Ek Dua.....

by asif faiz on May 08, 2013, 09:00:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 11, 2013, 09:36:40 PM »
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bahot shukriya ..suman ji and Tuhina ji
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«Reply #16 on: May 11, 2013, 10:21:07 PM »
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@ Sheba ji... har insaan ka dua maangneka apna tarika hota hai...dua khuda aur bande k beech me rahti hai ..doosron ko beechme nahi bolna chahiye..main kya kahna chahta hun..ye main aur mera rab samajhta hai..log chahe jo matlab nikaale ..fark nahi padta...agar aapko mera kalamm pasand na aaye..to meherbaani karke cmnt na kariye...insaan jo likh raha hai .wo kya soch kar likh raha hai ye sirf usko pata hai..aur uske rab ko pata hai.... is tarah kisi k kalaam ka mazaak udaana theek nahi hai..aapko pasand nahi aya ...ignore kariye...
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«Reply #17 on: May 12, 2013, 04:10:13 AM »
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@ Sheba ji... har insaan ka dua maangneka apna tarika hota hai...dua khuda aur bande k beech me rahti hai ..doosron ko beechme nahi bolna chahiye..main kya kahna chahta hun..ye main aur mera rab samajhta hai..log chahe jo matlab nikaale ..fark nahi padta...agar aapko mera kalamm pasand na aaye..to meherbaani karke cmnt na kariye...insaan jo likh raha hai .wo kya soch kar likh raha hai ye sirf usko pata hai..aur uske rab ko pata hai.... is tarah kisi k kalaam ka mazaak udaana theek nahi hai..aapko pasand nahi aya ...ignore kariye...




dear asif,

salaam-alaikum -wa rahmatullah-wa barkatahu.

    mujhe muaaf karo gar bura laga. per ek baat zaroor dhyaan mein rakho. ye open thread hai aur koi bhi post karne wale ko iss gumaan mein nahin rahna chaahiye ki use wah wahi hi mile gi.

aap jo bhi kalaam likhte ho wo aap ki soch aur nazariya hai koi aap ke dil mein ghuss kar nahin dekhta ki aap ki mansha kya hai. uss kalaam ke zariye padhne wala apna nazariya deta hai.aur itna hi darr hai to phir kalaam ko soch samjh kar likho. yahaan aane wale aur padhne waale bewakoof ya anaadi nahin hain. kisi ko bhi kisi ka kalaam iss buri tarah se bura lage ga to wo zaroor hi object kare ga.

aur haan maine mazaak nahin udaaya hai mujhe aap ka kalaam meri nazar se bura laga . aap sahi honge. to apne her sher ka tabsira hi kar dein ki aap sahi maane mein kya kahna chahte hain.

khush rahiye aur ache kalaam likhte rahiye.

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«Reply #18 on: May 12, 2013, 03:43:52 PM »
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Quote from: asif faiz on May 11, 2013, 10:21:07 PM
@ Sheba ji... har insaan ka dua maangneka apna tarika hota hai...dua khuda aur bande k beech me rahti hai ..doosron ko beechme nahi bolna chahiye..main kya kahna chahta hun..ye main aur mera rab samajhta hai..log chahe jo matlab nikaale ..fark nahi padta...agar aapko mera kalamm pasand na aaye..to meherbaani karke cmnt na kariye...insaan jo likh raha hai .wo kya soch kar likh raha hai ye sirf usko pata hai..aur uske rab ko pata hai.... is tarah kisi k kalaam ka mazaak udaana theek nahi hai..aapko pasand nahi aya ...ignore kariye...



Asif jee
aadaab..Sheba jee ko diye aapke comment ko dekhkar...philhaal mai itna kahunga ki.. padhne vaale ko apne tareeke se react karne ka adhikaar hai.. agar aap aisa nahee chaahte to.. aap pahle se likh sakte hai ki aap sirf positive comment chahte hai. aapki tarz par..comment karne vaala bhi..apni soch ke anusaar comment karta hai..
meri baat ka bura lage to maafi ka talabgaar hun.
khuda hafez
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«Reply #19 on: May 12, 2013, 03:46:39 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 12, 2013, 04:10:13 AM

dear asif,

salaam-alaikum -wa rahmatullah-wa barkatahu.

    mujhe muaaf karo gar bura laga. per ek baat zaroor dhyaan mein rakho. ye open thread hai aur koi bhi post karne wale ko iss gumaan mein nahin rahna chaahiye ki use wah wahi hi mile gi.

aap jo bhi kalaam likhte ho wo aap ki soch aur nazariya hai koi aap ke dil mein ghuss kar nahin dekhta ki aap ki mansha kya hai. uss kalaam ke zariye padhne wala apna nazariya deta hai.aur itna hi darr hai to phir kalaam ko soch samjh kar likho. yahaan aane wale aur padhne waale bewakoof ya anaadi nahin hain. kisi ko bhi kisi ka kalaam iss buri tarah se bura lage ga to wo zaroor hi object kare ga.

aur haan maine mazaak nahin udaaya hai mujhe aap ka kalaam meri nazar se bura laga . aap sahi honge. to apne her sher ka tabsira hi kar dein ki aap sahi maane mein kya kahna chahte hain.

khush rahiye aur ache kalaam likhte rahiye.

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Sheba jee..
mujhe pata hai aap bahut dhyaan se padh ke comment karti hai...lahja bhale mazaakiya ho aapka..
padhne ka sahi maza tabhi hai..jab dil ki baat jubaan par bhi aaye.. healthy bazm ki pahchaan..
keep it up.
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2013, 04:11:42 PM »
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mkv ji....mujhe unke criticize karne se aitraaz nahi hai.....par jis andaaz me unhone criticize kiya wo mujhe pasand nahi aaya...." haan ..aap ki baat bilkul sahi hai..padhnewale ko apni view ko express karne ka adhikaar hai"..par cricize karneka b koi tarika hota hai..criticize karne ka matlab kisiko neecha dikhana thode hi hota hai..."

khair maine to sheba ji se pahle hi kah diya hai...unka comment karne ka andaaz mujhe pasand nahi aaya..aur isliye main aagey se is forum me apni poetry post nahi karunga...mujhe criticize hone se dar nahi lagta...
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«Reply #21 on: May 12, 2013, 10:54:59 PM »
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Asif bhai
aap ki reply kah rahee hai ki aap positive soch rakhte hai..
yun ek choti si baat par aapka naaraj hona theek nahee..
aap likhte raheN.. mujhe ummeed hai ki dobara aisa nahee hoga..
shukriya
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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2013, 02:38:17 AM »
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Quote from: asif faiz on May 12, 2013, 04:11:42 PM
mkv ji....mujhe unke criticize karne se aitraaz nahi hai.....par jis andaaz me unhone criticize kiya wo mujhe pasand nahi aaya...." haan ..aap ki baat bilkul sahi hai..padhnewale ko apni view ko express karne ka adhikaar hai"..par cricize karneka b koi tarika hota hai..criticize karne ka matlab kisiko neecha dikhana thode hi hota hai..."

khair maine to sheba ji se pahle hi kah diya hai...unka comment karne ka andaaz mujhe pasand nahi aaya..aur isliye main aagey se is forum me apni poetry post nahi karunga...mujhe criticize hone se dar nahi lagta...



main aap se 1000 baar sorry kahti hoon...! lekin main ne aap ka na to mazaak udaaya hai na hi aap ko neecha dikhaya hai.aisa aap kyon sochte ho.haan aap ke sher ke motaaliq mujhe hud darjha aitraaz hai aap apne kalaam ko kisi deeni scholor se wazaahat kar wa lein..buss main itnah hi kahna chahoon gi
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«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2013, 10:28:23 AM »
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Theek hai sheba ji..main us kalaam ko na kabhi padhunga aur na hi kahin post karunga.... mera kalaam to aapko accha nahi laga..lekin meri baatein agar aapko buri lagi hon to main b aapse maafi chahta hun.. shayad aap mujhse senior hain..aapki baaton se ye laga.. main apni galti maanta hun... aage kabhi main is forum me apni poetry post karunga ya nahi ye to nahi pata...par agar main post karun ...to main chahta hun...aap mujhe meri galtiyaan zaroor dikhayein.... mujhe bilkul bura nahi lagega... khush rahiye..!!! Allah Hafiz...
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