!


zindagi ne humein zindagi ko jeena sikhaya,
kaanto pe bhi usi ne humein chalna sikhaya,
aansuon se hum to mohabbat kar baithe the,
zindagi ne hi humein ghum me hasna sikhaya...
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«Reply #26 on: June 01, 2010, 05:27:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Veena ji....!!!


humein kahaan likhna aata hai jo hum koi kitaab likhe,
shayari kya hoti hai pata hi nahi to kaise hum likhe,
ye to bas zindagi hi hai jisse kuch kuch sikhte hain,
ye bhi sochte hain jo sikha use shayari me kaise likhe...

Quote from: veenavarsha on June 01, 2010, 09:47:07 AM
zindagi ke kamal aapne sare lik diye
khoob likte ho so saaf saaf lik diye
shayro ke mizaz piro diye
char line me puri kitab kah gaye
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«Reply #27 on: June 03, 2010, 01:53:51 AM »
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dhanywaad ji

umar badati hai sikh khatam nahi hoti
school kahatam ho gaye per path abhi hai baki
jo padte gaye padte rahe unhiki to hai zindgani
jise sab kuch aa gay awo to thahra pani

Quote from: klaskar on June 01, 2010, 05:27:09 PM
bahut bahut shukriya Veena ji....!!!


humein kahaan likhna aata hai jo hum koi kitaab likhe,
shayari kya hoti hai pata hi nahi to kaise hum likhe,
ye to bas zindagi hi hai jisse kuch kuch sikhte hain,
ye bhi sochte hain jo sikha use shayari me kaise likhe...
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«Reply #28 on: June 20, 2010, 07:35:01 PM »
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bahut sahi baat kahi hai aapne...!!!

kisi ko sab aajaye to sudhaar kahaan hoga,
har koi ek sa ho to vikaas kahaan se hoga...

Quote from: veenavarsha on June 03, 2010, 01:53:51 AM
dhanywaad ji

umar badati hai sikh khatam nahi hoti
school kahatam ho gaye per path abhi hai baki
jo padte gaye padte rahe unhiki to hai zindgani
jise sab kuch aa gay awo to thahra pani
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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2010, 12:41:18 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 20, 2010, 07:35:01 PM
bahut sahi baat kahi hai aapne...!!!

kisi ko sab aajaye to sudhaar kahaan hoga,
har koi ek sa ho to vikaas kahaan se hoga...


man ke sudhre fir tan ho maile
pragati karte jaye kante ho raah me aneke
pathik chalta jab tak jaan hai
kahi sham kahi savera chalti jab tak sanse
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