haq...........A..B

by adil bechain on July 17, 2013, 12:50:47 AM

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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2013, 10:36:40 PM »

Quote from: Taish on July 17, 2013, 12:58:38 AM

wah adil saaheb wah, bahut umdaa likha hai saaheb, aaj ke din meN padhi sabse ahchi kaavishon meN se ek, rawaangi aur bayaani, dono umda... yunhi likhte rahiye saaheb aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

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Re: haq...........A..B

«Reply #16 on: July 19, 2013, 10:55:22 PM »

hai haq khizaa.n ka bhi jahaan mein bechain...,
nikal kar kyon tum chaman ko hoshiyaar karte ho..,

Bahut khoob Applause

Khizaa.n aaii na gar hoti,fizaa.n hoti bahaaron ki,
mager tinke nasheman ko nahi hote to kya hota?


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«Reply #17 on: July 22, 2013, 10:27:44 PM »

Quote from: Taish on July 17, 2013, 12:58:38 AM

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«Reply #18 on: August 02, 2013, 12:54:44 AM »

Quote from: RohanSingh on July 17, 2013, 01:35:59 AM

excellent

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«Reply #19 on: August 27, 2013, 01:23:51 PM »

Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in "Aug 2013 Yoindia Shayariadab Newsletter". We hope you will continue to grace this Bazm with your beautiful words always. Comments and feedback is appreciated.


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«Reply #20 on: August 11, 2014, 07:30:55 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on July 17, 2013, 12:50:47 AM

   mujh se khataa hone ka intezaar karte ho...,
   andaaz-e-dushmani mein pyaar karte ho...,

   rahti hai nazar shaq ki hamesha mujh pe...,
   aur mere saaye pe aitbaar karte ho...,

   fitrat-e-aaina jo haqeeqat hi dikhata hai...,
   aur saamne usi ke tum singaar karte ho...,

   parwaah nahin jise tere wajood-o-hayaat ki...,
   khaa-makha uspe jaanisaar karte ho...,

   hai haq khizaa.n ka bhi jahaan mein bechain...,
   nikal kar kyon tum chaman ko hoshiyaar karte ho..,

wah wah wah !